'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Congrats fr ur first. FF.........Such an emotional updt........... awesome really liked it ..........plz add me to ur PM list..........

Part 1 ---- liked the way Duji met.......... and their closeness in the dialogue.....

Dutta could feel that constant watch of bajis and in response he answered his query.

Dutta : Aise dekhna band kar baaji…hah muje dikhta nahi hai.

Part 2 ---- Tasha 2gether in their room......... loved their convo...........

Best of all the last part and duttas dialogue..........

Naku sees that dutta had been In the same attire for some time now, worried that there would be scars under his clothing that needed dressing naku heads towards the wardrobe yet before she turns from dutta naku feels a grasp at her wrist. Turning around dutta was overlooking her… what it felt like to be touched by him was something that only could naku could know. There was fear there was embarrassment, there was emotion. more so as dutta rose and stepped closer to naku how she would die to be in his arms. As he got closer naku could feel hear heartbeat thud..the feeling within give away and her eyes dropped to the floor. Dutta kept a strong grip of nakus wrist…with a pause he spoke with that particular tone to his voice.

Dutta: " Sirf Ek baar keh di thi tu naku… shahab gale laga lo.."

Plzzzzzzzzzz do PM when u updt............. updt sooooooooooooooon.......

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Suraya

@Ruya

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Very nice start
Hope u update soon and plz add me to ur pm list
Thanx

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Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

V nice FF. Please add me also to ur PM list.

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey jagrutid

beautiful FF

i so love it !
beautifully written !

plz add me to ur pm list plzzzzz:D

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

wow! luvd ur ff gurl!! plz pm me nxt tym up update.x

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Omggg.. Awesomeeee updates!!!
Love it.. the second chapter was so gripping.. especially at the end wer he says " Sirf Ek baar keh di thi tu naku' shahab gale laga lo.."

i guess next chapter will be their long awaiting hug.. lol

Please pm me when you update... please 😳

aw thank you ever so much glad you enjoyed it and yep yep next chapter i think will see nakus wish being fulfilled. will be sure to pm you when i update next..again thank you very much!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
Congrats fr ur first. FF.........Such an emotional updt........... awesome really liked it ..........plz add me to ur PM list..........
Part 1 ---- liked the way Duji met.......... and their closeness in the dialogue.....
Dutta could feel that constant watch of bajis and in response he answered his query.

Dutta : Aise dekhna band kar baaji'hah muje dikhta nahi hai.

Part 2 ---- Tasha 2gether in their room......... loved their convo...........

Best of all the last part and duttas dialogue..........
Naku sees that dutta had been In the same attire for some time now, worried that there would be scars under his clothing that needed dressing naku heads towards the wardrobe yet before she turns from dutta naku feels a grasp at her wrist. Turning around dutta was overlooking her' what it felt like to be touched by him was something that only could naku could know. There was fear there was embarrassment, there was emotion. more so as dutta rose and stepped closer to naku how she would die to be in his arms. As he got closer naku could feel hear heartbeat thud..the feeling within give away and her eyes dropped to the floor. Dutta kept a strong grip of nakus wrist'with a pause he spoke with that particular tone to his voice.

Dutta: " Sirf Ek baar keh di thi tu naku' shahab gale laga lo.."

Plzzzzzzzzzz do PM when u updt............. updt sooooooooooooooon.......

hiya! thanks for reading and adding your feedback to ...feels like a warm welcome for my ff.😊
its not actually my first ff...ive written a number of ffs just not for this forum..so its something im used to. something told me to write one for ltl and so i did it..glad you enjoyed it and its nice to know there were specific lines that you liked.
to be honest the second chapter was floating around in my head for a while and so i had too put in in an ff otherwise god knows what i would have done.
anyway.. thanks again ..will be sure to pm you when i next update.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Ruya
Very nice start
Hope u update soon and plz add me to ur pm list
Thanx

thank you very much will be sure to pm and again thanks for the lovely comment!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kiran255
Hey jagrutid
beautiful FF
i so love it !
beautifully written !
plz add me to ur pm list plzzzzz:D

thank you very much for reading and commenting on it...really nice to know you enjoyed it! hopefully you will like what is to come to. will be sure to pm you when i next update