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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey girls../guys, its nice to be back and to be honest this article about the return of dutta has made it even better! (I'm going to think along the lines of..seeing the positive in this article.)

Anyways..going to start of by thanking you all for your lovely comments and also for waiting for me!..

Ive responded to all your comments so far below..sorry if ive missed any..(99 sure I haven't!! )


dg0628

Thank you very much for reading..and yep I guessed you topped the race to comment first. Thanking you for all your dedication. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Duji controtation…I think..i would call it more conversation! I think baaji was totally going for the whole ruthi biwi..thing. (worked as well I guess.)

Yep your right..tashas was quite a uneasy…confrontation..kind of depressing in a way..but then I wanted to take the emotional route rather than sticking with the usual lovey dovey moments!.

Don't worry I don't think the friction will last long..i think duttas working on that one..and yep ive kind of gone very traditional ltl..with duttas wounded entrance..but I think you will that the next update has a heatly balance of my flavour as well.

Ok…thank you very much..will try to update soon. Goning to leave it there for now..bye!

zMishy

Hiya..aw nice to know you enjoyed it..thank you !!!

Will try to update very soon.

Sophia21

Hey! Thank you for commenting..and yep I guess dutta was a little harsh and he is to blame and this time I agree with you/.. – bitchari naku!! L

But you cant say that hes not trying.. to make up for it. Lol as for baaji I think he just likes the attention and more so I think he is used to this from dutta..he knows him we. And kya kare hein cant stop being his hyper..chamchi self..

As for there distances..they wont last long…next update..will take the whole thing to another stage which I hope you will enjoy.. thanks again..will update aspap.

buttbhai

thank you very much your comments are …always loved!! And your too kind with you words..glad you enjoyed the update..will try to update soon.

Inosh

Hiya!! Aw thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed the last chapter..personally I did feel that I could have written it a lot better was in a rush that's all. Hmm as for the whole situation between n/d yep..i was too thinking of buriying this …at that point..but then this event has brought out so much potentional… for more tasha..so then..i decided to strech it little in the hope that u guys will enjoy what is to come..

Hummm as for the bruised shoulder..yep I guess ive gone for quite a trational scene that's be used lots in ltl but I think you will find that It has my own trademark on it .. (so I hope anyway..) As for baaji..and dutta I guess they have a very deep and genuine friendship..i really like baajis character for it provides the more lighter ..funnier moments in the ff.

Anyways thank you..will try to update soon.

droopy_asleep

aw thank you very much glad you enjoyed the last update..yep I guess nakusha was saddened by duttas words and she told ..him..in her own way. I think dutta has already softened having understood what nakusha Is going through so yep I think ..hes probably going to try and make up for his harsh..words.

vahgar

hiya…thank you very much for reading and commenting and what more can I say ..you are far too kind with your words! – honestly..when a reader tells me that they can imagine my ff ..or picture it.. that for me is success..so thank you very much. My aim is always to potray what I picture in my mind when I'm writing.

Lol..i think the bit where nakusha and baaji walk the corridors before entering duttas room was my frav bit too.. i really like the small moments …I think sometimes they are more touching..and give off far more than huge..incidents or changes in story. – glad you liked it!

Hmm ..yep I guess nakusha took it much more seriously..and im sure dutta will try his best!

mnx12

thank you very much glad you enjoyed the update! Please keep reading..nice to hear from you.

-Ritz-

aw thank you very much ..nice to know you enjoyed the update..bk now so will try to update soon..

eternity_of_luv/divya

hiya..thank you very much glad you enjoyed the update….and thank you for wating..will try to update soon.

mIsHeZ.x

hey! Yep been on holiday..but back now and yep I missed you too.

will try to update asap..and ive been filled in about this ..buzz ..artical..fingers crossed is all I'm thinking..

kiran255

Aw thank you very much ..and please don't worry about commenting…its nice to hear your feedback..but you read and like my writing that's enough! So thank you. –yep Im back..give me a day or so and you will get an update. Recovery time I guess. But thank you very much for your update…love you comments always and the way in which you highlight the areas you enjoyed..really useful when I am writing so thanks.

Lol… baaji and nakus..conversation in the corridors..! you know what I didn't think anyone would pay much attention to that bit ..but It looks like you guys really liked that and that was my frav bit too..! .. and yep I guess dutta can be scary..to be honest I think If someone shouts at you….i think everyone goes through that rutha..wary to approach type phase. And yep ..naku backed out anyway!! J

As for baaji I guess he got it over and done with!..and he was truly the ruthi biwi..type..and dutta totally expected it from him.

I think dutta and baaji have a friendship that covers so many different levels because baaji knows what dutta is like ..bad tempered.. stubborn..and I think sometimes he just wants to..see his friend in dutta shri ram patil..without the bhau status and that's what he got here. And all in all ... baaji is back to himself ..the fact that he tells dutta that nakusha is outside …just kind of shows the attachment he has for them..he wants to see things get better so he does what ever he cans within reason.

As for the dutta and nakusha interaction..i think that was a little rushed yet..im happy if you guys liked it!! in this part of that chapter I had to think twice over the words I used ..duttas words were a good example… he kind of told nakusha that the door was open..yet he didn't invite her inside..that was her choice . very good to know you like that whole scene of tashas..all good then.

I think one thing I tried to put in there was the way dutta knows she is crying..kins of shows the love he has for her..he doesn't need to see her to know how she feels ..all my lines were written to tell you what each of them where thinking…for nakusha…she tells him that she doesn't mind him..taunting her..even beating her if she is wrong yet..she did no wrong..and I think that's what she was hurt by. – and with that line dutta understood..what she felt.

The next scene ..in the morning.yep..your right..just to show that she is still devoted to him..nakusha carries out all her duties ..yet doesn't come before him ..that kind of stresses the extent of the matter and the prashad moment was there to show that dutta respects her decision..and doesn't come before her.

Now ..the bit at the end where naku waits for dutta..is the begging of the next chapter..hopefully you will like it.

Thanks and omg look at how much I have written!!!! Sorry. – will update asap.

Shreeya1

Thank you very much shreeya.. glad you enjoyed my ff..yep kind of don't really write ffs..well gave up some time ago yet some one these guys from i.f pestered me and so here I am. Nice to here from you..keep reading.!

Krishaa

Thank you very much for reading and commenting..updated now so I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Ok…friends! will try to update soon…give me a day or so…and thanks again.

Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
Iridescence1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
jag...yup me waiting ...for ur flavor filled update ...tasha filled ...i will be dreaming and waiting lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
^ ^ ^
i second u daya...jaldi karo na pls...
...jag hw was ur holdiay?? n wer dd u go.x
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Posted: 14 years ago
will try my best girls...im currently trying to finish off another ff thats been running for god know how long..so after that... i will write it..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

will try my best girls...im currently trying to finish off another ff thats been running for god know how long..so after that... i will write it..

hey ddnt kno u wrote oda ffs...wa r they cald...wich forum??
can u not post them on ere...jus chnge d main charatr nme 2 tasha lool😉😳
wud love 2 read it.x😳
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Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

hey ddnt kno u wrote oda ffs...wa r they cald...wich forum??

can u not post them on ere...jus chnge d main charatr nme 2 tasha lool😉😳
wud love 2 read it.x😳



yep i might do that actually...ive written quite a few actually. they are on the first page of this ff if you want to read them ..but i can tweak them a little to fit ..ltl if you want and then i will post them..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid



yep i might do that actually...ive written quite a few actually. they are on the first page of this ff if you want to read them ..but i can tweak them a little to fit ..ltl if you want and then i will post them..

YES PLSEASE...neki aur pooch pooch LOL ... that wud b d best thng eva...gee i cant wait 2 read them...but wil strt readn afta 9th may...wen i finish examz lol otherwise wud want2 finish em asap...😉Embarrassed😆 awww jag i love u...ukno dat!



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ukno ur ff...unki shidat se...reminds of dis book my mum reads LOL...i totaly love this ff name...so romantic...




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Posted: 14 years ago
@Missy wow honey kya khaya that aj , ur brains are working awesomely and

@Jagu that woulkd be great :D
mIsHeZ.x thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

@Missy wow honey kya khaya that aj , ur brains are working awesomely and


@Jagu that woulkd be great :D

kay wa u tryna say...ey...kya meri brainz waise wrk nahi karti😛 LOL
waise i ment 2 b revising na...so energy hai uske liye...lekin woh sab yahan use kardi 😆😆😆😆
btw kay u read urdu books/novels??

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