'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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Azy

@-Azy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#271

thanks for the PM , will come back with my comments

BTW thank u for the looooooooooooong update!!!☺️

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Anupama

@anupamas2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

nice update. Thanks for sending the PM.

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

hey jagruti,

thank u for the PM......

lovely update and such a long update............ very nice to see the weaker D n the stronger D with regards to N........ it was really nice to read the update with this cute little boy n baaji.........

will wait for ur next update..........

tc
divya

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buttbhai

@buttbhai

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#274

hi jagruti,nice update enjoyed alot waiting 4 another.

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Shally

@shally_m

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

very nice update 😊😊😊😊

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

hey jagruti

very very long and lovely update dear..love it
so they wanna be parent na nice

love baaji and chottu scenes and nakku's and baaji scene at balcony .
love to read dutta and nakku's relation and their love, really appreciable

very beautiful update and thanks for pm dear

looking forward

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: dg0628
res :)

* Edit:

Sorry that took a while to edit .....had an exam :D hiya..no worries hope your exams went well.

Wonderful parts....i loved the entire interaction with Dutta and Naku .... ...thank you very much, i think you guys wanted a more naku and dutta orientated update so you got one.

from the anger/bedroom scene to the ripping out buttons..... ...i think the update went through some drastic changes in emotion..kind of covered..everything from pain..humor..love and innocence..well i hope it did anyway. nice to know you enjoyed it. kind of wanted to write something that everybody would enjoy or at least enjoy some parts of it.

oh the guitar and singing thing 😳 very well written 👏👍🏼 ...aw thank you..i actually really enjoyed writing that part of the update..kind of was nice to write about a more soft side to dutta.

i could just picture it all :D ...that is the icing on the cake for me so thank you.!

I loved all the dialogues and gestures 😍 very good :D .,aw good so i didnt bore you then??😕😉

Baaji was cute but not too much of him ...... ...does that mean you would like more of him..i think baaji kind of plays his part where he needs two..now he has a little friend to keep him company too..im not too sure about where this chotu character is going to lead too..but i hav one or two ideas..😉 that of course i cant reveal right now!

and why do i think there is going to be more to this kid than what it seems like????

great update.......................please update soon and thanks for the pm :D

....thank you very much will try to update soon.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#278

Originally posted by: rubal223
unko jaldi parents bana do

what can i say.. you'll have to wait and see what happens...😉 but thank you for reading...feedback is much appreciated.

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

Originally posted by: dc17-7
hey jagruti,

thank u for the PM......

lovely update and such a long update............ very nice to see the weaker D n the stronger D with regards to N........ it was really nice to read the update with this cute little boy n baaji.........

will wait for ur next update..........

tc
divya

thank you very much.. long..got carried away i guess.. yep i think all sides of dutta were shown in this update... thank you very much for reading..its nice to know you enjoyed the update..thank.you.