FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 55

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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant Update....
RS, GD and Leela's plan brought them closer... They are one now. She can't reject him and he will now stand by her. He's already acting like a husband. That's so sweet of him!.
I feel sorry for Kala but Im happy she refused to accept gaurav back, Can't believe her own father telling her to "Adjust" with him! And ofc AS voiced her opinion which is great. She shouldnt just sit there and watch her so called husband ruin her daughters life!
I wonder what kanta said to Dutta...
Now that TaSha has consummated their love, they can get married right?. I mean this is the right time.
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!! Really enjoyed. Now thay have become 1, pls don't seperate them pls. Hope they will fight together. Thanks tin for the lovely update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous updt, Jayati........... mindblowing...........
AS supporting Kala .......... shacked all of them even Kala.......... bcoz bfore even if she wanted to she could not speak up fr any of them........... OMG!!!! Nakku jst cant stop thinking of Bolt......... she is already missing Bolt.......... all that she can think of is Bolt........The ETs plan bought Tasha 2gether......... The wau Dutta was taking care of Nakku like a hubby would take care of his wife......... He too jsy couldnt bear to see Nakku in this pained condition......... he was really worried fr hr......... they consummated and r one now............. Luved the way he said in the last...... Dutta whispered into her ears…abh tu meri ho gayi…in my house, in my room and on my bed…now we are now one…aur yeh baath tu nehi bhulegi…....
Superb updt ,dear........... cant jst wait to read ur weekend special..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update tinni.......what an awesum line.."Nakusha will make this my home"............it was mesmerizing u kno......da way dutta was thinking how nakusha became da special person in his life.........now plz don separate them....as they r one body one soul now...let them face da ET, hand in hand.........feeling curious abt what kanta told dutta...........waiting wid baited breath for da weekend spcl.....take care
Edited by Juni17 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great work as us usual dear..just loved ur fanfic to bits..the 1st thing I do when i log onto the forum is read ur update.....A big fan of ur writing....Wow Must say RS GD and leela's plan certainly brought nakku n dutta close n i m loving the way AS is supporting kala ..I wish whatever Kanta told Dutta was about bolt n how GD n Leela put forward their plans against bolt n nakusha:) Hoping Dutta marries nakusha n introduces her infront of everyone during a racing season party as her wife giving a big Jolt to GD Leela n RS..I want RS n the rest of the 2 evil ladies taught a lesson😆
Edited by meghaparti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tins no words dear just no words woooooowwwwwwwwww!just wow! 👏👏
awesome update u know this was an anounced, unexpected a mind blowing update i am just he he he gigling all the way! 😆😃
i was amazed through out the update the dialogues u used 1st when D met his cousin & D thinking who'll pay the helicopter bill that was hillarious.
Tins what makes me angry is D is better than his cousin but bcoz guari covers her son verywell but RS doesn't & he thinks he is better but i feel soon all will b out!
2nd kala thinking india is indep. now so her dad is no more raja wow i wish she reminded him of that loudly surely that would have woke him up & would have stopped his nonsense about classes!😆
Tinscoming to the most fab update which gobsmacked me unexpectedly tasha became one woooooow!
and u done excellently just fab i didnot c any comment straight to the update here i kept on reading vola there it was i had to read it again to c if i am right yest. vandu & pooja said it is time 4 tasha to get married & i second them. but noway did i expect this fast amazing😍 what was awesome about it is what D said afterwards Dutta whispered into her ears'abh tu meri ho gayi'in my house, in my room and on my bed'now we are now one'aur yeh baath tu nehi bhulegi'. just mind blowing kudus to u u r too good Tins u put it beautifuly the whole thing their silence their embrace & the realisation of naku feeling at home with D just fab. now we can have peace with out thinking will they ? or not? whatever comes they can fight it together wow i canot wait 4 u to take this to another level & to c tasha meeting chupke & finally D fighting 4 his love & his sis and mom!😊 tanx alot 4 the awesome spsl update dear & 4 making it longer sorry dear i got carried away pls cont. can't wait 4 sat spsl greedy me sorry!😳ps:Tins will we know by tommorrow what kanta told D becoming noisy ha? ha ha!
Edited by bfunofbb123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Jayati,
Thanks a lot for such an awasome update.
Though like Vandu, i wanted them to be married soon,but the way u handled their union,was so soulful & blessing for nakku.I don't have words to describe what i felt.Both of them holding each other & not letting go in the fear that this moment might go away.I was bowled over by how dutta hold on to her till she finished with her crying.I also liked how he fed her all the while she was rambling.Already he has started fulfilling duties of a husband😍.The last lines of dutta & the song just made it emm i can't find the exact word.

This Gaurav irritated me😡,good Kala left him.But,what took me by surprise was AS supported Kala's decision of not going back to Gaurav.She indeed has decided to stand by her children thru thick & thin.I really laughed when RS was going on about him being raja & Kala just did not respond & left😆.

If that female RS was not enough,now her son has entered.But,good dutta is not fond of him.

I am really admiring kanta.She is indeed helping dutta & nakku relationship.But,i am wondering what she told dutta?Can we get to know in next update?
Also,now D-N has taken their relation one step further,i am wondering what will be the reaction in haveli,when people will get to know about it.Are we going to get some surprise by u before actual racing event😉?

Have a nice day.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry
I had written a whole lot of things which i wanted 2 convey 2 u...but lost them all ...
Hav no patience 2 rewrite them all..
I like ur witing ..plz do update regularly .keep up d good work..n
PS:i like d attitude of TaSha in ur FF..
Love
Shweta




Edited by Shweta_Dutta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jayati🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update"s and PM🤗
Omg that was a plan of Gd and Leela😡....I hope everything goes well with bolt...iam feeling soory for naku .........poor her ...so much she has to through life 😭...anyways happy that dutta is there to support her ....
Awww she is thinking herself as unlucky
Omg They consummated there marriage😳......wow now they are truly a couple in every way ..there heart ,mind and soul connected😃.....i wanna see them married😍pls don"t make us wait ...
btw iam happy that kala didn"t accept gaurav back ..and AS stood up for kala...awesome yaar ....👍🏼
thanx yaar ..u rock as always...can"t wait for weekend update ....
Love and Hugs
suhana🤗



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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 38, Weekend Spl
(Two weeks later on the day of the opening of the races)
The roads leading to one of India's oldest and richest race courses were decorated with balloons and festoon lights, lending a festive and joyous air to the atmosphere. The season's first races were to be held today and the whole of Patilwadi was done up in carnival style, with people thronging out on the streets dressed up in varying style, traditional, modern, wild and sober. There were also the inevitable, jugglers displaying their tricks, vendors selling tidbits, singers holding impromptu singing concerts, bands playing their latest. It was the biggest event of the erstwhile Patilwadi Estate, and the locals still prided on a sense of tradition….

The owners of different banners in their vintage cars mostly, once again decorated in the variety of styles rolled through the streets, waving at the crowds, the first car was Raja Saab's dressed in the colours of his banner, with a top hat sitting relaxed at the back seat of a 1920 Rolls Royce convertible. Ayi Sahib was besides him in a sari in the Patilwadi colours, her pallu covering her head and looking happy for the first time, waving excitedly at the crowd very unlike her demure and quiet self…

Yes, the whole of Patilwadi could see the change in her, her eyes no longer lifeless and dull, her smile no longer stiff, but rather a sparkle which lit up her face. It was a first for her as well as she was partaking in the grand celebrations for the first time in years looking very much an integral part of the show…..And, the people of Patilwadi also knew the reason for which Ayi Sahib had, truly, become a part of their lives and joys in the way she radiated a sense of belonging. So much had had happened in two weeks and life seemed to be running a course that none of the occupants of Patil Mansion would have ever dreamt of and she beamed at herself when she reminisced about the turn of events.

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(The morning following that night)

Nakusha opened her eyes in the morning, looking up the ceiling to find her bearings in a room which seemed strange for a few seconds. She then saw the curved back of Dutta next to her and, hurriedly, for a pulled up the sheet to cover herself. Dutta turned next to her, putting his arm around her, making himself comfortable…..

Naku looked at him and felt a rush of colour while trying to free herself from his grip gently without waking him up….

Dutta opened his eyes to see Naku wriggling to free herself from his grip, he tightened it more….

Kya kar rahe ho, chhoro mujhe….

Itna subah kaha ja rahi hai?

I have to go and get ready for duty….

You don't have to go for duty anymore….Dutta whispered ….

Just because I killed Bolt…..Naku went stiff.

Dutta sat up, and held her face in both hands. "You did not kill Bolt, flush that thought from your mind…."

Toh mera idhar se chhuti, what do I do sitting here….?

"From today onwards", Dutta started: "You have a much more important mission to complete, the one that will, hopefully, secure the release of your aunt . Advocate Sen is already here…you will take him to your aunt, my office has lined up an appointment with the jailor….

Aaj hi a gaye, he said he would come ….

Haan idhar koi aur kam se aye the, so he asked if he could meet Kalpana Rao too as he was, already, in this part of the world…..Nakusha stared at him bemused that this man who until a few days back was the perfect stranger had managed to touch the inner chords of a life that still connected her to her family that she missed every day but still had to carry on

Dutta stepped out of the bed, without bothering to pickup his clothes he went towards bathroom…He smiled inwardy as he thought of how natural Naku's presence felt in this room. "This is the life I have always yearned for, to wake up every day set my eyes on the one person I will cherish for life. Naku grabbed this opportunity to dive out of the bed and started picking up her clothes. She dressed up quickly and tried to tidy the bed when Dutta came out tying his bath robe….

What are you doing….

Making the bed….Naku replied, the bed was real big, mattress too thick for her to tuck…

Chhor de Kanta bana degi….he picked up the intercom to order breakfast for two….

Two? Naku squeaked…why did you ask for two?

Tu nehi khayegi? You hardly had anything yesterday?

Mai…idhar…I am leaving this room now….

And going where?

To my room….Naku, finally, managed to cover the bed with the bedcover and ran towards the door

She stopped right in her tacks when Dutta, quietly said: "Kala Tai is not an early riser and Gaurav is definitely not….

He is here? Naku stopped

Dutta did not reply, instead made himself comfortable on the sofa, and mentally smiled "most probably not but I am not going to tell Naku…."

Aja baithja…breakfast karle mere saath …

What do I tell Ayi Sahib...Naku was now looking, visibly, uncomfortable as the last nights' event sunk with each passing minute…. a sense of trepidation creeping up in her mind as to how her nominated benefactor as chosen by Kalpana Auntie would react.

The same thing you told me yesterday in my ears
Naku blushed…
Dutta leaned forward pulling her down next to him, dekh Naku, I never have hidden my affairs from anyone but then you know your position and I will feel very hurt if you try to hide it….Naku lowered her eyes, he lifted her chin and gazed into her unblinkingly….
Lekin Raja Saab….I mean he……
Dutta stated very firmly, don't worry Nakusha just trust me and for heaven sake stop trying to run away…..
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Wearing his red jacket over his white trousers, Bajirao waited at the portico next to his trademark jeep which was decorated with red and white balloons. The clicking of heels caught his attention, he straightened. Roopvati, came out wearing a red and white polka dotted dress, red high heels with a very fancy red hat…..and burst into a smile when they saw each other, Roops extended her hand to Bajirao who kissed it like a gentleman and, gallantly, led her towards the other side of the jeep, ensuring that she comfortably seated. He came back to start the jeep and drove out of the Haveli to join the carvinal outside to the road leading to the race course….
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Dutta watched his car driving out with Nakusha, she will pickup Adovocate Sen from the hotel on her way to the jail, from the window Naku gave him her nervous look…Dutta smiled, giving her a flying kiss….God, this girl who was behaving like a tigress a couple of days back has suddenly has become a pack of nerves, effect of love?

He turned to walk towards the Haveli to see his mother coming. She had seen the interaction for she was giving him a big smile…with a mischievous glint of approval in her eyes. Dutta scratched the back of his neck and returned the smile a wee bit shyly….but faintly reassured that somehow, his mother seemed happy. Ayi Sahib went to sit with the villagers….
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Dutta walked into the Haveli to hear the voices of Raja Saab, Tai Sahib, Kareena and Jagat…they were laughing over some joke, he walked towards the smaller dining hall where an elaborate menu was laid out, Raja Saab sitting at the head of the table looking very happy and pleased to be surrounded by his own people….Leela was, personally, attending the breakfast service.

Dutta come and join us…Jagat called out. He, reluctantly, walked towards them but, first kissed Kareena on her cheeks and then his aunt putting his arms around her neck…..Oh my baby, Gauri Devi, gave him a good squeeze, just like old times….she kissed his cheeks ….Dutta straightened….

Err I will have a cup of coffee only, just had my breakfast with Nakusha….Dutta added as a matter of fact…..

Nakusha? Jagat asked….

Hmmm my fiance, the girl who agreed to marry me finally….The second that ensued seemed like an eternity before Raja Saab burst out. ….
(Friends, as you know AIW will be celebrating its 1st birthday on 21st Feb, hence trying to manage my time, hence a short update, I hope you will bear with me and join the celebrations like always ;) Love Tin )

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