FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
Tanx alot tin's 4 the awesome both updates sorry 4 late reply was busy yest. tanx alot dear 4 updating reg. even when the situation is diffic. in the form O god how many more of this crap news of MR leaving r we going to take but we should not let s/thing like this bother us lets hope they r not true!
coming to the update wow i am over the moon 4 D put leela in her place. what does she think to come before his mother i love how he said at the end i'll wait to hear from AS that u appoligised šŸ˜†what a slap in the face. & naku guming around kolakata tanx for taking us to ur home town Tins it seems lovely place & i am jelous u having this picnics u must have a good weather here in england we r stuck with cold weatheršŸ˜” i ca't even imagine to go picnic but i am glad u had a good time!😃 oh D is furious with N 4 not informing him. i can't wait 4 their show down Tins ye kya hay we r starving of tasha in the epi & in ur ff too pls replace kala-naku time with D-N time we want more tasha plssssss!
tommorrow make them sit down & clear the MU tank u Tins u really cheered me up i am afraid o come to the form incase of more bad news but me kya keru i can't stay away & must read my morning dose with cup of chai tanx tcšŸ¤—!
@ vandu don't worry haan God willing we'll win this time too i think someone is jelous of our forms happiness keep spreading this rumours don't give in to their lame attempt! cheer up@allšŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks for the update Tin.. No tasha again today.. sigh...

You mentioning the various places in Kolkata brought back some good old memories. It's been 3 years since I went there, but do love the city. I feel it is one if the safest cities in india for women..and wow, the street food is amazing ;-P

Baaji toh donon tarah se phasa.. he has to help Naku and now with bhao knowing he knows about Kripalani before him has made him mad .. bechara..kala seems a very capable lady and Adv Sen seems an amiable man. At least not someone who can be arm twisted like Krips by Raja sab.

Nothing to add on Leelu and Gauri. They are progressing just as I expected them to LOL..kuch log kabhi nahin sudhrenge!

Hmmm.. Dutta is not angry, he is livid.. and he feels Naku is not interested. And he holds himself responsible for not knowing about Roop's racing banner as he feels he has been too wrapped up in Naku. Hmm.. I don't blame him at all. Naku will not know what has hit her when she sees him next. Waise I have a problem with Naku.. ok, so he was not reachable on phone as your ego got hurt when you heard Kareena's voice.. but how could you just ignore the guy who has done so much for you. Could you not have waited up at night to tell him before trotting off to Kolkata. Ek raat der se soi toh pahaad nahin tooth tha.. Or even that morning, she could have asked Kala to wait a few mins and updated Dutta if she wished to let him know.. so no excuses from Naku is gonna work!

But I am not liking this withdrawal from D even though can understand why he is doing this. I would hate to see a MU between them..enuf negativity around as it is sigh..Just wish Naku's ego doesn't come in her way.. she needs to make amends and she needs to let him know she does love him.. if not explicily, at least enuf actions or words so that D knows and does not feel she has no interest..

@Divya - I understand completely how depressing the whole mood is. What I did yesterday was that I read a few of my fav parts from my fav FF .. just the tasha scenes and trust me my mood got a lot better.. so try that.. read an FF with beautiful tasha scenes and you might just get the spark back in your day :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update TIN,šŸ‘ want tasha scene please,,, no sher in the epi today ,, atleast aap ki taraf se lovely tash scene hojay😃e and let leela get sick in bed for days,, lord that women , 😔.. ohh kala is such a darling,, 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 30

As Rishi left the room Dutta sat still oh god what is happening to me, I had to hear from an outsider that my own sister has floated a banner, once again an outsider informed me about something going on in my own home…..yeh kya ho raha hai, the girl is clearly not interested and then why am I running after her wagging my tail and in the process getting alienated from my world?

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Ayi Sahib signed the letters Lekha had placed before her….Lekha announced she was going for lunch, Ayi Sahb sighed….she too had to entertain Gauri Devi now, Raja Saab was busy and Gauri Devi had lunch with Ayi Sahib did not look forward to…

Entering her parlour she saw Gauri Devi already sitting and doing some work of her own….Ayi Sahib greeted her…she barely acknowledged…Ayi Sahib picked up a magazine when Leela came pushing the lunch trolley…Ayi Sahib sat immersed into the magazine, she knew Leela now personally comes to serve them in order to be in the good books of Gauri Devi….

To Ayi Sahib's amazement Leela handed over the plate to her first…Ayi Sahib glanced towards Gauri Devi….

You carry on Madhvi, I will just finish this report I am reading, I have to speak to my son after lunch….

As Ayi Sahib accepted the plate…Leela spoke

Ayi Sahib I ….I am sorry for not handing over the keys of the store to you when you went into the kitchen….I realise I should have….

Ayi Sahib was surprised, what is wrong with Leela…is she by chance apologizing to me? After all these years…..She stared at Leela not understanding how to react….

I should have but then I did not want to hand over the keys in Nakusha's mercy, my mistake is when you entered the kitchen I should have done it….but….I was too upset….

Well Leela I think Madhvi understands your point, we all do, how well you have managed this house….Gauri Devi took off her reading glasses…

I am glad you realized it Leela but yes if the children want to indulge once in a while, I think this house can afford it….Ayi Sahib found her voice

Leela's temper shot up…give a chance and now she wants me to tell me what I should be doing…..

Gauri Devi indicated her to cool down, she has her own household under her thumb, she knows how to manipulate and to what degree…she never liked Madhvi the classless girl whom her parents chose as a wife of her brother..nothing in common….

Leela took a deep breath, of course this house can and it won't happen again….

Ayi Sahib gave a stiff smile….

Leela left the parlour with her head held high….

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What did he say, Kala asked as she combed her hair in the washroom…

He did not answer the phone…Naku frowned…

Must be busy, he has to choose the jockeys, select them

Jockey?

Hmmm the persons who will ride on the horses we want to race….

Oh..achcha I see…

Kala looked amused tujhe kya lagta hai, Baba and Bhau will ride on them…..

Naku giggled no, I mean I never thought about it…..

Jockeys are also very important, to get the right one and pick them up before others do…abh chal jaldi kar, my friend should be waiting, lets have a quick bite and I want to pickup a few nice dresses from the shops I know ..they have this beautiful embroideries done, speciality of this area…before we take the flight back home…

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Mora Piya... Mo...ra Piya
Mora Aa Aa Aa ...... Piya Bolat Naahi
Mora Piya Mose Bolat Naahi
Dwaar Jiya Ke -3 Kholat Naahi
Mora

Mora
Pi Ya....

(aise Na Mose Pher Najariya
Dekhu Suratiya Akhiya Uthaake) - (2)
Tujhase Lipat Ke Mar Jaayungi
Jaane Na Dungi Baiyaan Chhudaake
Bedardi Tu.....
Bedardi Tu Pir Jiya Ki
Kaahe Ko Bujhat Naahi Haay
Mora Piya Mose Bolat Naahi
Mora

Pi.... Ya....

Walking into the stables next morning, Naku greeted Bolt first thing, rubbing her nose with his…then went around wishing all the horses her greetings, tying her musk, wearing the gloves she got ready to work, yesterday they returned quite late and her eyes were swollen due to lack of sleep, first ride on a plane to a new city, meeting new people, buying new clothes, she really had a good time and today she had to makeup for her absence…

Just then Dutta entered with some men, Naku greeted him just the way she did in front of everyone in the mornings, he ignored….kept talking to the men, all quite shorter then him, having very light weight, Naku noted the similar physical appearance and then heard Dutta saying be careful I don't want you weighing more than 55 kgs, come to the office and lets get you weighed…they walked towards the office….

Nakusha carried on with her job, she was given some more responsibility like supervising the fodder mixing etc as part of the charts given by Baji to her….they crossed each other more than once and everytime Dutta was looking elsewhere….Naku got busy, she had so much to do ….

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Kareena gave finishing touches to the invitation card design for the opening ball which Gauri Devi had asked her to make… It was a very easy task for her but then she made with the colours of the Banner the Patilwadis used….her aunt was a difficult person to please but then as she turned around the fortunes of the family, she demanded respect, Kareena was taught from childhood to adhere to her wishes….

Completing the design, she got up putting it inside the folder for Gauri Devi to have a look, she skipped towards the stables, oh how she wanted a ride…


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Naku was updating the charts inside the stable when she saw Kareena walking in…a gayi chipkali…she said to herself….trying to ignore her pretending to be very busy….

Hello….Kareena greeted….

Ji…Nakusha replied…

Can I take one of the horses for a ride….

Well I am not sure, you see I am only the stable hand and since Bajirao and bh..Bhau Sahib are out in the meadow I think you should come later …..

I am a good rider…..

I am no judge ….I can hardly ride….

Can you handover a saddle please….Kareena asked politely enough….

Naku was getting irritated, as it is she was managing alone, compensating for the holiday she had taken…..

See Maam, these horses are short listed for racing season, I am not sure if you should ride them….

Kareena looked around, picking up a saddle herself she started buckling one of the horses, oh what the hell, thought Naku…I have told her and now it is upto her…

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Kalavati stood scanning her text messages, she frowned and then deleted shoving the phone into her bag forcefully….taking out her packet, she lighted a cigarette with shaking hands….

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Nakusha heard voices, so they must be coming back after the evaluation…she carried on with her work when a voice barked next to her ears literally…..

Baji what the hell is going around here…haven't I told you that no horses now short listed should be taken out of the stable without our permission…..

Ji Bhau Sahib….Naku, Baji called…..

Ji Baji Bhau Naku came forward …I had told her, Nakusha now glanced at Dutta but she said she is a good rider....

Dutta once again ignored her and glared at Baji …..who is she to judge….I want my orders to be strictly followed…

I am no judge …I told her that too but she did not listen to me….Naku quickly added

As far as I know, Kareena is not a deaf or dumb girl, theek se agar boli hoti, she would not have done it…..Dutta stomped off towards the direction where one of the jockeys was bringing the horse back….

Areh vah dosh koi aur kare aur daant pare mujhe….Naku muttered

Chup ho ja, upar ka hawa abhi garam hai…aur uski waja tu hai....

Me ….how? Nakusha fell from sky literally….

This is how that you did not inform him about your reason for going to Kolkata and at the same time did not warn me not to tell him….

I did call him up but he was busy….Nakusha replied….

So? Baji shrugged….

And then Kala Tai said…..

See Naku, you might have your reasons, mujhe kuch nehi kehna hai but then that man has stood up for you many times, itna toh haq uska banta hai…Bajirao looked real pissed off going inside his office….

Nakusha stood watching Dutta inspecting the horse ….no wonder he was avoiding her since morning…

Nakusha went upto Bajirao's office….

Toh abh mai kya karu?

Mai kya bolu…Mana le…issme tera hi faida hai….

How?

Well how you have to find out how…and now let me finish some of my work, a lot is pending….

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Raja Saab admired the card made by Kareena….

She is talented isn't she….Gauri Devi asked….

Hmmmm…very nice….

And here is a portrait of Dutta she sketched the other day….Gauri Devi sipped the wine….

Raja Saab inspected it….I will get this framed, tell her I am very pleased …

Yes of course Bhau….not only talented but a very capable girl…..

Hmmm…Raja Saab still inspected the portrait….Dutta looks so like me doesn't he…..he commented….

Yes of course thank god for that ….atleast in this regard God has been kind to you….

Raja Saab agreed nodding his head….

Raja Bhau, after we deal with this girl, I think you should get Dutta married quickly…

There was this girl called Seema, quite a nice girl, her father is also my business partner lekin….

Jisko chhor diya, do you think Dutta would want to go back to her? Gauri Devi sounded impatient…

No I guess not…..

Isiliye I suggested….I have brought Kareena for you to see…you have seen her growing up, now she is a fine young woman and we are also looking for a nice family for her……Gauri Devi held her brother's eyes….

Hmmmmm

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Naku was feeling tired after doing two shifts but then even Kala Tai is of the opinion she should speak to her Bhau…see Naku I only wanted to help but then you have to makeup with Bhau in your own way…..

Naku shifted on her feet to be more comfortable when she saw Kanta coming out of the kitchen with the tray….Dutta was back and he wanted his dinner….

Looking around to see if anyone was watching, Kanta handed over the tray to Naku …Naku climbed the stairs with a thumping heart….he atleast deserves this much, Bajirao said, Bhau ko tujhe hi manana parega Kalavati agreed…..softly knocking on the door, she waited for sometime before entering his bedroom….

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Kalavati was drawing a plan for an office space she had selected for herself …it was a nice place with a upper storied of the house also available..Kala wanted to shift out from the Haveli, she could not sit endlessly licking her wounds, she has to move on in life, enquiries are coming in and she has to get moving….

The door opened, Naku entered….going to the bed she flopped down….

Kyu re mana liya Bhau ko, Kala asked ….

Apka Bhau itna besharam hai….

Hai hai itna agar besharam hai toh tu idhar kya kar rahi hai?

Nakusha did not reply, she buried her face into the pillow….

Opening the door of the bedroom she saw no one…keeping the tray down on the table she stood trying to hear some sound, she knows he has come, she had heard his footsteps and banging of door…

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Dutta wrapped around the toweling robe coming out of the shower, shaking the water from his hair he walked into the bedroom to see a figure standing on the other side of the sheer curtain in the sitting area…he gritted his teeth..yeh Kanta has the habit of loitering around but then the long plait got his attention….Naku…itna meherbani kyu? He came out pushing back the curtain, sitting down to inspect the dishes, picking up the soup bowl…ignoring Naku's presence….

The other day I went to Kripalini's office, his secretary told me he is no longer interested in my aunt's case…

Datta took a helping of the chicken salad …

I called you up to inform you so you were busy….

Did I not take your call? Dutta asked picking up the salad plate….

You did but you seemed to be busy…so I thought of not disturbing you….

Hmmm isiliya apna phone bhi off kar diya…..

Well when I told Kala Tai about it, she remembered about this advocate in Kolkata whose home she had done…and Kalatai thinks that ..Ra..I mean Raja Saab might be behind's Kripalini's withdrawal so told me not to discuss it with anybody in the house till something is not fixed ….

Ok I accept I am nobody of the house aur Bajirao is the one without whose permission you cannot go toh abh mujhe kyu bata rahi hai?

Mujhe toh jana tha, permission toh leni thi….

So you had taken, had a nice trip to Kolkata and now what ?…maine kuch puchha tere se?…kuch kaha?

Advocate Kamal Sen said he is ready to fight for my aunt….

Toh mai kya karu? Mujhe kya karna hai….

He is coming day after for a meeting with us….

Am I stopping you?

Us means you too…

Dekh Naku…you wanted to fight for your aunt, abh tu jane, I am busy, mere pass time nehi hai….

You are angry because you did not know but I did call you up first….

And I had taken the call…I did not tell you I am busy….you assumed I am busy….

I heard woh chipka…I mean Kareena's voice…so I thought why disturb…Naku made a face, kya admi hai, not even dressed properly …she kept looking at the ceiling….

Is she jealous by the way?

Stop staring at the ceiling when speaking to me, look at me….

I can't… you are not properly dressed….

Ha agar pata hota tu a rahi hai, mai burkha pahen ke baith ta….

Well I wonder what Kanta gets to see when she comes with the food…

You have some problem with it…I think I am over dressed for my bedroom…

Toh mai Advocate Sen se kaunsa time bulo…

Woh tu jane…he picked up the next item…..

I …er I have committed to give him payment for his appearances….

You have a job, you earn so you pay…what is the big deal in that….

How much salary do I earn for my job, abhi tak toh ek paisa nehi mila…

Salary you get at the end of the month and you can ask your Baajibhau the amount any time + lodging and boarding free….

Naku hesitated, Kala Tai had her own problems and she did not want to ask for another favour, specially when she has some of her own problems, that means Ayi Sahib…her jewelry …oh god mai kya karu….and what if Kalpana does not agree to it anymore…she too can change her mind

Naku turned towards the door….

Kaha ja rahi hai….

Since you are not agreeing let me see what else I can do….

Teri marzi, but then since I promised Kalpanaji I am ready to meet but there is a clause…

Clause? Sarth? Kya sarth…

You have to promise me not to keep me in dark in the future …..

Nehi rakhenge…Naku beamed promptly…

And to seal the deal..you have to come and kiss me on my lips…..he added casually between his helpings….

Kiss? Naku squeaked, thinking if she heard him right….

Hmmm..on the lips …..

Kiss and….

Now Dutta looked at her…and if you want to go all the way I will not say no….

Naku glared at him …mujhe aisa koi sarth nehi manni hai….she turned to leave…

Teri marzi lekin sarth wohi hai….

Nakusha went to Kala's room and buried herself in the bed….

Kyu re Naku, mera besharam bhau ne kya kiya tujhe…Kalavati asked….

Kala Tai …I think….we have to see some other way to get Advocate Sen to do the work….

Kala looked up from her laptop…Naku let me tell you one thing, much as I admire your aunt, at the moment I must get back to my career….I have to establish my new office as there I worked from home I mean had my office in Gaurav's house itself….I have selected a property and now I have to shift there…set up a new office….I have established a contact with the new lawyer now ask Bhau to help or do it yourself…

Naku pulled up the sheet covering upto her neck, remembering the half dressed man eating calmly and telling her his 'sarth' to help her…how much is he serious about it?

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Edited by tintiny - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Omgggggggg😳 Finally TaShaa!!!...

Ok ok i will leave everyone out..!! concentrate only on TaShašŸ˜†...
Awww he kept ignoring her.. well she deserved dat even doe she did call him .. Im so glad baaji told her he atleast had the haq to know.. he's damn ryt😃...
And wooohooo she FINALLY decides to go manao him.. good idea!..
Sheeeeshh she goes in his room for dinner, how sweet.. just like a wife would došŸ˜‰.. (waiting for that dayšŸ˜†).. And der he comes.. in towelšŸ˜ and LOL he thinks it kanta ben... šŸ˜†.. but then it turns out to be his nakku... Oh tlking bout kanta.. shes getting nicer aint she.. she even gave the tray to nakku .. aww😳 Bless her.. i take all my words i said bout her in the beginning bakšŸ˜†..
And she starts explaining without hesitation.. love it..!!.. 😃.. And lol .. he still playing hard to get.. even doe munda pehle se hi pass gaya lolšŸ˜†..
And Finally he asks for a kiss to seal the dealšŸ˜³šŸ˜†... n LOL he doesnt mind if it gets outta control.. besharam kahin kašŸ˜†..
Well now that kala is moving out soon (i dnt want her to go.. nakku will be a bit lonely.. she was a great support system for her) .. anyway.. i think Nakku will have to kiss him.. šŸ˜† BUT i want her to kiss him cause she wants to.. not because of the deal😳...
And there she goes dreaming about him... Ohhh i cant wait for the next part nowšŸ˜†..
Awesome update Tin😃 Loooove it!
Waiting for 2morro Thnk god its not weekendšŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tiny, you made my day with this update. Awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved ....awesome updt...........
Luved the way Baaji and Kala say Nakku should manaoo Dutta......... so Dutta was avoiding her........... luved their indirect convo in the stable too............luved the Tasha part very much ......... especially their convo............ cant wait fr 2morrow updt............
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Awesome update Tin, loving the jealous nakku......
could'nt help but smile at the tasha scene in today's update.....
looking forward for tomorrow's update...... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update. Not in the serial but atleast we have some tasha romantic!!! With nakku we too day dreming!
Thank god its not weekend :D.
Loking forward for tomorrow!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbbbb update yaar............
so naku is trying to manofying duttašŸ˜† n he was all the while avoiding her n finally saw her in his room ,he ask for kiss..........OMG dutta was hilarious ,he ask for kiss n that too on lips😳............ hmm................ he had soo much of guts that's wat i wanna say................looking fwd...............

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