FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 47

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Posted: 14 years ago
(Friends, running out of ideas, so I am going round and round, please bear :P )
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Kareena disconnected the phone, it was her parents on the line asking her well being, she told them she was enjoying herself, which was partially true, yes it was good to meet the Patils after a long time but then after initial euphoria of meeting, things have become mellowed down, Roops is busy with her college, Kala Tai with that girl Nakusha and Dutta…with his work and of course Nakusha factor is also there….the way he reacted seeing her riding one of the race horses…she is not a novice and she is a responsible girl but the way Dutta reacted seeing her…yes Kareena was terribly hurt, she wanted to leave and go back to her home but then her aunt will not go without celebrating the opening of the season…well she did not need to tell her parents, they knew something was wrong but where Gauri Devi was concerned nothing could be said….

A matter of few days beta…..her mother left the rest unsaid, she knew the word was - 'adjust', ….her parents were doing that their whole life, first with Gauri Devi and now with her sons….they make our life tension free and what a life it has been, Kareena thought sarcastically.

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Dutta was crossing the lobby when his mother called out….

Dutta, beta….Ayi Sahib stepped out of her parlour

Ji Ayi Sahib….he stopped….

Naku told me about Kripalini and she says she fixed up a new advocate with Kala's help…Kala is busy today with her own work, so Naku has to go to the jail to inform Kalpana Auntie and fix up a date…toh mai keh rehti if you can take her beta ….Kalpana auntie likes you…..you can also make her understand…..

Dutta looked past Ayi Sahib to see Naku peeping from the parlour….

Ayi Sahib I am ready to help, I told Nakusha but then I do have a clause….

Clause ? Kaisa sarth beta….

Nakusha knows about it…don't you Nakusha? He called out….

Nakusha came out….Sarth toh advocate se milne ka laga tha….Nakusha replied with a grumpy face….

Oh is it so? Then you got me wrong….it pertains to the whole affair of your aunt….

Beta kaisa sarth?

Naku bata de, ussi se puch lijiye Ayi Sahib….

Errr ….Ayi Sahib actually....Naku stammered…she could see Dutta's eyes twinkling trying to control his laughter….

His Ayi Sahib, poor woman looked distressed, she really wanted to help her teacher….beta maan ja, she turned towards Naku…when he is ready to help Auntieji, no clause can be bigger than this cause….

Nakusha frowned hard and Dutta took leave from his mother saying he has people waiting for him outside….walking towards the stable Dutta had a hearty laughter by himself….

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'ShiBajirao Racers' Roopvati handed over the colours of the banner to Rishi…I am very happy that you chose to ride under our banner…

Yes Patilwadi is a big banner to let go, you spoke to me first and Bhau Sahib said he will not bargain with his sister…

Roops gave a stiff smile, yes he won't……she looked past Rishi to see Bajirao walking across holding a horse…she sighed, today it should have been that they, both standing side by side should have handed over the colours to Rishi, instead of her standing in one corner of the vast meadows of her father's house….

Rishi put on the jersey, Roops clicked a picture, Baji had suggested her to invite Kala Tai, Nakusha, Kareena for the ceremony, I cannot attend, I am employed with Patilwadi and it is not ethical, ek toh tera sara kaam mujhse hi karwa liya tu ne….but then that much I can do for a friend…

Only a friend….Roops asked raising her brow…

Dekh Roops I think you should at least have a word with Raja Saab…..he should know it now….

He knows…doesn't he….

Well not officially and he had not agreed to it….

Yes and if you cannot stand next to me while we hand over the colours, I want nobody else…mai akeli hi theek hu….

Bajirao had nodded his head and walked away…..Roops knew he felt helpless and now she has a dream, Baji loves horses and yes she wants to set up her own stud farm, not for her sake but for Baji's…today Baji works here because of her, she knows it….of course Bhau is very much depended on him but then Baji does not like to carry on his affair with her behind everybodies back…he feels guilty…

Rishi, Roops came forward to shake his hand, this will be my first season, if we do reasonably well I promise you that you will ride my horses as long as you want in the future, I know what it is for a person like you to give up Patilwadi banner….

Thank you Roopvati, yes Patilwadi is very big but what is life without a few challenges…bowing deep Rishi took his leave…

What is life without a few challenges…yes Roopvati will establish her own Banner and yes she will face all obstacles, 'we will overcome'…Roopvati breathed deep to calm down her thumping heart…

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Kalavati stood in the hall of the house she had rented….she inspected the place once again trying to imagine her design fitting into the place, the colour coordination she would do for the walls…finally my own own office, she thought….yes her father has a lot of property including commercial ones around this area but no she will now stand on her feet, when the landlord of this building asked her why she of all people is interested in his house, she said I like the view from the veranda, surprising the landlord for being a local he knew what the Haveli was like…but then these people were crazy, kuch ajeeb hi hote hai, Kala came outside to stand on the veranda, beyond a road there was a small pond of the municipality which had a nice garden, with benches, in the morning and evenings, people jog on the jogging track….Tall trees on both sides of the road….hmmm nice very nice, I cannot wait to shift, she locked up the door going towards her car, she already started making a list of things she would require to make a makeshift arrangement for her to shift immediately….

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The sky was overcast due to some depression in the Arabian sea, Naku went about doing her job in a similar face…she was upset…she had thought when Ayi Sahib says he could not say anything but agree lekin yeh toh kuch jaidahi smart nikla, today she had called up the jail, the Jailor said yes permission of meeting the lawyer for Ms Rao is no problem, it is her constitutional right madam but then the NGO she is associated wants to file the appeal to move her case to the higher court, please deal with them, after all there can only be one appeal but who will file please discuss and finalise between yourselves, I am telling this to you as I got to know it and I am personally her ad…never mind just take care….then Naku had to call up the NGO office to say she is moving to court on behalf of her aunt…..

Lekin abhi takh toh aap ne kuch kiya hi nehi…Sudha Tai, the secretary of the organization sounded upset….

Sudha Tai, I cannot tell you everything over phone, mujhe aap se mil ke baath karna hai….

I am going to the city today, if you can come down and meet me….

I will…..

Well she was going to meet Sudha Tai and still she does not know what kind of commitment she could give…everything was in place but the link missing to bind them together….

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Dutta looked at the sky…no they were going to have some unseasonal rains…but today they would handover the colours to the jockeys selected…it was quite a party…normally they had it on the lawns but the sky….Dutta watched Naku putting Bolt back to his barn, she was avoiding him, very smart, ja ke Ayi se complain ki….well tell Ayi the clause also….tabh na maaza ata….he was enjoying Naku in a fix…Bajirao came out of his office, carrying a sample of the jersey…displaying it before him…

Hmmm looks perfect but now I think you should tell Leela to make the arrangements inside, it is going to rain I feel ..the atmosphere is very still….

Hmmm…I also think so…….

Baji bhau mera ho giya hai, mai chalu…Naku asked Baji…..

You have updated the charts….

Ji….

Theek hai ja….

Tu kaha ja rahi hai? Dutta asked…she should be present for the presentation ceremony….

Aap se matllab…Naku walked away in big steps….

Baath kya hai, abhi tak dosti nehi hui? Baji commented….

No …usse mera sarth manjoor nehi hai….

Sarth kaisa sarth? Baji asked

Dutta shrugged and asked Baji to convey his wishes to Leela regarding the change of venue…

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Roopvati placed the sash of 'ShiBajirao Racers' on her dress..today she wanted to walk down wearing it and see the expression on the faces of her father, brother, sister…everybody… but then is today a good day…if not today then in the race course but then it will be a big shock and her baba is not going to like that for sure…

Kalavati combed her hair, the diamond on her ring finger sparkled reflecting on the mirror…Kalavati frowned, bringing her hand down she noticed the engagement and the wedding band she wore for the last 10 years, she never realized she was still wearing those…she pulled them, they were fixed, picking up the cream bottle she dabbed a little and forcefully took them out….her hands shivered, tears wanted to spill….

Tai, I am leaving …will be back at the earliest….

Jaida der nehi karna, the presentation of colours will start…Baba is very particular about time…

Ji, bus gayi aur ayi…..

Naku ran down, one of the trucks going for supplies promised her to give a lift till the city, Ayi Sahib would have given her car but then Naku hated to take favours more than necessary, coming back was not a problem…she heard the sky growling as she crossed to the waiting truck…..

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Dressed in the colours of the banner Dutta sprayed himself with a perfume when his mobile beeped announcing arrival of a sms…picking up the phone he opened the sms..it was from Naku…I am going to meet Sudha Tai blah blah…ok so she has decided to keep only one part of the deal and that too from a safe distance…

The noise of the thunder reached his ears…looking at the watch he got out to go down ….

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Posted: 14 years ago
My Spot!! :)
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Hum ideas dede? TaSha ko jaldi milao.. LOL😆...
ok so kareena doesnt seem interested with them.. she wants to go bak.. Good.. she's most welcome to go.. 😃 lol. But if she's gna b cupid between TaSha den she can stay but within limits😆.
OMG😲 Dutta is such a tease!.. Infront of AS as well 😆.. So Nakku went to tell AS to ask Dutta to drop her and he still need a kiss to seal the deal😉.. N munda finks it wud be fun if AS finds out lmao😆.. Bechari Nakku, kahan paas gayi?😆.
Aw Roops wants to set up her own farm.. for baaji.. dats well cute!.. She really loves him n he feels guilty bout the whole thing! I wouldnt blame him.. So Kala got a new office already, guess she will b moving real soon.. Ouch ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
Ohh Nakku needs to go meet sudha tai.. n ofc Dutta needed to go along na? i hope he goes with her.. she can seal the deal afterwards lol😆.. I almost cried when kala were literally digging her finger lol to take the ring off.. cream and all.. 😭 and she even had tears.. she acts so brave and less bothered infront of everyone but she's actually quite broken.. feel bad for her... Ohhh Nakku atleast kept one of the promises.. she wudnt hide anything from him.. great.. n shes going to meet sudha tai alone in that weather.. Im sure (hoping) Dutta would follow her just cause of that thunder... what could be a better outing for them? they would be alone, have time to talk.. understand each others feeling n she can complete the deal.. Alone outside haveli😳😆..
Great update.... Waiting for the next oneeee 😍😆
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reserved ............ superb updt.............
Kareena not interested , wow!!!!!! ......... she better leave or act as an cupid to Tasha to unite...........So now Nakku approached AS to escape the clause........ Dutta is hell bent with the clause.......... Roops wants to start a stud farm fr Baaji......... so sweet.......... Kala ........ feeling sad fr hr........ she is completely broken frm inside.......... Hope the company of Nakku givs her sum relief......... So nakku is going to meet Sudha Tai alone......... then the thunder......... unseasonal rains..........Hope Dutta goes with her.............
U want sum idea......... I think Dutta should follow her and in this way they can hav a openheart talk and seal the deal as well........and we can hav romantic Tasha............... But sure when they cum back frm this romantic date RS will do a hungama with GD frm her side to add to it............ then Nakku can shift with Kala to Kalas new home.......... more further I too hav to think......... Maybe Roops will be fired by RS fr the new banner............looking frwrd fr 2morrows updt...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm running out of ideas Tinni I know I'll give you a couple how bout TASHA KOH MILLAH DOH
And how bout give dat Leelu some payback on behalf of Ayi Sahib and talking bout Ayi Sahib hiw bout giving her a backbone so she can stand upto dat stupid husband of hers and Hus pompous sis Gauriii addviii Lol
Nice update lived dcway Dutta was teasing Nakku in front of AS plz update tomorrow I'll let u off on Sunday but nit tomorrow plzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey superbbbbbbbb update yaar...........
dutta was really naughty with naku.....................it was nice.............n he was adamant to get kiss from naku😳..................... hmm interesting............i hope naku will understand dutta soooooooooooon....................looking fwd..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
kiss in the rains....and admission of love from both dutta and nakkusha...thts wht i want...nice update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jayati,
How about nakku get stuck in the rain somewhere & dutta goes to bring her back safely😉
BTW,this female RS is officially on my hate list from today.😡
I felt bad for Kareena,& more than her even for her parents.
Bechari nakku,uski trick fail ho gayi😆,ulta AS ne usko dutta ki shart man lene ko kaha.Poor AS,doesn't know how naughty her son is😉
I liked roops confidence.
Oh,Kala 😭,she is hiding so much pain inside her.
Pls. next update me leave all these family out, & let it be just tasha.

Have a nice day.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Tin...

....Everything was in place but the link missing to bind them together….

This line is so apt to describe Naku-Dutta rather than naku trying to find the resources for kalpana aunty! Seriously everything is in place, if only she left her akhad behind and just confessed. The poor guy has already proposed, though I do wish that he does get a bit more romantic and verbal this time about his feelings. Though for a man to announce in front of all his family was just awesome and nothing would beat that for me.. but I guess a confession in private to Naku is much needed if only to calm her nerves and not give her ideas as to whether he really means what he said and what the purpose was in telling everyone and that the purpose is only his love :)basically both need to tone down a bit, more so Nakku and need to let their guarad down and let their hearts speak.. sighh

Hahahaha.. baap re, Ayi ke saaamne bhi nahin jhukha.. Dutta is too much.. he really can get under Naku's skin here teasing her mercilessly, but I have a feeling that beneath that teasing he does really want her to come close to him na..ok, now if she has a problem ego/akhad whatever in admitting her feelings on her own, he has given her an open invitation now and the ball is in her court. He is so open about his feelings, wish she also let got this time...at least it is heartening to see Dutta smile and think of Naku without having negative thoughts like whether she is actually interested or not!

Arre tin.. u running out of ideas.. let me just give you a few pointers though I really don't think you need them after reading the part today.. phir bhi..

1. Baaji-Roops relationship can go forward a bit more, but hope that doesn't stagnate Dutta-Naku relationship though

2. Itna achha mausam.. let her get stuck.. she can tell him via SMS hi sahi she will be late and not plead for help, but he can go to her na.. and waise she can be scared of thunder too ahem ahem..ab aage kya confession karna hai, kaise sharat puri karni hai is upto you ;-P

3. I would love to see Baaji establish himself on his own, rather than with Roops.. is that possible?

4. more tasha scenes please

I can totally understand the state of kala .. very sad.. a decade of your life later you realise the rishta for which you gave everything was just not there anymore..but she is being brave and carrying on..

Hmmm.. lagtha hain this party will be a shocker.. From Roops new entry to racing circuit being official, and maybe Tasha being a reality (please), AS will be ready to faint, from happiness I hope seeing the chosen life partners of her kids..

Absolutely great that Kareena cant wait to get out.. good for her.. she seems a level headed sort of girl.. so, hmmm.. she also got a good scolding from Dutta for riding the horse!

C'mon Nakku, I thought you were a sherni, kya bhegi billi ki tarah chupke se kaam kar rahi hai..just cannot face him and so u sms him huh?! I could so picturise Naku peeking in from the parlour when he was talking to AS and her mortified face when he asks her to tell AS the sharat and bechari AS also giving consent for her to adhere to his sharat .. hahahahhaha

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Posted: 14 years ago
Dear Jayati,
What is life without some challenges? You said it yourself through Rishi, the jockey that Roops has signed to fly her banner in the upcoming races' season and very sensible too.
As I said in my last post, Nakusha will have to take the challenges heads down as Dutta does not seem to entertain any doubts as to his feelings for Nakusha. And I love this suave, flamboyant teasing man who is just what Nakusha needs to open up and assume the privileged position that being Dutta's wife will confer unpn her. Just imagine, kitnon ko apni aukad yaad aa jayegi, particularly, Leela, Gauri Devi and even RS for that matter. They have done enough to suppress real happiness and a family atmosphere in the house whilst clinging to their pseudo royal attitude.
We now need those refreshing winds that have already started blowing over Patil Wadi to go unhinge all these bolted doors, blow the cobwebs of inhibition and reinstate warmth and a proper sense of kin in RG.
To aap Roops se shuru ki jiye, ya to Kalawati ki nayi utsah ko badhaye but please let us see Nakusha responding to Dutta's playful goading and shock the life out of him.
Itna to aaj ke liye kafi hoga. If not just let us know...But we want love in full bloom and what better time than the thunderous weather which could be the premise for a beautiful relationship to take off and fly the challenges of time and nature.
Luv,
Kavita
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi jayati....

wat yaar... ur superb in writing......n u going out of ideas..... naa.....

ok, i think dutta has to follow nakku, then at least they wil get time to speak n b together.... n nakku wil b in a fix as she has her work n she has to b with him if he follows her............ n once they speak, their love will soon take over...... i am sure....😆😆 wat with dutta being so persistent n a complete despo........😆😆😆 but u know what, i feel r dutta is just playing around just to enjoy seeing her in a fix........... but when she is ready for the clause, he will just peck her on her forehead i think...... n then probably will wait for her to give in....... watsay?😆😃

poor kala........ she is alone..... but i feel if she is alone, she wil get out of it soon..... rather than anyone there to sympathize n make matters worse......... even if nakku leaves n joins kala, naku is not that kind to persistently intervene in kala's personal matters, so probably they wud benefit by staying together....... n rahi baath dutta ki.... he will always b welcome to his tai's place n some privacy also....... for himself n nakku.....

u know what, u hav to go ahead with ur writing in ur style....... r style is not good enough for u dear.... u r too good to ask us for ideas..... so waiting eagerly to c some nice tasha moments for weekend...

tc
divya
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