FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi TIn thanku for the update, IF U DO NOT WANT ME TO COME IN OR CHASE U , USE THE MOBILE,,very nice naya flirting line lagta hai re, and this kirplani, hope he does not get vipin in troble, plus ayi saheb,
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Posted: 14 years ago
very small update...me not satisfied....*Shilpi pouting with folded hands on chest.*....kal guntantra divas hai...republic day...publuic day....so public demands should be met......so meet our demands for a longgggg update plzzzzzzz....
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Posted: 14 years ago
FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tasha scene was awsome yaar......😃 😛 AS & roops was also nice. and yes like the how dutta orderd leela to shift her. oh no now vipinji is for sure in troble ye kripalini apana muh band nahi rakh sakta?????????😡 and dutta is too protective abt her loved it too much want more babes😛 now i'm very much greedy. oh how cute that comment i'm adult!!!!! but update was toooooooo short. kal sabse bada update chahiye plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😊 i'm addicted to u r ff
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Posted: 14 years ago


"Mai kholke? Mai kya kholke baithi rahungi"…OH that was hilarious🤣 .............yup I agree wid my frndz here......it was a short update....as u kno we ur "fanz" always asking for more.....but truly amazing at da same time.....tasha scene was so good i end up reading it 10 times in the first go 😍.........looking forward for tomorrows update............take care Tinni

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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 18
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hey jayati...... god bless u for writing such a wonderful story..........

ur update is superb......... i like everything...........happening around........

rs comes to know of the case.......... mmmmm........ so, there is going to b tension around the house once he is back n also realizes that dutta has allotted kala room for naku.........

oh god....... the tension btw dutta n naku is fantastic........ oh, so now i m eager to read tomorrow's update dear.............

he is demanding her around now.......... good, he is so not like his father i feel........... n he warns her to use her phone......... wow.......... that was so cute.........

waiting for tomorrow.......

luv n tc
divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jayati🤗
Thanx alot for the wonderful update 🤗
Raja saab is really annoyed with everyone"s behaviour😆....Omg that lawyer is big mouth can"t keep his mouth shut...I really hope Vipin doesn"t get in any trouble coz of this....
Awww AS - Roops watching LTL 😉awesome ...i hope there bond gets stronger .....
Omg Dutta stormed into naku"s room😉...He so protective of her ....iam loving it alll ....
iam loving the nok-jhok btw them 😉....Gosh this leela is really annoying ...can"t she follow orders..somebody fire her😡.....Wow dutta wants her to stay in Kala"s room .....
Awww the update was short yaar...i wanted to read more.....waitin for tomorrow now...
Loved the update 👏👍🏼Thanx yaar...u take care and see ya around....
Have a wonderful a day!
Love and Hugs suhana🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Jayati,
very nice update,but a slightly short one.
So becaz of kriplani,Vipinji & in turn AS will be in for some trouble.
I really liked Dutta-nakku convo,to me their nok-jok already started o seem like Hubby-wife.
I can see a hint of envious dutta.
I like AS-Roops watching LTL together.
Hpoe to see next update a longer one.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Jayati.. I concur with all that kitna chota update jee nahin bhara.. pata hain today I did not even need the alarm, I woke up well before hand cos I wanted to read ur FF.. and itna chotha tha and I was left wanting for more.. lekin even though it was short, I am happy you gave us so much Tasha :-)

The kholke baithi scene was hilarious..pata hain from day 1 I knew D never liked her hair in a bun, even before you made him speak that out in the meadow, I just knew it as somehow u conveyed that thru your writing..poor nakku, trying to sketch her parents and brother.. that was touching..arre wah she is one sherni to speak her mind esp about the house being like a mortuary and then trying to shut her mmouth!! How endearing was that?!

I think you read minds dear.. only yesterday I was thinking of asking you whether you could make Dutta laugh and you nearly did today ;-P he could not hide his laugh at Nakku's frankness.. all in all a very endearingly sweet encounter and left me wanting for more.. arre,uss leela might have come flying on her broom as soon as she knew D was calling from N's room.. D really speaks his mind and this will be put in full use against his own dad when he speaks up for naku soon.. poor vipin bhai, lagta hain ab kaafi kuch hoga kahani mein.. maybe Naku decides to leave after she comes to know all the trouble she is causing people and D will realise.. cant wait!!

Hmm.. Roops kaisa jhooth bolti hain aayi se.. ki mein gaana sunke aa gayi kamre mein.. ab bolo itna intense SR scene when FR was happening and Dutta nearly choking Nakku on screen, kaun sa gaana baja tha episode mein.. I am sure Aai ko pata chala that she had come to meet her only and was using a lame excuse to cover up!!

Aur naku ko AS's son ke bahu thoughts aate hain toh kuch hamse bhi share karo, I am sure all of us here wont mind hahaha..also Dutta definitely has tried phoning her many times, hmm, isliye he is saying ki phone use kar otherwise will come in person.. hahaha.. I prefer the face to face meeting, so go naku go, be your usual sherni and don't use the phone!

Oh I am loving this possessive, slightly jealous, lost in her Dutta.. keep it going forever!

As Shilpi said kal chutti hain, toh for next 2 days can we expect a longer, Tasha filled parts please. (wide eyed pleading muh)

Vandu

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update ..... getting interesting

you should update on sundays ..; i miss your updates badly
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Posted: 14 years ago
😛 Thank you friends for the lovely comments, tomorrow I am going out for picnic early morning and will not return till late evening so there might be no update day after...kal kya hoga kal dega jayega 😉

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