FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ... nice update tin, you left me wanting for more........ waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
U r making da story interesting day by day.........its jus like reading a book......but u will be updating tomorrow also kno??.......i kno i am asking too much as u r a regular updater.....but i am getting worried 😕.....as u titled this episode as "weekend special"....... plz plz update tomorrow also........it will be really difficult to wait for a whole day.😊 as u kno ........Nakku n dutta r on a verge of another interesting meeting...........take care
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Juni17

U r making da story interesting day by day.........its jus like reading a book......but u will be updating tomorrow also kno??.......i kno i am asking too much as u r a regular updater.....but i am getting worried 😕as u titled this episode as "weekend special".......

Sundays I do not update Juni, and next update will be on monday provided I get to write something over the weekend😉 Have a nice weekend 😃 LOve Tin
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tintiny

Sundays I do not update Juni, and next update will be on monday provided I get to write something over the weekend😉 Have a nice weekend 😃 LOve Tin


Its ok dear...😊.....i guess wait will make da update more sweet.........u too .hav a nice weekend ...bye
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tintiny


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Sundays I do not update Juni, and next update will be on monday provided I get to write something over the weekend😉 Have a nice weekend 😃 LOve Tin

Nahii.... U vl nt update tommorow. OMG! But pls, pls nd pls, monday ko update kar dena, pls. Aise pls mat tadpao. Itne bade twist ke saath ye update khatm hui, pls monday tak update kar dena, warna mera kya hoga kaaliya lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Why do i have a feeling that we are about to see a possessive dutta? Baaji and roops are in love...not that i am surprised but lets have a loving scene between them...you know baaji telling her to stay away but she can't that kind of scene and plz start the mushiness already...nice update but i know you know that.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tintiny

Chapter 10 Weekend Spl

As the lady handed over the signed receipt she heard a voice from behind'.Chale?

Spinning around she saw HIM standing'.

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wah😊 wah jayati........ kya update likh liya........

so dutta knows of her encounter with kriplani...... y wil he not.......... he is interested in naku, so he wud hav wanted to find out this friend kapil............ n thnk god, he is not like a gadha in LTL......😆😆he does think.......... good for us............

so he is ok with this case, so half her hurdle is solved i suppose............ the story is slow paced........

buckle up yaar............. v want much more longer updates, u know.........

update on weekends also😳

ok cu
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!! Dutta just cannot stay away frm Nakku......... He wants her to saddle the horse fr him......... Baaji is very helpful to her..........he is Vipinjis son.......... he spoke abt himself .....and also abt Roops & him.... Roops and Baaji luvs each othr............Baaji also helped her to go to the main town.........Nakku is wearing the tunic dress Dutta bought fr hr............. So Dutta followed her to Kriplanis office..........means he know abt Mr. Kriplani............. may be he followed to see who this Kapil was............a very possessive Dutta........Luving him more andmore..........would luv to see more of a jealous nd Possessive Dutta.............continue soooon.........Looking frwrd fr Monday updt...........
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Posted: 14 years ago

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lovely lines in the beginning..

Hey tin.. arreh wah, so he now thinks he is just attracted to her and that will vanish after a few days.. my my.. he is in for a shock then, isn't he!!

Wow, they had dosas.. I made the batter this morning and hopefully we will enjoy some this evening.. now how will Leela get dosas ready for dinner as preparing the batter will take a day's time! Unless of course she has the batter.. but wish I could see her face when kanta will say he has asked for dosas!!

poor AS thought he may look down upon her for ordering that.. was touched to read that this was the first time she was sat next to her son.. an hopefully when naku becomes her bahu, she will get a lot more respect and love from her son..

And OMG, did he buy her that dress.. if she had not seen it when AS handed her the bags.. also him handing that bag at the last minute saying she left it behind, makes me think he bought the tunic dress for her.. if so, pls tin, let us know his thoughts on why he bought it.. whether on w whim and then trying to reason himself that it is just an attraction for her..

OMG Vandu good observation dear i happen to read ur comment & totaly got blown bcoz i read the update & didn't think of it as AS bought her so many things wow i will read again tanx 4 that vandu! jorda!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi,

First of all congrats for coming up with such a different FF.Atleast in this FF ,nakusha seems to be using her own mind,which is good.I also like how u have potrayed dutta.There is some kind of mystery around his character which is keeping me hooked .

I have recently started following ur FF,but u are amazing writer.I specially liked Guruji's lines.After reading this part it seems like dutta already was aware about her first meeting with kriplani.The question is whether he will help her or not.I am already excited for next interaction.

Thanks once again for this weekend dose,much needed.

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