FF- Raj Gharana,Ch39, the end, pg76, updtd on 21.2 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
My my tin....

First of all, thnx a lot for updating it today.

Now, it is quite clear that dutta had brought that dress for naku, nd now he gave a mobile to her.

AS thinks that her son has fantancy on naku, bt she didn't knw that this tym its nt fantancy bt luv.

Thank u dear for update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Tin .....🤗
Iam suhana.....😃....This is the first time iam reading ur FF .....
Congrats 🥳 for the FF ......Wow what a wonderful and different story yaar ...loved it .....loved the whole concept .....i was imagining it all ....
it is really beautiful ..😉.......
U have potrayed the characters so well from.....Specially Tasha😍i can"t enough of them ......Awww u paired Roji as well ....Cool ...

Loved the latest update ....So finally naku got caught .....Omg he bought a dress for her😲...he is falling for her ......iam loving this yaar .....
Pls do something about seema ....i cant stand her ......i would really appericiate .....😆
Btw roops is getting so jealous of naku😆don"t worry roops naku is only going to help u she is not stealing ur man.....

Omg AS thinks its just dutta"s fantasy and wants naku to stay from dutta......but this is not fantasy but a true love...which i bet gadha won"t realise anytime soon😆......

Once again thanx a million for the wonderful update 😉

will wait for ur nxt update eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna.....sorry for my boring blabbering 😆....
Can pls add me to ur PM list ...if its not a problem......

u take care and see ya around ....Have a wonderful day🤗
Edited by suhana19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tinni absouloutly wonderful update
So dutta already acting like he owns nakku ehy
Dat leelu leela is getting on my nerves just who does she think she is???
In a house ruled by wat ur class is ain't she a bit big for her boots?
Plzz update soon and thanx for updating regularary u made my morning 😊
Edited by Ruya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! a very nice updt.............I likd the way Tasha convo went.........in the end Duttas-sema convo toooo..............so now seema will be out of his life..........he gifted her a mobile.........AS know hr son well and she knows Dutta has got a fantasy fr Nakku...........she asks Nakku to beware of Dutta..........
Neither AS nor Dutta realise that this time it is true luv fr Nakku......... Hope they both realise soooooooooooon........ but first let it b Dutta realising his luv fr Nakku...........then we will b able to see more ofajealous and possessive Dutta also protective.........may be overprotective...............waiting fr 2morrow morning updt........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update... Finally usse pata chal hi gaya lol.. Aw he took her to his office.. holding hands and all eyy lol.. when he said try lie infront of a mirror.. i was thinkin HUH loll.. he understands her so well.. he reads her like a book or shall i say mirror ... Seema .. Seema.. Sigh... that girl is gettin on my nerves.. the way she barged in.. GOOD she saw him holding nakku's hand lol... and hahaha even better when he held nakku's hand and went..
Yaay..u finally confirmed it that Dutta gave her the dress.. aww hes a sweetheart.. and hailaaa now he gave her a mobile... im liking him more n mre now lol..
Hmm AS thinks he fancies her n asked her to stay away.. Nahiinn.. they need to get closer lol... so that Seema could GO AWAY! lol.. He's already protective over her.. he follows her.. tries to get to kno everything bout her.. he will fall in love soon.. i cant wait lol..
Great Update :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Tinni,

What an marvelous update....👍🏼.....as i said earlier patience paid 😊 .....So now dutta knos everything....but i think he will help nakku.........n then AS will realize he is not fancying nakku.........but he is falling in luv.........oho now i am getting more restless as the LS is going to star ne moment.........waiting eagerly for tomorrow morning........ take care
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it.. i love the way he just stares her down for her to let the truth... he gave her a cell phone.. nd AS thinks it is not good. i think nakusha will be good for him.. because he is going to fall in love... looking forward to more.. i like this slow, getting to know kinda of romance btw them..
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Posted: 14 years ago
so the voice in background of baaji was roops right..

so AS will probably stand up to her son to save nakku frm his evil clutches...would be fun to see how he reacts to that...

he doesn't seem like a guy who can be pushed in doing wht he doesn't want to do...mobile phone as gift ! wht now he wants to talk mushy on phone...no probably not...it might be that he wants her to be safe always..he doesn't realize it but he already seems deewanaa to me...

thanks for update..tin..gr8 as always...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey tin,
i am pooja & recented join IF.
I came across ur FF few days back,first few parts i read in one sitting & after that everyday i eagerly wait for ur update.It is like an extra dose of caffine for me .
U have really potrayed all the characters very well with distinct behavioural differences.For ex. nakusha who seems quite intelligent,or dutta whom i still read ,he is still puzzle for me.
From the last 2 updates it looks like dutta is attracted towards nakku but is it only attraction or somthing more deep,only u can tell.
once agin thanks for update,can u add me to ur PM list,if its not a problem for u.
Already waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Tin.. it is now my habit to read your update first thing in the morning. I am so glad I read the short story The Veil by you and ever since I am hooked to your simple style of writing. You are always precise and to the point.

Now, I was waiting to see what Dutta would say or rather do.. and yeah, he did not disappoint me.. he knew she was lying from the start na.. he has been studying her quite keenly even in these few meetings, he seems to know how her mind works.. that's a good start..and really admired how Nakku tried to shield AS as much as she could and eventually ahd to part with some of the truth as he caught onto the fact she was shielding AS..did that surprise him that a girl who came 2 days ago cares more for his mum than anyone else in that mahal?! Who knows?!!!you will tell us soon, I am sure.. and why do I feel that Roops is at least a bit more closer to AS compared to Dutta.. at least she is on talking terms with her mum whereas Dutta talks only when required and does not initiate a conversation.. hmm, so Roops has gone to meet Baaji..and AS in her tension cos of Nakku could not place where she had heard that voice!

Coming to Dutta, he knows his mind.. see, this is one quality I admire in men, who are sure of themselves.. sometimes it has a negative impact too as in when they make up their minds it is difficult to get them to change their opinions.. and he is no push over..he speaks his mind and sticks to what he believes in or thinks.. and wow, those few sentences to seema really did put her in her place.. and I really loved how he held Naku's hand when pulling her with him to go home.. atta boy :-)

AS does not know her son as much as she thinks she does.. she probably only has seen the outer shell of Dutta.. but knowing how close dad-son are, she has jumped in and assumed that he has a thing for naku.. she is not too wrong either as even D thinks he is only attracted to her and will pass away in time.. cant wait to read how this LS progresses as when he falls for her,, it will be with the same stubbornness, passion and intensity.. wow..i am loving this Dutta :-)

Vandu

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