The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87

Actually...Once in 10th grade my brother beat up a guy from 8grade for writing my name on the wall...he later told dad when dad was called in PTA meeting...😆..my brother was a very good student and much adored by all teachers hence they were shocked ki how come Biswajeet is fighting like a gunda...😆

oye hoye shilpi😉...was the guy hot? but poor him, you brother scared him off..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww...dear..u made us go all emosonal.. superb update..i luv the heart ur FF has..n especially its love for the good times at ur homeplace..!! Great one again dear..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry shilpi 4 not commetng yet... im stil tryna get over the fact that u finishd ur ff.....x :(((
Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice ending..............
this tasha story was really different n fantastic👏....................i loved it soooooooooooo much.......................but u ended this one ,y????????????????????????? i expected atleast 2 r 3 updates after the tasha reunion................but anyways it was sweet ending............
looking fwd for u r next FF................
love uuuuuuuuuuuu..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh it was wonderful shilpita .... loved the blunders dutta made at his wedding ....thanks so much for such an awesome ff ...hope u come ups with more coz i love ur writing style
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

sorry shilpi 4 not commetng yet... im stil tryna get over the fact that u finishd ur ff.....x :(((


Me too
yesterday our teacher was telling omething and she says

You cant have second chances always
and this make me cry in class !

whole lecture i was trying no to spill my tear
i cant belive its end 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255


Me too
yesterday our teacher was telling omething and she says

You cant have second chances always
and this make me cry in class !

whole lecture i was trying no to spill my tear
i cant belive its end 😭

awhh i kno exactly wa u mean sweetie
ukno wat we shud actualy hav ff awards n stuf..that wud encourage many of us 2 write dem with more enthusiasm n stf inh...



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Posted: 14 years ago

hmm afta a lot of thinkng about what 2 write as a last coment on second chances..i only cud tink of this (erm its not my wrk bt defo hw i felt bou da ff))

Tere shabdon mein woh taaseer hai Shilpi
K pathar ki murat bhi padhke pighal jaye

Wo jazbaaton ka samundra hai jiske ehsaas se
Yahan har dil me tuufaan machal jaye

Har lafz tera jo hota hai gazal mein teri
Usme tere dil mein chhupa dard nazar aa jaye

Iss mehfil (IF lol) mein aise shayar bohat hi kum hai
Jo gehri baatein bhi aasani se yun keh jaye

Har ek kalaam tera har nazm teri hai khub yaara
Jo har bar mere dil ko aake chupke se chhu jaye

Chahe jitni bhi padhun main gazal(FF) teri
Wo ek nayi paribhasha zindagi ki samjha jaye

Kehte ho tum khud ko anjana deewana guzra zamana
Lekin gazlon(FF) se apni tu dil mein sabke utar jaye

Hai kuch aisi baat teri jazbaaton mei "Deewani shilpita"
K chahe toh saari mehfil tere saamne sir jhuka jaye…!!!

hope u liked it😳



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Posted: 14 years ago
Missy...Its a beautiful poem..and is perfect for Shilpi and her Second Chances!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Shilpi......
Sorry for the delay......was just caught up with work.......
ch19 :Finding Salvation

Wonderful Update, it was very touching the way Dutta pleads Nakku to not give up hope....

Nice Story of Dr E, Dutta must have seen how he and Nakku might end up after 20 years.....
instead of spending all the 20 years together sharing a wonderful life.
A good wakeup call for D.

You've Done a great work in describing the winter Blizzard.....I could picture it so clearly,
almost as it I was watching it on screen.......Kudos to the amazing write .And Nakku felt that he was in trouble.......that was a good touch.....very telepathic.......

Flashback about his dad......"Daaki Gagoyeee'.Daa'Daa".....aaaawwwww.......was very emotional.....fate can be so cruel sometimes.......They made such a wonderful Family and that had to be broken.....D was especially close to his da da......felt very sorry for him and shakuntala.

Finally he will go back home, back to his Nakku.......Loved his talk with maya about Nakku and the other Tudu, made me smile after all the emotional reading :)

Ch20 : Homecoming to 'Enough'

Again an Awesome update shilpi.......

This christmas must have been so difficult for Nakku, especially after spending every minute of christmas eve with Dutta last year trying to convince him to stay back, and after a year he is still not with her.......poor thing.

Haaaa.......the sock is on the Wall....I am so glad that D made it before christmas morning... and a frog .......reminded me of our little Dutta Eightee years ago with Cabby, Hummer, Manny and Chin :)

So Dr E and Bhuppi finally made D realize how lucky he was to have Someone who loved him more than herself and was ready to wait for him all her life.......

Loved their reunion, loved how he at quitely letting her vent out her anger at him for not listening to her and leaving her and not bothering to reply to her emails......and finally his speech starting with "Once upon a Time......" aaaawww.......I had tears in my eyes by the time he was done.......was also smiling......very heartfelt......Loved it.

And he bought a ring, and fumbled with the proposal......A Dutta totally in love.....

Ben did not put up the star and was sure that Dutta will be back.....Finally the family is complete, Dutta is back home.......

The the CD had Shakuntala, guess it was fate that Dutta finally got to see the CD......
a very emotional good bye ......could'nt help but cry.......guess this gave him the much needed closure in regard to his mom and dad.And maybe she knew that Nakku will always be there for Dutta.......thru thick and thin......

Epilogue

An awesome ending to an awesome Love Story.......

He signed in the bride's place......A nervous Dutta.. LOL
Nice of Fanny to arrange a maharashtrian wedding in remembrance of Dutta's mom.... and D had trouble with the mangalsutra.... ha ha ha

and finally his dream coming true.....His dream of Nakku walking down the aisle towards him on Ben's arm (the vision he had after he heard that she was getting married......) finally came true.......

Aaaww.... Dhruv is choooo cute.......What a perfect family.......

Hope we get something similar in LTL.....

I have thouroughly enjoyed reading this FF, brought back a lot of good memories from my childhood since I spent most of my childhood days in a colony life.

This is a beautifully written FF....... will look forward to reading many more FF's, As they say all good things come to an End..... But on the brighter side we will still get to read your TSS everyday 😃

--Lalitha
Edited by vahgar - 14 years ago

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