The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago
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update....................
so finally tasha r together n am happy for them.............
n CD from dutta's mom was very touchy ,it was amazing..........
i loved it........................
looking fwd...................

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!!!!!! such a touching updt................ no words.......... i m having tears in my eyes.............. so emotional................ Shakuntalas message to Dutta in the CD really bought tears in my eyes (reminded me of my mom who stays with my bro) ......... how do u manage to write so beautifully that u really bring tears at emotional moments in the readers eyes...... also smile to their lips with happy moments ....like the one that Tasha shares now............. seeing the CD Stubborn Dutta toooo reached back to his 'enough' ... Naksh............ luved them 2gether......... the way Dutta confessed to Naksh.......... their convo was suprb........ Luved Ben-Dutta convo tooo......... Fanny is a gem of a person and a true frnd to Shakuntala..................
Thank u Shilpi fr such a wonderful updt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Shilpi - wonderful update!
I was playing around with my phone last nite because i wasn't getting any sleep and suddenly i get your PM, immediately jumped bec i knew what that meant - you had updated your FF!!!!
Hats off to you for such a lovely reunion for them, so emotional. BTW hope this is not the end......... shamelessy waiting for you to update more 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
the beginning was so cute ...nakku could see him everywhere ...and omg dutta gifted her a frog that was hilarious but the best part was that he finally confessed his feelings in such a beautiful way ...wow ...and really he is impossible he bought the ring from a duty free shop ...but all in all a wonderful updt ...LOVED IT ...MINDBLOWING 🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dearest Shilpita:

You are an outstanding writer. Take a bow my friend!! Wish your work is published in the form of a book. Tune toh mujhe rula hi diya aaj..... Many of my memories came rushing back to me....... The beauty of your story lies in the fact that everybody can relate to it one way or the other through smal incidences.
Hats off to you! Love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago

hold on...you always put '..to be continued' at the end of each chp..why not this one? This better be a blooper, Shilpita...you gave me a heart attack..2 of my fav FFs cant finished in the same day..this is a mistake right? *glares at shilpita*

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

hold on...you always put '..to be continued' at the end of each chp..why not this one? This better be a blooper, Shilpita...you gave me a heart attack..2 of my fav FFs cant finished in the same day..this is a mistake right? *glares at shilpita*

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Sorry..yaar..no blooper..this was the end will be back with epilogue to tie the end...properly.😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats so sad...😭😭...I will miss this FF.😭.but I will wait for the epilogue😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyyyyyyyyyy Shilpiiiiiiiii !

what i can say Huh
im loss of words and languages !
Ur update is just awesome , amzing , rapchik , zabardast ,
exceptionnelles , impresionante ,l'esprit souffle !
MIndblasting !

all the praises for u honey !
wht an awesome update !
i had tears of joy in my eyes !
it was just superb !

Shilpiiiiiiiiii !
its

and yes the way u

Ch20 : Homecoming to 'Enough'


wow what a title !

Homecoming to 'Enough', a title having a secret of its own :D

Present Day: 25th December 2010

Mountroad Railway Quarters,Nagpur


OH MY God !

what a start

Naksh would never know from this day onwards her life would change forever !

she was in such a misery , and the way she was imagining him ,

she was so close to losing sanity

But wait wait wait

the sock the little sock which hold soooo many memories of them !

Was at the wall just like her childhood !

it means childhood is coming back so does he :P

and wow something in the velevt box

sounds intersting :D

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Fifteen days ago: 20th December 2010

Sydney


Well NOw Dutta realizes

not ever one is lucky like him ,

gettin the second chance ,

some one just waiting for him with all her heart , soul and love just for him !

feels sad for Bhuppi though but itusurely make Dutta realize

what Naksh is doing for her

or may be what true love really is !


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Present Day: 25th December 2010

Mountroad Railway Quarters,Nagpur


OH MY God shilpiiiii !

NO u cant think of that

i thought abt a bid diamond ring like Naksh

and what we got a green creepy nasty frog yuck !

Never ever ever i cold imagine their reunion will start with a talk abt a frog !

hahahahhah

its just amazing Shilpi !

YOu dont want them to dig old things !

it feels like they were never apart !

same old Dutta and same old Naksh !


ANd ah Dutta is just too clever ,

he really knows his girl well !

A best way to make her listen to him !

ANd how beautifully Dutta poured her heart to her !

Not afraid to let her know abt his fears , his sins , his failures !

it was like he as not just apologizing , he was forgiving himself too !

opening the diary of failure , sins , fears for the very last time,

cuz now he is accepting all !

and acceptance is one thing which gives u confidence to move ahead !

Han theek hai this happens to me but it wont now !

cuz jab tak hum ye sochtay hai "ye mere sath kaise ho gaya ya why this happnes to me "

u limit ur self !

but now Dutta is in no mood to limit !

he wants to break free :D

And when the ring doesnt fit and naskh take it out he was scared for the second !

But Naksh knows that everything can be fixed jab tak they are together !

i love it so much !

Success doesnt mean to have everything perfect rather everything being adjusted !

Love their kisses (after all im a proud besharam diwani :)

Again Dutta get her a duty free ring :P

i love that part , Dutta is so back !

and wow even Maya came with him !

Now Dutta is sure never to leave his loved ones !
even if its his dog :D

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Present Day: 25th December 2010

Mountroad Railway Quarters,Nagpur


perfect scene !

Ben and fanny after long year of sorrow sees the complete n beautiful picture of their daughter in the arms of the man who not only love her but will protect her too !

Loved Dutta call to him !", can I come home now, please? Forever?"

The plea he had in his voice is beautiful !

he still afraid may be they wont allow it !

and yes prayers do come true even which are silently prayed in heart or prayed aloud

but its the purity of heart that requires a prayer to be ansswered !

And yes Naksh is right Dutta is such a gadha

what was that thing which push him so hard to give in to all the things he think he dont deserve !


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Five years ago: 14th April 2004

Mountroad Railway Quarters,Nagpur


OH MY God Shilpi !

You again took me by complete surprise !

the most amazing surprise i could thought of ,

who can make Dutta give in except his mom !

This part is just too beautifulllll!

Shakuntala knows how sad he was that he never had a chance to say good bye to his Da

she doesnt want DUtta to go through it again !

she just let out all her feeling to him !

her life with his Da , her life with him !
and what she and his Da want from hs life !

amazing part !

i want to write so much but words are lost i typed 5 times for this para but delete it !

Some times it best not to say !

BUt this is the part which i am going read again and again Simply beautiful !

A mother's true feeling !

It make me cry as if She is my mom !

amazing part Shilpi

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Present Day: 25th December 2010

Mountroad Railway Quarters,Nagpur


Fate four alphabet word

but can do miracles isnt it !

A little cd has kept fro so long travelled so much

just to get to the person who it was meant for !

amazing amazing !

A packed CD , got in his work file , got to third man and he finally after 5 long torturing yeras came to know abt what really in it was

the pact of happiness for him !

Loved how fanny has kept his things !

they all know he will come up and im so happy he is gonna see this all !

YEt a second chance to re live his childhood

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I dont know what i write !

BUT i ahve to tell u !

This FF is urs is going to be in my memory forever and ever

it has too many lessons !

never to give up , dont think its all over

till the last breath u are breathing , u have a second chance

but u just need to go for it !

naksh worst day of life being left at the altar gave her the happy ending she ever wished for !



Beautiful SHilpi !
i know i am being cruel but jaldi is do start ur new FF !

cuz i am hpy and sad hapy that they are united but sad that now i will get no update on second chances

though i belive their is and will be nothing close to "second chances "

I know i just love second chances too much !

it was more than a FF

it was a lesson , a love i always want !

cant wait for a long epilogue than a new FF !


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Posted: 14 years ago
omg shilpi really"" i did hav a feeling that it was the end but thought its jus my gut feeling...omg im sooo gona miss it...i use2 wait everyday 4 u 2 update...pls write atleast 1 mor update on it...pls...




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