The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Awesome update, shilpita! So sweet!

LOL Dutta is making poor Naku walk! Bechari ke legs!😆

The shower scene's so cute, she thought he was going to say mine...he probably did and then tried to decline it....

OMG Did she see him completely naked?😲 Oh wait....he had the towel na? Aye Haye, she is trying to seduce him😍 and he thinks she is being innocent? But the seduction didn't work fully, he wanted to kiss her, but itna bhi woh nahi tha ki he did without realizing, like the other times. I guess it only works when she is being normal Naku, not some seductive chick.😆

The past bit 's so sweet, she wants to collect blessings for him so he gets whatever he wants😍 and she gave the lady his share of chocolates😆 now I am gonna be like lil Naku and go Sucker!!😛

Thanks for the PM

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

so sweet of Nakku she is collecting blessings fr Dutta frm the last 16 years........she is doing it even now.......OMG! she really luvs him a lot............hope dutta admits to the fact that he too luvs hr a lot................

A very beautiful updt.............continue sooooooooooon......

Thanxx fr PM

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shruti

@shruti10august

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

NICE UPDATE SHILPITA.

I lyked it but i m waiting for the moment wen dutta vl say to naksh that u r mine. Eagerly waiting for that.

Thnx for PM me nd update soon, PLEASE.

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Lifu18

@Lifu18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

woooooooo hoooooooooooo loved ur update was gonna read it last night but forgot and fell asleep went to work and got home and saw i had opened a tab to read ur story as soon as a sat and started reading i was glued to the seat though my jaan was trying his best to distract me with his stupid jokes n talking i tell u i was so mad at him it was hard reading this part 😆 but he also read this part told to tell u its a great ff n ur doing a great job much better than me he says 🤢 😉 update soon t.c

Edited by Lifu18 - 14 years ago

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mozart66

@mozart66

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

AMAZING WORK SHILPITA!!!!! Loved it so much!

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

OH SHilpi

beautiful update

You know i am never intimated by anything

but this FF of urs so want me to have a childhood sweetheart

where Love is sooo pure

Little Naku who doesnt have any idea

give choclates to the old lady so she can Pray for DUtta

OH godddd Shilpi

kahan say socha itna amazing FF

it sooooooooo real at times

Love the update GR8 job :)

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbbbbbbbb update dear..............
tasha's childhood story was sooooooooooooooooooo cute n present day scene's also ,sooooooooooooooooooooo good ............................looking fwd................

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

ohh nakku is so sweet she wanted to sit on his cycle but dutta is dutta ...so stubborn ...very nice part ...and omg nakku such an innocent sould bargained with the beggar ...so cute

will read and comment on the next part soon

ohh u pmed me twice for the same uptd and i thought u had updated twice ...anyways waiting for the next part and once again i love ur writing style

Edited by stranger2rose - 14 years ago

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

shilpi........its awesome as usual......Dutta loved her so much.......still he keeps denying to himself n her.......such a gadha...........Naku is so sweet.........she gives money to beggars so that they will pray for Dutta.........this two are made for each other.......update soon........