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Posted: 14 years ago
No confusion here. Keeping track of all dates, age and events 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87

Guyz...Guyz..Guyz...That was not the first kiss...u misunderstood..it was the second one....first one was as dutta said last time...when how, where...that first kiss yet to be revived by either of them yet...plz...don't confuse yourselves...they have only kissed twice in the past and this was the second one..first is yet to be written about....oh..man..i hope i am not confusing you guyz with this back and forth thing...plz keep track of the years..it will help.

its nt confusing hun its jus tht u wrote in one update tht their first kiss was when naku was 15 n in this last update in the past section u wrote she is 15 so mayb members thrt this was her first kiss... bt u did make it clear tht its their second cos dutta sed he cud always remind her of wt her first kiss was like...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
this line just shone thru this part for me.. a master stroke
He could hear the little Nakkusha laughing at his failing attempts and pointing at him shouting,"Sucker!"
how cute was that!! sorry for responding late but u know why! i had seen this coming.. i dont know if i had asked you also that when D leaves school, there will be a gap between them a void in lil Naku's life.. of course, it is for diff reasons than what i thought.. he is just scared and not ready to trust himself in front of her, so he is keeping away.. but has he even once thought what effect that must be having on her? he thinks he is doing it for her own good na, but suddenly nakku has to grow up overnight and start taking her own decisions.. no Dutta to guide her or for her to even sound him what she thinks.. that is sooo sad..
OMG, shireen!!!she actually tells N that he was a gr8 kisser. no wonder nakku always thought she was an air head, but very cute to see D tuning red with apprehension.. LOL.. cant wait to see how she reacts.. they seem to be finally relaxed around each other and entered the room laughing.. why do i feel the intensity is about to go up a nothc?! Do u know what, mpre than nakku i felt sad reading Liberty cinema is closed.. i was wondering if u would have them watch a movie there, but considering time is of essence here as he is leaving shortly, maybe not and that time could be used more wisely! and before i forget, cheeky D i mist say telling N how his GF's always wanted to taste him only.. so full of himself, huh.. and today, how his heart beats only for her.. aaaww
nakku's first date with Arun was hilarious from the scooter ride to the pop corn eating spree!
i have a request/question?! Will D ever see a sari clad nakku, maybe a leavers do? i bet the wind will be knocked out of him seeing a beautiful nakku in a sari na? i know she is too young now, but maybe before he leaves and she is nearer to the 20's? wonder if u will show D doing anything special for N's 18th :-P
pls continue as this is very very interesting.. cant wait to read what happens next!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh and BTW, absolutely no confusion regarding the 2nd kiss.. u have stated very clearly this is 2nd kiss that there is no room for confusion.. but to be technically very correct, this was the 3rd kiss, if u want to include the lil peck on her cheek on the day they first met :-P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prettywoman

this line just shone thru this part for me.. a master stroke

He could hear the little Nakkusha laughing at his failing attempts and pointing at him shouting,"Sucker!"
how cute was that!! sorry for responding late but u know why! i had seen this coming.. i dont know if i had asked you also that when D leaves school, there will be a gap between them a void in lil Naku's life.. of course, it is for diff reasons than what i thought.. he is just scared and not ready to trust himself in front of her, so he is keeping away.. but has he even once thought what effect that must be having on her? he thinks he is doing it for her own good na, but suddenly nakku has to grow up overnight and start taking her own decisions.. no Dutta to guide her or for her to even sound him what she thinks.. that is sooo sad..
OMG, shireen!!!she actually tells N that he was a gr8 kisser. no wonder nakku always thought she was an air head, but very cute to see D tuning red with apprehension.. LOL.. cant wait to see how she reacts.. they seem to be finally relaxed around each other and entered the room laughing.. why do i feel the intensity is about to go up a nothc?! Do u know what, mpre than nakku i felt sad reading Liberty cinema is closed.. i was wondering if u would have them watch a movie there, but considering time is of essence here as he is leaving shortly, maybe not and that time could be used more wisely! and before i forget, cheeky D i mist say telling N how his GF's always wanted to taste him only.. so full of himself, huh.. and today, how his heart beats only for her.. aaaww
nakku's first date with Arun was hilarious from the scooter ride to the pop corn eating spree!
i have a request/question?! Will D ever see a sari clad nakku, maybe a leavers do? i bet the wind will be knocked out of him seeing a beautiful nakku in a sari na? i know she is too young now, but maybe before he leaves and she is nearer to the 20's? wonder if u will show D doing anything special for N's 18th :-P
pls continue as this is very very interesting.. cant wait to read what happens next!

Hmm...i have a question do you read minds...😕....what will be the fun if you know it all..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm...i have a question do you read minds...😕....what will be the fun if you know it all..😉
no, cant read all minds, but sometimes can read yours😉 ab jaldi next part post kar de.. cant wait😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved all 3 parts...very interesting & attenting grabbing. No boring line in the story!
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi

please update .... waiting to read what happens next
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow! such a well written story! I can't wait till you continue!

Cheers!
~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpita87

Guyz...Guyz..Guyz...That was not the first kiss...u misunderstood..it was the second one....first one was as dutta said last time...when how, where...that first kiss yet to be revived by either of them yet...plz...don't confuse yourselves...they have only kissed twice in the past and this was the second one..first is yet to be written about....oh..man..i hope i am not confusing you guyz with this back and forth thing...plz keep track of the years..it will help.




Hey Dear
well its always take reading ur FF 2 time to understand :PP
but ur not at all confusing us !
i love this back and forth thing
beside i think u enjoy playing with ur readers mind😃
Btw i think its time u update this FF !
cuz i cant wait mre😳

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