The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb

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Lifu18

@Lifu18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

wow yaar nice update👏 loved it to bits wow tasha's first or sorry 2nd kiss was great love how u blend in the past n present day waiting eargerly for next part hope naku stops him n he styopos fighting gainst his feelings or her soon n unite bravo 👏

Edited by Lifu18 - 14 years ago

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kinno

@kinno

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

WOW🥳 totally awesome..nice update wait would this be there 2nd kiss? anyways still nice update😊

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

woooooooooooooooooooooo shilpi

what an update !
im breathless !

LOve the way ur story is heading and speciallly naku dutta perspective

and the kiss "P

all is exceptional

im loving it :)

GR8 job shilpi

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

amazing update

haha regarding the present track--wow so naku gt her way in spending the day with him😳 n tht school mate who was dutta's ex once upon a time thrt they wer married...😆... aww she telling naku tht dutta's a brilliant kisser... wel naku wud knw...she's had 3 kisses from him...2 in the past n 1 jus after daniel dumped her!

regarding past track---aww naku feeling she's lost her best m8 bt he's stil there... haha he spilt drink on arun n took his place...wow!! they kissed in the theatre... 😳 hw sweet... bt 1 ? if they hav always been so close n tht hw did daniel manage 2 make a place in naku's life n the matter lead up2 marriage i mean wasnt dutta around 2 stop it all or didnt they both realise their feelings til nw?

pls update ur other ff 2....

Yuvi😃

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MAAHI_RCKZZ

@MAAHI_RCKZZ

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

wowwwwww awesome update yaar love da bit wen shireen told nakusha da dutta iz one hell of a kisser😆 tanx 4 da pm update asap cnt wait 2 read hw nakusha stop's him from leaving

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.scorpio10

@.scorpio10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

I have no words ... no words at all ..

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vahgar

@vahgar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Loved the update......... you have a very nice way of writing.......its very interesting the way you blend the past and the present.......... looking forward to reading the next part.......

--Lalitha

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

ROFL Naku toh bak bak queen nikli, she has a response for every excuse Dutta makes😆

Aw Naku feels that she has lost her best mate.....when was their first kiss? eh....maybe I will have to reread this

anyways, they kissed in the theatre! and while Naku should have been on a date with Arun😆...but Dutta ne toh us bechare Chimpy ko bhaga diya..

Shireen ke muh mein toh chocolates!!! I hope what she said comes true quickly...D and N 'hook up' soon.😍

Fantastic update! (esp. the kiss)...thanks for the PM...update soon!

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Hey Shilpi thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗Loved it ....u are awesome ....Omg dutta is giving excuses to naku ...but our naku is no less😆finally found a solution...Wow she went on the first date with that freak🤣Even things werent great btw them he cared for her ...Awww dutta could read her expressions ..so sweet 😍....he removed the kabab mein haadi ....wow they kissed😍.....😉

Shireen was just to good ...she thought D&N are couple😉how can they not be....i hope whatever said comes true....can"t wait to see what naku has in mind ...pls jaldi update karna... u take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗

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ltl_fan

@ltl_fan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Loving how you blend the past with the present. Anxiously waiting to see what happens next and how Nakku convinces Dutta with less than 24 hrs for his flight back. Determined Nakku - just the way I like it. Go Nakku. Stop him from leaving.😛😆

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