FF: Temptations- Chapter 7: Page 17: Mar 11

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Yaay u updated...lol

Haii i knew Roops and Baaji were 2geda...

Wow Dutta is already falling for her... dats great

Hmmm Ajay... And Dutta is already gettin jealous n protective lol..

Nakku has a point ... Why should Dutta care? he is nothing to her..

Awww Shakuntala n SP are soo nice...

Great update.... Continue soon

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Lifu18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

wow thanks for the pm nice update 👏want more want more want more plssssssssssssssss updates soon i love ur ff to bits 😳

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prettywoman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

awesome zara.. jee nahin bhara.. felt like reading more and more.. seriously.. loved this part.. pls update soon dear

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Oooh, what a way to end the chapter!

The Baaji-Roops part was cute, but after such an amazing ending with Dutta and Naku, I'm quite overwhelmed!

The only thing he could see was her laughing and him not being the reason for it.

Ahhh, I can totally see this happening! Dutta fuming, watching her laugh from across the room...Uff, he's already getting so jealous and he has no clue why...I loved how he couldn't take his eyes off her from the moment she stepped out in that salwar suit...Beautiful description, too. I'd love if Mahi is able to wear her hair out of her usual plait in the show...Maybe once everything is all right between Dutta and Naku, they'll let her wear her hair down. *sigh* Naku is so pretty! I don't blame Dutta for being awestruck!

'Who is that?' Dutta asked through clenched teeth.

'W...What?' Nakusha asked and he tightened the grip on her arm. She tried pulling his fingers off her but it was of no use.

'Who is that man?' Dutta repeated, almost seething with anger now.

'It was just a friend!' she cried, as the pain of his grasp on her arm overwhelmed her, 'Why do you care anyway?' she tried again to pry his fingers off her arm. 'It's none of your business,' she shot at him through tears.

Dutta immediately let go of her arm, the sudden realization of what he was doing hitting him. 'You're right' he said, running his fingers through his hair, taking steps backwards. 'It's none of my business' he said inaudibly. He looked at her for a moment, before walking away.

Best part ever. There's only one word to describe this entire interaction: intense!!!

Gosh, I love it! Dutta's fury, Naku's fear - despite that fear and panic, she still manages to answer back strongly! He acts purely on impulse when it comes to Nakusha, and that in itself makes me smile...Can't wait for more, Zahra!

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usha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Wow !!!!!!!!!!!! Baji-roops couple............Dutta is so jealous..........he himself doesnt know why...............he is so protective and possessive ............. that was rude when she said 'It's none of your business...............It hurt dutta......... superb updt...........waiting for the nxt one eagrlyyyyyyyyyyy

updte sooon...........Thanx fr PM

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blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

hey nice update yaar.................
dutta was affected by naku n her beauty...................hmm...............interesting..............
roops fall for baji n baji loves roops.............it was nice............
n dutta become jealous in party😆...................poor dutta .................
looking fwd..................

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Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Again an awesome update...honey...but still having problem imagining Dutta here...the thing is that heer also was like a worker with prem right? he was the boss...i think i saw a episode of her dressed as waitress or manager or something at a hotel owned by prem..anyways..

this update had a jealous dutta acting brutish..that i can imagine him doing....so that was one part where i could see tasha..but then next i saw prem and heer...lol..

but i loved it..wow. update soon yaar.