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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#71

OH zahra !

awesome update

Dutta is a true casanova !
He is trying everything to make Naku fall for him

but i am so sure its he who is going to fall for her :P

aww love Baaji and ROOPs finally Baaji said what he has To

Dutta mom thinks just like me :P

cant wait for BAaji arrival

gr8 updtae

loved it

and this time update soon !

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

nice update...i have feeling that dutta will break her heart by making her fall for him and then breaking off with her because he'll get scared that he feels too much for her and would want to run away...i hope nakku makes him see how selfish and arrogant he is and teaches him lessons in love...by the way..still can't see dutta-nakku only heer-prem..my bad..i know.

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dhlgirl

@dhlgirl

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

awesome - when's the next part coming, you always leave us thirsting for more. Please update soon!!!!

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Reserved

Edited :-

OMG did he really ask her to come home 😲.........................He deffo deserves a hard slap on his face.......................... She just moved away from there........................ Oh GOD wasn't expecting this from Dutta.......................... But i knw NAkku is a smart girl........................... she wont let him to do what he wants...................... M sure that she will prove him wrong that "no women say No to Dutta Shreeram patil"...........................I knw Nakku too getting atracted towards him But she will not give in for his desires.......................

Dutta is all set to fulfill his target but I have all hopes on Nakku................ Afterall she is enough smart to decide what is wrong or right................................

So shakuntla want Nakku as her DIL & his son has his own plans....................

It gonna be interesting.............................

Loved Bajji - Roops scene........................ So finally he confessed his love.....................

Bajji is coming back................................. I hope he will help Nakku.................... As he knws whats the meaning of true love.................................

Thanks for the pm dear🤗............................

Update soon.........................................

Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

loved this updtae.....haila dutta is a naughty guy...olol

plss add me to ur PM list....upload asap....

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MAAHI_RCKZZ

@MAAHI_RCKZZ

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Zahra, first of thank you for the PM.

awesome rocking update yaar

Dutta is naughty & a true casanova ! trying everything to make Naku fall for him but i am so sure its he who is going to fall for her first.

can't wait 4 da next update plez update soon n pm asap.

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LTLFan

@LTLFan

Trailblazer

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

In 1st chapter you mentioned dutta is professional and won't fool around with his female employees in the office. Then how can he behave like this to nakusha, who is working in his house as a maid? Don't you think this will be gross misconduct on part of dutta? I think you should incorporate this aspect to their relationship.

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Lifu18

@Lifu18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

loved ur update urg dutta is cheap lol hope naku mends his ways happy new year.

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Suraya

@Ruya

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Gr8 upd8 Zahra
OMG can't believe Dutta said that 2 her.
But d poor bloke doesn't even now how hard he's fallen 4 her can't wait 2 c how ur gonna make him realize it.
Plzzzz upd8 sooon

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Mishifreind

@Mishifreind

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Hy zahra.... i am naina... i read all the prts of your ff...i like your ff so mch...your ff is so fresh & different...i like you portray dutta as noughty & casanova kind of persn in your ff...i am eagerly w8ing 4 next prt... plz updt soon..and pm me if u can..take care

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