New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey bushy gr8 update hun jus read bth part n it soundz awsum..omg dus dutta wrk wv naku!! 😆 ...can u plz pm me nxt tym n continue soon.xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bush......Naku is worried.......n everyone is worried for her too......Dutta enters......is he her BF.......update soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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YAhooo dutta entered..and nakku dutta friends....yipeee...so...whats it like...nakku and D are friends but don't realize they are made for eachother....kya bushy...humse ouchne bol deti...antways...mujhe laga it will be baaji or viraj or somthing...was a bit surprised it was D.....ab hum kya gaana gaye...hulle hulle ho jayega pyaar ..o sajna..hulle hulle ho jayega pyaar.....lol.......aur ye kya naku ko jaanne ke baad bhi D ek cassanova........haaa..kya majak hai...N ke rahte D kissi aur ko dekh bhi nai sakta....but i know u know that they know that they should end up togather. and will make that happen sooon...waiting for hot tasha rom...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi

I like it dutta a cansanova .......... But a sweet one .. u know such guys r the best friends one can get nd when falll in love they r the best lovers . ..
they super passionate , intense ..nd vuverable
also all the girls the flirt with a told upfront ..this what they getting into ........ these are just some silly girls ...with whom they just pass their time with
Edited by scorpio10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank You all for liking it and leaving ur precious comments..they mean a lot to me.....I know i left it at a cliffhanger......so here's the next part without any delay....😳

Part 3:
.....Yeh Mohabbat.....

Nakusha while turning: Tum aaj 15 minutes late ho....Kya excuse hai aapke paas Mr. Dutta Sriram Patil..and she faces him......

He gets even more scared after seeing her angry face and hearing his full name from her.....

He knew he was late...he needed a good excuse because if he said he was partying till late night and didn't got up early he would be dead....He was struggling for an excuse..he scratches his head and then gives an excuse which was as silly as it could be....but he didn't knew what he was saying.....he just blabbered....

Dutta: errmm who...main...errmm......haan who subah alarm nahi baja..isiliye late ho gaya...

then he realized what he just said...

Dutta to himself: Alarm nahi baja??? Oh Man...isse accha excuse nahi mila tujhe Dutta..........now u r dead..and he waits for Nakku's reply with his head down....

Nakusha was trying hard to control her laughter at Dutta's excuse....managed to put a stern look on her face....

Nakusha: Alarm??? You mean the alarm didn't ring???

Dutta: eerrmm...Yeah...i mean the alarm didn't ring....Woh maine subah alarm set kiya tha.aur so gaya...i dont know y it didn't rang....

Nakusha: Subah??? tumne subah alarm set kiya aur phir sogaye.???

Dutta: haan....nahi subah nahi raat ko..haan raat ko...

Now Nakusha could control her laughter and she bursted out laughing....on seeing her laughing Dutta was shocked but then he smiled after seeing her laughing....

Nakusha: Dutta do u really want me to believe this??? still laughing..

Dutta: smiling...yeah I know u won't believe it....

Nakusha: Kya maine tumse kaha hai ki tum Pagal ho.???

Dutta: ermm...haan.....bachpan se tum yehi toh bolti ho....but still whenever you say this it sounds good....

Nakusha looks at him and he winks at her....

Nakusha and Dutta are childhood friends...They studied in the same school....they were neighbors....Then they went to london together and did their MBA... While doing MBA..they decided to start a business together...and now they have PATIL'sAnd MEHRA's Industry and they r the business partners.....They have common friends...but still they were very much comfortable in each others company...They were the best friends...but.they didn't develop any feelings for each other...or maybe didn't realize it...Everyone wondered how could they be so close to each other but still didn't fall in love???..They always argued but Dutta always gives into Nakku's demand...he didn't knew why he could say no to her..........he just loved it when she had a smile on her face....He was a Casanova........parties till late nights...he was a total flirt....but when he was with Nakusha he was a different person....Nakusha was even close to his family just as he was close to her's....His younger brother Baji was very fond of her and respected her lot more than his own sisters...everyone in PN loved her except Kalawati who was very much jealous of her success....she could not bear Nakusha for even a minute...Nakusha also preferred talking to Baji..AS...Leela and Roops....

Dutta was also close to Babi and sethji......he used to pick sethji from his schools sometimes and take him for a drive....But he was a bit scared of Ganpath....and he used to sit like a baby in front of Ganpath and answer to his questions quietly.....


Back to present...

Dutta: Now if the laughing session is over may I ask u something.???

Nakusha: Yeah...what is it???

Dutta: What's wrong???..Riya told me that u are tensed???

Nakusha: Ahh...Riya...that girl can't keep a word in her mouth...

Dutta: Agar woh mujhe nahi bhi batati tab bhi mujhe pata chal jaata....tum chahe mujhe batao ya na batao....lekin tumhara yeh chehra mujhe sab kuch bata deta hai.....

Nakusha tells him everything about the nightmare....

Dutta: hmmm.kisme itni himmat hogi ki woh Nakusha Mehra ko daraye???

Nakusha: You find it funny???

Dutta: Nope I was just trying to find out who it must be who scared you.??? Well who main nhai ho sakta kyunki Dutta kabhi kisi ladki ko nahi darata....

Nakusha: hahaha....don't worry it was not you...

Dutta: Jaanta hoon......main ladkiyon ke sapnon mein unhe darane nahi aata..

Nakusha: Tum un stupid ladkiyon ke sapnon mein jaate ho jo tum par marti hain....mere sapnon mein tumhare aane ke liye koi jagah nahi hai.....ok now I hav some work to finish we'll talk later...

Dutta: Alright mujhe bhi kuch kaam hai...catch you later....(and he starts going...when Nakku stops him and asks...)

Nakusha: Dutta yeh sapna sach toh nahi hoga na???(She had that fright on her face which Dutta could not see.....)

He comes near her and hugs her and assures her...

Dutta: Nahi aise sapne sach nahi hote.....aur phir main hoon na tumhare saath hamesha....Don't worry..relax....and saying this he starts going..

Nakusha: Kuch kha lena...warna kaam nahi kar paoge...

Dutta: pehle tum toh kuch khalo....

Nakusha: Tumhe kaise pata ki maine kuch nahi khaya...???

Dutta: Jis tarah tumhe pata hai ki maine kuch nahi khaya usi tarah mujhe pata hai ki tumne bhi kuch nahi khaya....

And they both smile at each other....

Dutta: Main canteen jaa raha hoon..tumhare liye kuch bhej doonga...

Nakusha: ok..(and she gets back to her....after sometime a man comes in and gives a plate of sandwiches to her and says yeh Dutta sir ne bheja hai aur kaha ki pehle isey khalena aur phir kaam karna...saying this he goes off...)

Nakku takes the plate and eats the sandwiches first and after finishing it she starst working again.....The time passes by and its noon...She finished her work and sits back relaxing...Dutta comes in and sits on the chair..

Dutta: Kaam hogaya...??

Nakusha: Haan...bas thoda final touches dene hai..

Dutta: OK...ermm..Sethji kaisa hai??

Nakusha: Theek hai.......

Dutta: Aur Babi aunty??

Nakusha: who bhi theek hain aur Papa bhi theek hain...

Dutta: Maine uncle ke baare mein nahi poocha.....

Nakusha: Nahi tum ek ek karke sab ke baare mein pooch rahe ho toh mujhe laga tumhe Papa ki bhi fikar hogi...and she smiles..

Dutta: Yeah r8...mujhe uncle ki fikar toh sabse zyada hai......

Nakusha could sense somethng.....

Nakusha: Yeh sab chodo aur point ki baat karo... Kya baat hai...kuch poochna chahte ho??

Dutta: who.....Aaj shaam ko kya kar rahi ho???

Nakusha: Kuch khaas nahi...kyun???

Dutta: Toh Dinner pe chalein...

Thats it for today...😆

Hope u guyz like it....

Plz press the LIKE button....and leave ur precious comments....😳


Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sowree, sowree,,,,,m i too late....yes...im😭...sowree my lappy ws sick
ok let me comment dear😳 awesome part bushy ,,,,,what n intro of D👏👏👏 good
wow kya Excuse diya....i hd use dis excuse wen i ws in primary🤣,,,,,,
wow both care 4 eachother sooo niceee😳😳😳😳 but dey dont fall for each other ohh may be dey soon😳😳😳😳😳
wow D askesd 4 Dinearr😍 interesting😳
hope nxt tym i'll be on time😳
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Bushy this is soooooooooooooooooo sweet update🤗.................
just loved it........................
So Dutta n Nakku r best frnds n Business parterners also............................
and they understand each other very well....................... That soooooooo sweet................
Yaar what to do with this nightmare track???????
is it have any future concern????????
wow Dutta ask her for dinner...................... will he gonna propose her?????
Oh GOD what i m asking................ he even dunno knw abt his feelings........................
update soon dear..............................
Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update ..... loving their friendship , that's we call true friends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi0318

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Oh Bushy this is soooooooooooooooooo sweet update🤗.................
just loved it........................
So Dutta n Nakku r best frnds n Business parterners also............................
and they understand each other very well....................... That soooooooo sweet................
Yaar what to do with this nightmare track???????
is it have any future concern????????
wow Dutta ask her for dinner...................... will he gonna propose her?????
Oh GOD what i m asking................ he even dunno knw abt his feelings........................
update soon dear..............................

Hey thanx Khushi......I just brought this nightmare track to show Dutta's concern for Nakku.....thats it it's.....there is not gonna be any such thng in the future track....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update keep writing love ur ff thanks for the PM bushy

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