New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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bushy jii 😕 u dint pmd me wesay nyce strt jii👍🏼 😆 em luving it 😉 ohw ganpath sayng ma princess to nakku 😲 nd nakku is nakusha mehra business woman 😲 OMG😳 ur FF seems to have sum fresh idea👏 do cont nd dnt forget to pm me 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Khushi: Oh God..i thought u wud not like it if i pmed u...Sorry will do it wen i update it...and thanx for liking it and u dont need to say plz..i will definitely pm u😳
Nimmoji: Awww sorry ji....i didn't pm to anyone......i will pm u wen i update the nxt part.....and thanx for liking it....😳..yh it has a fresh story...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ushankitvc

Gr8 start................introduction of Naku..............so, sh is a indepedentt girl having her own business.....................nd Dutta a casanova.............C'mon yaar bring Dutta in 2 the picture.......Already missing him.................See even Nakku is mising him.............so she is seeing nightmares...................

Updt sooooooooooooon..........plz add me 2 ur PM list................
Waiting eeeeeagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Hey thanx for liking it........yh hav patience i'll introduce him too.and sure i'll add u to the pm list😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bushy_92

@Khushi: Oh God..i thought u wud not like it if i pmed u...Sorry will do it wen i update it...and thanx for liking it and u dont need to say plz..i will definitely pm u😳

Nimmoji: Awww sorry ji....i didn't pm to anyone......i will pm u wen i update the nxt part.....and thanx for liking it....😳..yh it has a fresh story...😉

Arre why u thought i dunno lyk it if u pm me????????
do i ever give such nasty expressions?????? or my any words made u feel so????
And u never need to say SORRY............... i was just pulling ur legEmbarrassed.......................
anyways i loved ur FF🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushi0318

Arre why u thought i dunno lyk it if u pm me????????
do i ever give such nasty expressions?????? or my any words made u feel so????
And u never need to say SORRY............... i was just pulling ur leg😳.......................
anyways i loved ur FF🤗

Lol...i am stupid so i thnk this thngs aww thank u for liking it..then i'll pm u....🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarathikb

Wow very well written and a perfect beginning.Looking forward to next part.

Thanx for liking it aarathi.......yh i will pm u the nxt part😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati2008

its awesome...where's Dutta.....update soon.....

Thanx.....will update nxt part soon😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hieee bush🤗.....new FF 🥳congo...dear....
sowree 4 late....hope i'm not last😵.....ohh i'm😔....
woohhoo start ws superbbb dearrrr👏,,,,nakku,,,,ganu ,,,,ye aonu wala he😆 richie,,,,,😆
great start ....ohh Datta Sreeram Patil😳dutta the casanova waiting 4 him😳.....phir ye nakku ko Mehra banake punjabi tadka kyun mara😒....
character sketch good buddy👏
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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all the best bush for ur new ff👍🏼

its was nice ..👏.love to see dutta the casanova😳..interesting character sketch...do continue
Edited by stranger2rose - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank You all for liking my new FF.....will try to live up to ur expectations...😳
Part 2....
.....Yeh Mohabbat.....

Dressed in knee length dress with her hair open...Nakusha rushed out of her room..saying bye to all she goes off without having her breakfast......She drives to Riya's house and keeps waiting for her in her car......after waiting for few minutes she starts shouting..

Nakusha" Riya.......Hurry up...we r getting late.

Just then Riya comes out of her house and sits in the car beside Nakku....

Nakusha: I hav told u to be ready on time....

Riya: I was ready....

Nakkusha: Then wat was taking u so long to come....

Riya: Ok...i know I am late sorry......but dont u thnk we are getting even more late now.....

Nakku looks at Riya and then starts driving....and Riya starts talking and talking, unaware that Nakku is lost in her own thoughts....

After sometime Riya realizes this and says to nakku...

Riya: I am just watching from that time that u r not listening to me...U r lost in your own world......whats wrong???

Nakusha comes out of her senses........

Nakusha: No I am fine.....

Riya: U r lying......and u know u cant lie to me......tell me ur thinking about the nightmare r8???

Nakusha first tries to say no but then she cant help but agree that she was thinking about the nightmare...

Nakusha: No....errmm yes...i dont know why but I cant get over it......it's scaring me....(she looks worried)

Riya: Dont think about it Nakku.It won't come true......Just Relax.....ok.....

Nakusha stops the car infront of a boutique......

Nakusha: here u are...time to go...will meet in the evening....

Riya: Oh ya time to go....You Take care......and don't think about the nightmare.,..it will scare u even more.....OK...and the two friends hug and Riya gets out of the car.....


Riya has done a course in Fashion Designing and now she has her own boutique...Nakusha's classy dressing sense is all because of Riya's boutique...she buys all her stuff from here....and it was Nakku who named it as Pearl Boutique...It is very near to Nakku's office and the two friends come together and go together.


Nakusha droves off while Riya stands outside her boutique and is worried for Nakku........She then calls someone and tells the person about the whole thing....


Scene shifts to Nakusha's Office

She drives and stops in front of her office and hands the keys to the security guard to park the car.....

Pooja.....who works in the office is a recptionaist who manages all the appointments and meeting schedules.....

Pooja: Good morning Ma'am...

Nakku: Good morning Pooja....get me the Sinha's file...plz....

Pooja: Ya sure ma'am i'll get it...

Nakusha goes into her cabin still tensed...while Pooja was waiting for Nakku to ask the question she asks daily...when Nakku didn't ask her anything...She too gets a bit woried(LOL...they r so worried....)and she too calls someone and tells the person that Nakku was a bit tensed....


Somewhere a person gets up in a hurry...goes to the bathroom and freshes up changes his clothes and without having breakfast or even saying anything to anyone jumps in the car and droves off......


Scene shifts to Nakusha

Nakusha was in her cabin standing near the window and just gazing out....she didn't knew where she was gazing.or what she was seeing.....coz her mind was full of scary thoughts......


The person stops the car in front of huge building which had the letters P&M engraved on it...the person gets out of the car hands the keys tp the security and rushes in....

The Person to the receptionist...: Hey Pooja....kya baat hai tum phone pe kuch bata rahi thi...

Pooja: Haan Sir who Nakusha ma'am thodi pareshan lagrahi thi..Unhone aapke baare mein kuch nahi poocha aur aapka naam bhi nhai liya.....

The Person a bit tensed after hearing this: Ok main dekhta hun....and he goes into nakusha's cabin...

Naksuha had her back to him and she was still gazing out...

The Person: Hey Beautiful.....

After hearing his voice her lips curved into a smile...all her scary thoughts disappeared within seconds......But then she sees her watch and her expressions changes into anger....

Nakusha: 15 minutes late....

the person who was smiling suddenly gets a bit scared.

The Person: Jab koi Hi bolta hai toh normally log us Hi ka jawab dete hain.....iss tarah interrogate nai karte.....

Nakusha while turning: Tum aaj 15 minutes late ho....Kya excuse hai aapke paas Mr. Dutta Sriram Patil..and she faces him......

Hope u guyz like it....

Plz press the LIKE button and leave ur comments....😳


Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago

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