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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello everyone....sorry i could not reply to everyones comment....but thank u all for liking it and appreciating my work....i have a thing to be cleared..as many of my readers may not have read my note.....😃

Note: Dutta and Nakusha were childhood friends....they went to the same school......later Ganpath moves his house to some other place as he wanted to do something big in his life.......which separates Tasha.....after few years they again meet at the college.....Nakku initially doesnot recognize him...but later after knowing that they were childhood friends they again become friends and this time forever...
Hope this might have helped everyone....😃

Part 14..
....Yeh Mohabbat....

They were so lost in their thoughts that they didn't realize that Nakku was high...she went from there.....and tells the DJ to stop the music....the music stops and everyone stops dancing and looks at th DJ.....Dutta notices that Nakku is not with them they start looking for her here and there....the lights goes off and only one spotlight is on a girl near the dancing floor....JiYa(Baji+Riya) look towards the dancing floor but Dutta does not care to look that way coz he was busy looking for his Nakku....he was worried for her.....suddenly the music starts.....JiYa try to look closely as to who the girl is and Ta-Da....Nakku turns singing...

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah zara zara .. Oooo ooo ooo

JiYa's mouth goes wide open.....Baji rubs his eyes to see if its real....he sees Nakku dancing...he pats Dutta' shoulder...Dutta looks at Baji..and Baji points his finger towards the dance floor...Dutta's gaze follows Baji's finger and his eyes pop out seeing Nakku dance....

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Oooo ooo ooo

Dutta was worried coz firstly she was drunk....secondly she was doing a seductive dance...and thirdly she was in a nightclub.......Dutta was glaring at Baji for supporting Nakku and letting her drink the vodka.....he goes towards Nakku to stop her..but she pulls him and starts dancing around him....

(Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum ) .. 2

Dutta tries to stop her and take her away...but she comes closer to him....puts her hands around his neck...and sings...

Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

Ah zara zara .. Oooo ooo ooo

She puts her lips close to his..and then pushes him...in a teasing way....

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Oooo ooo ooo

She goes to the dance floor and starts dancing again....she sways with the music...everyone in the nightclub starts enjoying her dance.....Baji turns towards Riya as he could not see her dance like this and Riya was just looking at Nakku shocked....

*MUSIC*

(Tere hi tera hi intezaar hai
Mujhe to bas tujhse pyaar hai
Tera hi tera abb khumaar hai
Khud pe na mere ikhtiyaar hai ) 2


She comes close to Dutta...puts her one hand on his face....she smiles at him naughtily...and winks at him...Dutta smiles at her...but again realizes that she is drunk...and again tries to get hold of her....she goes away till he could get her.....and laughs at him...Dutta covers his face with his palms in defeat...he was getting frustrated.....at his inability to stop her....from doing this stuff.....

(Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum ) .. 2


Dutta looks at her and gets swayed by her beauty and grace......he has a naughty smile on his face....his eyes get dreamy....

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Oooo ooo ooo

Dutta goes near her....and holds her by her waist......Nakku turns and looks at him...they both get lost into each others eyes.....

*Music*

(Yeh dard-e-dil to ho na agar
Sataye abb dooriyon ka gum
Behek jaye na yeh kadam
Hai tujhe meri jaan ki kasam ) .. 2

He holds her face...and caresses her cheeks....he then puts his arms across her waist...he moves her hair and kisses on her shoulder...he then kisses her neck...and licks it...

Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum

She turns to face him....he kisses her forehead..then kisses both her cheeks..then he kisses her earlobe....and when he goes to kiss her lips....he closes his eyes...

Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara
Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara
Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me
Ah Zara Zara
Oooo ooo ooo) .. 2

(Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum
Dum da dum da dum
Bin tere sanam is jahan mein
Beqkaar hum) 3

Baji says Riya...that he can't take this anymore...and he will tell Dutta to stop this....Riya comes with Baji to Dutta...Dutta was lost in his dreams...Baji comes and pats his shoulder and brings him back to his senses..he thinks to himself that he was dreaming all this......

*Song finishes....*

He then goes to Nakku and stops her....he picks her in his arms.....tells Baji to take Riya home as he is taking Nakku....Baji agrees....

Outside the nightclub....Nakku was still humming the song...Dutta makes her sit in the car....he closes the door and goes to sit in the driver's seat....while Nakku opens the door and starts swinging with it...Dutta pulls her inside and closes the door again....she then looks at him....

Nakku: Tum kaun ho??

Dutta(with a straight face) : Bhoot...abb chup chaap baitho...

Nakku (with a childish face): Haww...tum bhoot ho...??...lekin bhoot logon ke faces bohat gandi hoti hai...tumhari shakal toh kitni cute hai...(she touches his nose...)..tumhari nose kitni cute hai.....

Dutta smiles at Nakku's innocence..he puts his finger on his lips and says to Nakku: Shhh...quite..

Nakku: Tum kaun hote ho mujhe chup karane wale...tum mere Dutta ko nahi jaante....agar usey pata chal gaya na..ki tum mujhe kidnap karke lejaa rahe ho toh woh tumhe chodega nahi....

Dutta: Kidnap??...maine kab kaha ki maine tumhe kidnap kar raha hoon...??..aur Shona.....tum kya bol rahi ho tumhe khud nahi pata....

Nakku: Ussey kya farak padta hai...main toh mere Dutta ko yahi bolungi ki tum mujhe kidnap kar rahe thay.....aur tum mujhe Shona kyun bula rahe ho....main tumhari nahi...Dutta ki Shona hoon...

Dutta: How mean..??...accha baba main tumhe Shona nahi bulaunga....fine..now??

Nakku: Haan..its fine...tumhe gaadi chalani nahi aati??

Dutta confused: Aati hai kyun??

Nakku: Toh phir tum gaadi chala kyun nahi rahe ho...mujhe ghar jaana hai...chalo...

Dutta: Accha meri maa..chalo.....

On the whole way Nakku was blabbering and Dutta was getting irritated...but he chose to stay calm...they reach the Mehra Mansion...

Dutta gets out and takes Nakku out....he picks her in his arms....Nakku starts singing again...

Nakku: Zara Zara Touch me....Zara Zara kiss me...(Dutta looks at her and smiles.....he takes her to her room......puts her on the bed......he removes her stilletoes......makes her lie down and covers her with the duvet.......he sits beside her....caresses her hair...and tells her to sleep.....he starts going when she holds his hand.....)

Nakku: Tum mujhe chodke kahan jaa rahe ho..??

Dutta(turns to her): Main tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaa raha hoon...tum so jao...

Nakku: Nahi..tum mere paas baitho...mujhe chodke kahin mat jao...

Dutta sits beside her and holds her hand: Main tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaaunga.....promise...

Nakku: Tum sachme mujhe chodke kahin nahi jaaoge....agar main tumse jhagda karoon..tab bhi tum mujhe chodke nahi jaaoge na....??

Dutta: Nahi.....main tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaaunga...

Nakku: Agar main tumhe maaru.....agar main tumhe stupid...ya idiot kahun tab bhi tum mujhe chodke mahi jaaoge na??

Dutta smiles: Nahi....main tab bhi tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaaunga...

Nakku: Agar main kahoon...ki mujhe tumhari Kala tai acchi nahi lagti tab bhi tum mujhe chodke kahin nahi jaaoge na??

Dutta chuckles at her childishness: Nahi baba..main tumhe chodke kahin nahi jaaunga.....abhi so jaao....

Nakku falls asleep.....Dutta looks at her sleeping innocently....he kisses her forehead...switches the ligts off....he goes and stands near the window......and starts recollecting all the words which Nakku had said....He feels that he should do something to make Nakku realize that he is always there for her.......he decides what he has to do......the next morning.....

Nakku wakes up with heavy head......Dutta comes in with a tray of Coffee....he sits in front of her.....

Dutta: Good Morning....

Nakku still sleepy: Good morning...

Dutta: Get up lazy head......subah ho gayi hai.....coffee peelo...u'll be fresh...(he gives her the coffee mug....tells her to drink it and fresh up....he leans in kisses her forehead...and goes away...)

Nakku looks at him going.....she sips the coffee....and gets out of the bed...to take a shower...she comes out wearing casuals..jeans and a shirt...with 3/4th sleeves....she comes down...to have breakfast....Dutta was already waiting for her at the dining table....

She smiles at him and sits beside him......they start eating their breakfast....Nakku was eating an apple......she was silent as she didnd't remember what she said last night...Dutta looks at her....she looks at him....then looks down....she finally asks him...

Nakku: Kal maine kuch zyada toh nahi kaha na??

Dutta: Nahi...tumne kuch nahi kaha.....

Nakku: Aur maine kuch kiya toh nahi na...?? (a bit embarrassed...)

Dutta(chuckles..): Nahi....lekin kya tum kuch karna chahti thi??....hmmm....

Nakku looks at him..: Huh..??...tumhare sapne mein....(she puts her head on his shoulder....)

Nakku: Am sorry....mujhe vodka nahi peena chahiye tha....maine tumhe bohat pareshan kiya na??

Dutta looks at her: Abb jo hogaya so hogaya..hum uss baare mein baat nahi karenge...aur tumne mujhe bohat pareshan kiya..lekin mujhe accha laga....(he kisses her head..)

Abb chalo jaldi se breakfast karo.....mujhe airport jaana hai....(saying so he gets up....Nakku was still sitting....she turns to him...and asks..)

Nakku: Airport???

Dutta: Haan airport....Sab log shaadi se wapas aarahe hai aaj...bhool gayi....

Nakku: oh haan....main toh bhool hi gayi...theek hai main bhi chalti hoon tumhare saath airport....ok...

Dutta: Nahi...iski zaroorat nahi hai..main jaa raha hoon na....tum office jao...agar wahan koi nahi hoga...toh kaam kaun dekhega...haina..??

Nakku thinks: Hmm....ok...main office chali jaaungi....tum airport chale jaana....(saying so she goes to get her jacket.....the one which Dutta gifted her...in their college days....she always wore this jacket...)

She comes down...takes her car keys and goes to the office saying Bye to Dutta....after she leaves Dutta sits in his car and goes to the airport.....

after some time...at MehraMansion...

everyone were sitting in the living room....Ayi Saheb....Ganpath...Babi....Baji...Riya...Roops Leela......

Kala went directly to Patil Niwas as she was not interested in coming to Mehra's...so she made an excuse of being tired.....

Mehra Mansion:

Everyone were waiting for Dutta...as he told them that he has something to say.....

Dutta comes in.....

Ayi Saheb: Dutta..beta..kya baat karni thi tujhe hum sabse.....tumne hum sabko yahan kyun bulaya hai...??

Dutta: Ayi woh...mujhe aap sab se ijazath(permission) leni thi....

Ayi Saheb: Ijazath(Permission)...??

Dutta: Haan ayi....(he looks at Ganpath and Babi...he approaches them...sits on his knees in front of them.....Ganpath and Babi looks puzzled....)

Dutta: Sir....Aunty....mujhe aap dono se kuch poochna tha....

Ganpath: Haan poocho..??

Dutta: Main...aapki beti Nakusha se bohat pyar karta hoon.....(Ayi Saheb and Babi gets shocked...)

Dutta: Main usey apnana chahta hoon...apni saari zindagi uske saath bitana chata hoon....uska haath thaamna chahta hoon.....usey apni zindagi banana chahta hoon....Kya aap apni beti ka haath mere haath mein denge...??...(the whole living room was silent.....everyone were waiting for Ganpath's answer.....)

Ganpath gets up walks a bit away from Dutta...with his hands folded back....his back facing Dutta....everyone gets up...Dutta turns to look at Ganpath...he puts his head down.......

after few minutes of silence..Ganpath says...

Ganpath: Ek sharth par....main tumse yeh nahi kehta hoon...ki tumhe meri beti ko hamesha khush rakhna hoga......bas itna chahta hoon...ki chahe jitni hi mushkilein aaye.....jitne bhi gham ho....tum meri beti ka saath kabhi nahi chodoge.....uska haath hamesha thamoge.....agar tum mujhse yeh vaada karte ho toh main tumhe apni beti ka haath dene ke liye taiyyar hoon....

Dutta was shocked to hear a yes from Ganpath...everyone gets happy....after hearing Gnapaths answer...

Dutta: Main aapse vaada karta hoon....ki main aapki beti ka saath kabhi nahi chodunga.....Main Dutta SreeRam Patil...Nakusha Mehra ka saath kabhi nahi chodunga....uska haath hamesha ke liye thamunga....

Ganpath opens his arms and gestures Dutta to hug him...Dutta hugs him.....

Dutta: Thank u sir...thank u...

Ganpath: Sir nahi...uncle.....jaise tum mujhe bachpan mein bolte thay....

Dutta: Uncle...(his eyes well up....

Ayi Saheb and Babi hug each other.....Riya and Baji hug each other......Roops and Leela were also very happy......

Ayi Saheb blesses Dutta...Babi...kisses his forehead....Baji comes to him running and jumps on him and hugs him....

Baji: Bhaooooo....yeh toh bohat accha surprise tha....mubarak ho bhao congratulations.....main aapke liye bohat khush hoon.....bohat...

Leela and Roops come to him and hug him together......

Roops: Ab jaldi se hum log yeh baat Nakku vayheni ko bata dete hain...woh bhi bohat khush hojaayegi....haina...??

Dutta: Nahi...yeh baat Nakku ko abhi mat batana....main usey surprise dena chahta hoon.....mere paas ek plan hai....(he tells them his plan....and they all agree.....)


Hope u guyz have liked it.....

Plz press the like button and leave ur comments....😳


Precap: Nakku and Dutta getting engaged...for real......😳

Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yay!! u updated

haha drunk naku dancing was funi...awwww dutta started dreaming of kissing her... their convo in the car was funi....sayin he's nt dutta..lol...haha....the convo in bed was cute too...they r made for each other m glad dutta planned 2 marry her 2 shw he'll neva leave her
surprised ganpat agreed for the marriage i thought u sed he wud create problems? changed ur mind??
cnt w8 2 knw hw dutta plans 2 tel naku tht he's spoken 2 his parents n they hav agreed for the marriage😃
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH Bushy 😊
Love the drunken state of Naku 😆
perfect choice of song
Loved it
and wow i love the way DUtta ask his n her family members
so cute 😃
im dying to know the plan
he had in his mind for Naku 😳

GR8 update :)👏
Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

dear ...... you made my day

very sweet 😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Im so sorry for the late comment *holds ears* Maafi memsaab ...Ok lets get reading...
To the update... Hailaa Nakku high Yeh to gayi kaam se.. Haha JiYa saw her but awww Dutta is so cute, he didn't even check out who's dancing as he's looking for her.. Zara zara touch me Oi Oi... Kya gana chunna hai Vaaah.. Great Choice!...LMAO his eyes popped out when he saw her I can totally imagine the cartoon like pop out hehe.. Haii this reminds me of DMG lol.. Ridhima danced seductively around armaan on this song in the canteen... Hailaaa.. Dutta was dreaming of kissing her in the middle of the disco LMAO Awww he's too cuteee... LOL Car convo is hilarious... Tum kaun ho? Bechari cnt even recognise Dutta lool... When she's on the bed asking him those questions, i had a vision of Dil to pagal hai when Karishma holds SRK's hand and starts asking him Qs.. Hmm did u just watch DTPH?... Hailaaaa Pagal wasis are bak lol.. Good kala went home, annoyin chudail.. Awwwwwwwww Dutta asked Nakku's hand.. n HAILA Hitler said yes?... Hailaaaa yeh hitler to ram ban gaya.. I bet they will all surprise nakku with the engagement.. init?
Great updateeeee... Sorry for the essay... Thanks for the PM... Continue Soon
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

yay!! u updated....ya i updated..lol...

haha drunk naku dancing was funi...awwww dutta started dreaming of kissing her... their convo in the car was funi....sayin he's nt dutta..lol...haha....the convo in bed was cute too...they r made for each other m glad dutta planned 2 marry her 2 shw he'll neva leave her..thanx its cute na....i always wanted Nakku to get drunk and do somehting like this ...😆
surprised ganpat agreed for the marriage i thought u sed he wud create problems? changed ur mind??..ya..i changed my mind coz wat i hav thought for the future needs Ganpath to be goody goody now..😉😆
cnt w8 2 knw hw dutta plans 2 tel naku tht he's spoken 2 his parents n they hav agreed for the marriage😃...hope i live upto ur expectations....😳

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dear ...... you made my day

very sweet 😉


Awww thank u so much....for liking it...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update dear............................
OMG Nakku danced on zara zara touch me.....
wow Dutta handld her very calmly.................... he too lost in her thoughts😆
loved Nakku's blabbering😆..............................
Dutta listened to her all the way & still remain calm........superbbb yaar.................
Even in morning he dunno tease her with what she did last night......................
So sweet of him..................
wow he fanillay told Nakku's parents that he loves her.....................
Now waiting for his surprise for NAkku.....................
thanks for the pm .....................
update soon..........................
Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago
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Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me Touch Me
Ah Zara Zara Kiss Me Kiss Me Kiss Me
Ah Zara Zara Hold Me Hold Me Hold Me

wow!!!!!!!!! I was just imagining nakku dancing on ......tasha night out with jiya in the night club was superb..........Dutta asks prmisssion to he eders to marry nakku..........ganpat too gives the permission to do so..........dutta is going to give superb surprise to nakku to mae hr feel special...........a superb updt..........continue sooooooon.........
precap is awesome...........jst waiting eagerly..............
BTW, I m fine....... was waiting fr th updt eagerlyyyyy.........glad u did it.......... no problem fr the delay....... u gave us a wonderfully long and beautiful updt with a awesome precap.........Thanx fr PM........ Cya........
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Posted: 14 years ago

ahahaha bles hr man shez soo cute n D is such an amazin guy!! 1 of a kind...

da way he handld evrifn wz jus 😍
awhh he cudn keep awy 4rm hr 4 lng! bless
awwwwww luvd tashaz convo..rli funy n soo sweet..
o m g ddd he rli do dat! infrnt of evri1.. round of aplaus 4 hm lol 👏
yeahhh ganpat agreed!! 🥳
cnt waait 4 ya nxt upd8 hun....luvn da precap...
thnx 4 pm.xxx

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