New FF..Yeh Mohabbat..updated..LAST part-pg 57!! - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
OH BUshyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Superb updates
Im so loving ur FF
the story line , character sketch
everything is just wow
im drooling
i love the beginning
it was so strong and Baaji entry was xceptional
and the way Dutta realize his love
and Naku also realizing her love for DUtta
all is soooooooo awesome
the song and music u insert in ur updates sooooooooooooooo beautiful
love it bushy

Sorry darling for commenting late
and thank u soooo much for pming :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
o m g lol ganpat saw dem 2gva gud fng dey wernt doin much lmao...
awhh G tld D 2 luk afta naku dat wz so sweet n da way D responded lyk a kid bles hm..
it wz so sweet da way he wz lukn at da daughta-fathrly luv..😍
gr8 upd8 hun n thnx 4 pm..continue soon.x
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank god Ganpat isn't angry...I thought he would be...but he gave D the responsibilty of Naku..awww
Baji's Nakus bro how sweet...shes going with him to cheer him on!😳
great update!
Thanks for the pm and update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
for a moment i thought ganpath would get mad at dutta but glad he didnt ... nice updt good to see everything moving smoothly in this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiee bushy🤗
maafi i missed to comment on last part😳.....naa u update next part early he naa 😆.....
main kabhi nahi sudharungi😆
ok second last part😳............i just luv kala n nakkus encounter👏....Tasha scene aww nice😳.....baaji is tooo good he respect naaku more dan kala .... dats good👏
last part..... ooo ganpath sw dem ... i thought he will be angry....dats good he trust Dutaa n gv responsibility of nakku.... nice part bushy👏👏👏👏👏
if next tym i forget do bombarding of pm 😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey bushu merry christmas and happy new year. nice part dear. oh ho dutta in nakus room and ganpat saw them to hug eachother. thank god ganpat not angry on him. how can he i think he knows dutta is soon become his damaad isiliye he give N's responsiblity to D.now D&N akele akele in the house how romantic. sorry 4 let reply.next prt upd8 soon.thank 4 pm tc &keep pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone.....Thank u all for liking my part and leaving so beautiful comments they encourage me to continue......thank u so much......

Part13...
... Yeh Mohabbat.....

After a while Dutta was in the living room...he was looking at the photos hanging on the wall....there were his and Nakku's photos......He was looking at them and reliving his memories.....He was looking at the photo where they were kids...Nakku wearing a white frock..her hair were short...while Dutta was wearing a white tee and blue shorts.....They both were looking in different directions facing their backs to each other....That was the photo of their first fight....Dutta smiles at the photoand looks at the other one....where Nakku was playing cricket with him....He was bowling and she was batting...Dutta remembers how he cheated and won the game....and how the little Nakku hit him with the bat for cheating....He could hear the little Nakku's voice....

Little Nakku(with an angry face): Dutta is a cheater.....Dutta Sriram Patil is a cheater and i don't like cheaters....

Little Dutta: I am not a cheater...you are a cheater....i won the game..u lost it...

After hearing this Nakku hits him with the bat and runs away from there.....

Dutta laughs after remembering this moment....He then shifts his gaze to another photo....They were grown up..and this was their college photo...Dutta picked Nakku on his back..while Nakku wrapped her arms aroud his neck...Another photo of they both showing tongues to each other...They was another photo of him holding her in his arms and they both smiling heartily at each other...

All these photos made him feel that how the times have changed...How they both changed as they grew up....But one picture made him realize that whatever it may be but some things never change....There was this photo which had little Nakku sit on a bench with an angry face and her arms crossed across her chest...and little Dutta was sitting on his knees holding his ears...looking down....The same kind of photo was hanging beside this one but here they were grown up..but still Nakku was sitting on a bench with her arms crossed across her chest with an angry look....and Dutta sitting on his knees holding his ears looking down.....He could remember that who ever may have started the fight but at the end only Dutta would say sorry to her..........

Just then Nakku comes and hugs him from back bringing him back to the present....Dutta turns to face her...

Nakku: Kya kar rahe ho??

Dutta: Kuch nahi...hamari purani yaadon ko phirse jee raha tha....(he points at the photos)

Nakku looking at the photos: Oh toh tum hamari photos dekh rahe thay..

Dutta: Haan....hamara bachpan kitna ajeeb tha na...kitna ladte thay hum dono..

Nakku: Haan bohat jhagadte thay hum dono.....lekin jhagda hamesha tum hi toh shuru karte thay...

Dutta: Accha...toh jhagda hamesha main shuru karta tha......jaise ki tum kuch karti hi nahi thi..haina??

Nakku: Of course....tum hi aise situations create karte thay jisse jhagda shuru hota tha.......

Dutta: Main aise situations create karta tha..??...What do u mean??

Nakku: Agar tum jhagda shuru hi nhai karte thay.....toh hamesha tumhi sorry kyun bolte thay??...

Dutta: Woh main jhagda shuru karne ke liye sorry nahi bolta tha....

Nakku: Toh phir kisliye bolte thay..??

Dutta: Woh main gusse mein tum par bohat zyada chillata tha na..isiliye tumse sorry bolta tha...(he makes a puppy face...she looks at him..she palms his face..)

Nakku: Aww....toh mera Dutta isiliye mujhse sorry bolta tha??...

Dutta still with the puppy face looks at her and nods in a yes....

Nakku nods with him and kisses his cheeks...Dutta takes her hands into his and kisses them...he then kisses her forehead and they both hug...

They break the hug...and look at the photos again...

Dutta: U Know what..??....i think hame yahan ek badi si jagah banani padegi...

Nakku: Kyun...??

Dutta: Kyunki..yahan hum hamari shaadi ki photo lagayenge..ek badi si..photo..main sherwani mein aur tum laal shaadi ke jode mein..meri khoobsurat dulhan ke roop mein....

Nakku's eyes lit up: Shaadi ki photo...great idea....lekin yeh tabhi hoga jab hamari shaadi hogi...

Dutta: Hogi hogi..hamari shaadi bohat jald hogi....(he winks at her)..

Nakku: Ok...usey jab hona hai tab hogi....lekin abhi tum yahan se jao....shaam ko milte hain...and Dutta don't be late haan..plz..

Dutta: Ok baba...i won't be late....tum apna khayal rakhna....ok.cya..tc...(he kisses her forehead and goes...)

Nakku tries on different dresses....she gets confused...then finally she chooses a dress.....tries it on...and looks happy and satisfied.....she then calls Riya...

Nakku: Hey Riya...

Riya: Hey Nakku....

Nakku: Tu aaj shaam ko kya pehen rahi hai??
Riya: Main toh woh dress pehen rahi hoon jo Baji ne mujhe gift kiya ha..

Nakku: Wow..toh finally you are wearing it....kisne kaha....Baji ne kaha tujhe woh pehenne ke liye..??...haan bol??
Riya: Nahi..maine khud select kiya....

Nakku: Ohhh......so u decided haan..

Riya: Tu bata..kya pehen rahi hai...?
Nakku: Wahi dress jo maine last week tere boutique se purchase kiya tha...

Riya: wow...tu usme bohat acchi lagegi...Dutta pagal hojaayega...*she chuckles*

Nakku: OMG...agar woh pagal hojaayega toh main usey kaise sambhaalungi...waise bhi usey sambhaalna mushkil hai...aur agar woh pagal hogaya toh aur bhi mushkil hojaayega.....*they both laugh together*

Nakku: Accha chal shaam ko milte hain...bye....cya..

Riya: Cya...

They both get ready....and wait for their respective partners to come.....

Baji comes wearing a a black shirt and navy blu jeans.....he waits for Riya......she come sout wearing a purple one shoulder knee length dress......Baji looks at her......mesmerized by her beauty.....he goes near her...takes her hand in his and kisses it....she looks down shyly....Baji takes her to the car..opens the door for her....and after she sits he goes and sits in the drivers seat and drives off to the nightclub.....


Here at Mehra Mansion:

Nakku was ready...she was wearing a sea green frock type knee length party dress......her hair was curled....she was wearing a transparent lip gloss.....she was looking beautiful.....

Dutta come sin wearing a brown shirt with sleeves rolled up...and blue jeans he comes in...and calls Nakku..

Dutta: Shona....kahan ho..jaldi karo...we r getting late..Baji wahan pohanch bhi gaya hoga....Shona...(he turns and stops...looking at Nakku.....)

She was looking beautiful...he was awed by her simplicity...the sea green color was making her look even more stunning...and the stilletoes were complementing her silky smooth legs...she was waiting for him to say something......Dutta was falling short of words.....he comes close to her.....struggles to say something...moves his hand through his hair....clears his throat..

Dutta: Err...tum...tum...tum bohat hot lag rahi ho...(he looks down..)

Nakku smiles: Jaanti hoon...abhi chalein...coz we are getting late..

Dutta smiles back: Haan...chalo.....(Dutta keeps his hand around her waist.....they both go to the car...he opens the door for her...after she sits he goes and sits on the driver's seat and they head to the nightclub...

Baji with Riya were waiting for Tasha....

Baji: Main jaanta tha..yeh dono late hojaayenge....zaroor bhao ko Nakku hot lagi hogi and they must be sharing a long eyelock....

Riya: Baji....tum toh aise bol rahe ho jaise tum mujhe ghoorte hi nahi ho..

Baji: Riya..of course main tumhe ghoorta hoon.....lekin meri timing always sahi hoti hai....aise kahin pe bhi shuru nahi hojata hoon main...bhao ki tarah..

Riya: Shayad woh dono raaste mein hi honge...

Baji: They better come fast....

Riya: Arey woh dono aagaye....(Baji turns to look at them......)

Baji: Actually Nakku sach mein hot lag rahi hai...what say Riya..??
Riya: Yeah...she is looking hot....lekin agar Dutta ne sunliya na toh tumhe chodega nahi...

Baji: Tum mujhe dara rahi ho..main bhao se darta warta nahi hoon....*he turns to Riya and says pleadingly*...plz bhao ko mat batana ke main unke aane se pehle kya bol raha tha..plzzz...

Riya laughs: Ok baba nahi bataungi....lekin tum theek se khade raho..warna Dutta ko shak hojaayega...

Baji stands straight...and smiles at Tasha...

Riya: Hey guys..kahan thay tum dono..??
Nakku: Traffic bohat zyada thi na toh late hogaya....abb andar chalein.....??

Four of them go inside and sit on a table...at the corner......

A Waiter comes to take the order...

The girls order a orange juice while the boys decide to have vodka......DuJi go to the counter and order for vodka...while the girls wait for them..then Nakku has a thought...she looks at Riya with a naughty smile...Riya understands Nakku's expressions..

Riya: Nakku....no....tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...

Nakku: Riya....lets try it na..

Riya: Nahi..tujhe try karna hai toh tu kar...but spare me..mujhe try nahi karna hai...

Nakku: Riya dont be a spoilsport...chal na...

Riya was adamant that she wont try this....Nakku looses and goes to the bar counter alone...she goes and stands beside Baji...

Nakku: Hey guyz...

DuJi: Hey...tum yahan kya kar rahi ho....aur Riya wahan akeli kyun baithi hai...??
Nakku: Well..Riya ne kaha ki usey woh try nahi karna hai jo mujhe try karna hai...isiliye woh nahi aayi..

DuJi gets confused..: Tumhe kya try karna hai....??

Nakku: Wahi jo tum log kar rahe ho...(pointing towars the vodka..)

DuJi look at the vodka and gets shocked...: Tumhe vodka peena hai..??

Nakku: Yup....chalo shuru karte hain...

DuJi look at each other and then at Nakku...

Dutta: Nakku you are not serious...tum vodka nahi peeyogi...

Nakku: Dutta..i am serious..main vodka peeyungi.....

Dutta: Maine kaha nahi...go and sit with Riya...

Nakku gets angry: Mujhe vodka peena hai.....or else i am leaving.....

Baji gets confused between the two....: Bhao...peene do...waise bhi hum dono hai na..we will take care of her...

Dutta: Baji...tu samajh nahi raha hai...Nakku ne kabhi vodka nahi piya hai....she will get high once she drinks...

Nakku: Its decided....main vodka piyungi....(she looks at Dutta and pouts....Dutta gives in....and orders vodka...for three of them.....)

Baji calls Riya to join them..Riya stands beside Baji.....while Nakku stands between DuJi....

The vodka is ready....Baji shows her how to drink it...she looks at him...and then the three of them have it together...Dutta looks at Nakku worried...as she coughs.....

Dutta: Nakku..are you alright....i told u not to have it...but u wont listen to me at all...(b4 he could complete Nakku interrupts in between..)
Nakku: Yayyyyy,.....one more one more....(she beams like a small kid....)

Baji: Yeah..one more...chalo.....bhao...c'maon she is fine...

They order for one more....Riya keeps cheering them....

They three have it again...together.....and like this they complete 12 shots...Baji was surprised as Nakku had 12 shots back to back...and Dutta was worried...

They were so lost in their thoughts that they didn't realize that Nakku was high...she went from there.....and tells the DJ to stop the music....the music stops and everyone stops dancing and looks at th DJ.....


Hope u guyz have liked this part....
Plz press the LIKE button...and leave ur comments...😳

Precap: Nakku drunk....starts dancing to Zara Zara Touch Me Touch Me...and everyone shocked....
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeepppiii me first to comment.......................
Awesome update Bushy.....................
wow TaSha's Childhood memories........................ that so sweet.......................
Awwww Dutta remembring how they grown up together......................
And one thing is not changed that who so ever started a fight but
its only Dutta who say SORRY 😆..........................
Oye Hoye Shaddi ki palanning 😉.................
I thought they again gonna fight on that who started fight..................
But thank GOD they didn't.....................
So they all ready for the evening.......................
Hailla Bajji said hot to Nakku.....................
I wish Dutta could hear this..........................
OMG Nakku too wants to try vodka....................
And she had 12 shots😲..............
It gonna be really tough for Dutta to handle her........................
update soon dear......................Soon means Soon not after ages😉
Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
a very nice updt................Tasha and Jiya go to a nightclub.................. There Duji and Nakku drink Vodka........... 12 shots.............. precap is more interesting.................Nakkus dance on zara touch me touch me frm Race...............looking frwrd fr the nxt updt................Continue sooooooooooon.....
Thanx 4 PM
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Hey bushy🤗.........awesome update yaar😛😛😛....wow Tasha's Bachpan ......awwwww😳 i lyk ir photo's idea.....great👏👏👏....best ws 1 thing nvr changed D on knee n say sowree😍 ...........awwwsomeeeeeee😳😳😳
wow in pub....vodka....12 shots😲...yipeeeeeeeeeeeee....zara zara touch me.....i luv to see D😍
great...bushy ji lage raho😳😆
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