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Musarrat

@mussy.jamshed

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

I feel so sad for Nakusha, since birth she is not decision maker of her own fate......she never asked anything for self. selflessly lived all her life, did whatever her mom said......then she met dutta. then she did so many things for him? She made him understand life, fight with darkness within and comprehend things carefully. She saved him from death so many times n did all that she could do selflessly THEN............she was wrong only once..........not revealing her real face to dutta....was it for herself......''No''........She never feared to lose him, for her she never wanted dutta to lose faith in life. We all are mere mortal, bound to commit mistakes........if kala got a chance from dutta then why not nakusha who did so much for him......he himself said ' naku transformed him'.........This time with FR proceeding, I at no cost want dutta to name nakusha as deceitful liar or betrayer......how long can u mask yourself........you can mask your face but u can't mask your heart. your eyes can never lie......your actions never lie.......I also feel for dutta because he has not seen much love in life n always betrayal.......then what about Nakusha?

She has never seen any good in life either......She grew up and got herself wrapped under the mask of ugliness. whenever that face got revealed, her chastity was in danger......she loved dutta selflessly and got named as betrayer. every time she is put to test and all she does is '' have faith in bappa' because she as mere mortal cannot control the consequences........more than dutta I feel for Nakusha ........she is so selfless and innocent............and if this time dutta misunderstood her. May be he never truly loved her ..........

masoom si mohabbat ka bus itna sa fasana hai..
kagaz ki haveli hai, baarish ka zamaana hai..
kya shart-e-mohabbat hai, kya shart-e-zamana hai..
awaz bhi zakhmi hai aur wo geet bhi gana hai..
uss per utarne ki umeed bahut kam hai..
kashti bhi puraani hai, tufaan bhi aana hai..
samajhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz-e-mohabbat ka..
bheegi hui ankho se ek sher sunaana hai..
bholi si ada, koi fir ishq ki jid par hai..
fir aag ka dariya hai.. aur doob hi jana hai ..

Love you Nakusha.........I can't see you sad at all........if bappa can forgive our sins which we commit repeatedly then why can't dutta spare nakusha for this mistake.........I wish he shows his big heart n accept her wholeheartedly..........aik dosray kay dard pe marham rakh day kash aisa hi ho ..............
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Edited by mussy.jamshed - 14 years ago

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@bfunofbb123

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Ohh mussy dear what a beautiful poast u have written u got me all😭😭 4 naku so true yaar. we humans r so selfish 4 our selfish reasons u stated it beautifully mussy so no need 4 me to say it. u r absolutely right what ever naku does b it her mom or dutta she does things wholeheartedly & selfless. she hid her true self 4 her mom & she did so many hings 4 dutta & as u said is she not alowed 1 mistake it is not even a mistake it is her majburi(her helpness )bcoz of her mom & society. dutta has been at the receiving end as well he has been betrayed so many times but he should try to understand her after he has calmed it is like AS said who would hide their beauty unless it is majburi i hope the CVs don't drag it much & show us tasha unite & dutta accepting her & kala failing big time.😉

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@ImmaculateDream

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

aww! good one Mussarat .. chalo im glad that u guys have started to reconnect with her .. 😊

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gp00

@gp00

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Mussy, you are very sweet, you do know that, right?

There is one point as you know that I differ on:

"I feel so sad for Nakusha, since birth she is not decision maker of her own fate......she never asked anything for self. selflessly lived all her life, did whatever her mom said......"

To a large extent, you are right. She has not been in a position to make her own decisions for most of her life. And quite frankly, so are many other females, not just from the slum or born too pretty. Naku is a sweet character, but as usual, in Hindi serials, if you are shown as sweet, then you must be mentally deficient or naive or easily manipulated or helpless OR all of those things rolled up into one.

I think we focus too much on how unfair and cruel life has been to this character. It is not all of humanity's fault, it is the situation she was in, through no fault of her own. Believe it or not, I do understand that. But where I depart from others, is that we have used her background and oh, life has been so cruel to her so she doesn't know any better as an excuse for actions and lack of honesty. But again, this interpretation of mine is because I am who I am, who I developed into...my code, if you will. I cannot disagree with you...I would like to see her happy too. But I want her to learn a lesson in this too...that personal responsibility is important and if you can give great speeches to Dutta about love, and flowers, and all the pretty things in the world, then you should know what honesty is too. And I want Dutta to make it clear to her that that type of stuff is not his style.

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-Srushti-

@-Srushti-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

Wow...mussy am so very overwhelmed👏

and even i do feel her pain.... i know dutta has gone through a lot ....but what about nakku.... it seems the story is about her....but nobody actually gives a hoot about her....she is such a beautiful character....and the way she confessed before AS ..... it actually was the story of her life without the usual rona dhona drama like most other protagonists character of other serials..........i love her courage, her selflessness and her obliviousness to every evil around her and her ability to see good even in the worst person...and you right she has taken some wrong decisions...but then so did dutta...and ek maafi to banti hai yaar....esp when everybody around her is not letting her take the right step😒 and sometimes it does happen that a person who can see right through others...fails to see through a way out of his/her own problems.... i think the same is with nakku...

but you have written it so beautifully...😳

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Srushti

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

u have described nakkus plight beautifully...agree with each and every word of urs...although we all want dutta to understand her but we know he wont as we r watching a daily soap where the cvs love to make us cry and play with our emotions. but still dont worry in the long run as we all know dutta will accept her whole heartedly

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Mussy..............First of all.................. ...........

This salute for ur "Shayari"........................Simply Beautifull................... ...................

Coming to the Topic..............I always felt bad for Nakku more than Dutta...........Dutta definitely had tough time in his life.......But,never had to please anyone in his life..............He did what he wished at least...............But,NAkku is unlucky here as well...................Thats the sad part of Nakku's Life...................

Yeah...Agree with you that Dutta should understand Nakku this time..........Otherwise,his love towards her look very pale & baseless.........Nakku has done wrong,eventhough its not totally her fault,she has a partnership in that with Babi.................So,Dutta's angriness is justified for the moment.........But,he should understand Nakku's reasoning & her "Majboori" when it is xplained to Dutta without any flaw or Kala's interference in it.............If Dutta fails to understand Nakku's "Majboori".then definitely Dutta's character looks pale as he has always shown who does understand the nedd of the poor people..................

I just hope,Dutta's reaction to Nakku's FR will be done in a sensible way................Dutta's reaction is something which will decide the future of LTL...........................It has to be done well & keeping the "Characters intact "...........................

Superbbbbbbbbbbbb...............Post Mussy.............

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pbtghosh

@pbtghosh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely post mussy .

mujhe hamesa naku achchi lagti hai dutta se jyada. but dutta is a short tempered person jisko jhoot se nafrat hai. agar achchi tara se dekha jai to dutta khubsurat chehre se darta hai kiun ki es khubsurat chehre se usko dhoka mila hai. waise hi uske dil ka halat use kabhi pata nehi chalta hai. jisko o nafrat samajh rahe hai acutally o dar hai. Kala, Lila, AS, Babi sabhi khubsurat hai unse to dutta nafrat nehi karta hai........ kiun ki usko ye nehi lagta ke inlog jhut bolenge ya dhoka denge......................jab tak naku ke sath dutta ka dosti ka relation tha tab tak thik tha per uske baad u se boldena chahie tha dutta ko apna sach..................as I fill dutta ko ye nehi lagega ke naku ne koi dhokebaji ki (kiun ke pure family ko pata hai naku ki sach ... agar naku dhokebaj hai to sabhi dhokebaj hai) per dutta ye soch ke bahat dukhi hoga ke naku ne usper bharosa nehi kiya.

naku ki galati ek hai jab ke dutta ke bahat sare against naku. per dutta ne kabhi naku ki bharosa todne layek kuch nehi kia hai. haan jabardasti shaadi kia hai per kisi ne ye note kia hai shaadi ke mandap me finally janese pehel ek bar ankho se naku ko pucha tha aur naku ne ankhe jhuka li thi . naku ne ek bar bhi nehi boli ke mujhe ye shaadi nehi karni. aur o to SR me bhi bahat kuch kar sakte the. Dutta ne kabhi naku ka bharosa nehi toda per naku ne tod di. thats all.

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Mussy.....

First and foremost, 👏👏👏👏👏👏 for the shaayari...It was mindblowing....and one of the most beautiful shaayari I have read....

But on your desc, I would tend to differ with you and more or less, I agree with Parul, especially the last part of her post....If Dutta forgives her easily this time, then I would never be able to relate to this serial again....Again, I dont think Dutta should misunderstand her for "Why she had to put on the soot".....What he should be irrirtated about is "why did she hide it for so long"...and one thing that shreya had pointed out few days back that I found so apt was, "Did she not feel safe with him?"....V imp.....As Parul has pointed out, she can state the defn of love with so much conviction and show herself to be a follower of it, then what she has done is not excusable,atleast not so easily....

If I was in Dutta's place, I would have been too hurt to think that my better half, my soul mate, couldnt even confide in me her secret....and feel worse to know that the whole world knows about her except me....Was I not good enough to be confided in by my soulmate...person, who should have FIRST confided in me.....

I am sorry but I want Naku punished, else it would be passing wrong message -

1. You are OK in hiding secrets from Dutta

2. You are OK if you dont trust Dutta's love and dont give it even one chance

3. You will always be forgiven no matter how dishonest you were....

The only thing I want from this track is for Dutta to forgive Naku sooner than he would have done, if he was not in love with her....Thats the diff I expect but even for short duration, NAKU needs to learn a lesson to trust Dutta's love....

Edited by Dancingdoll - 14 years ago

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sikkaisha

@sikkaisha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

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masoom si mohabbat ka bus itna sa fasana hai..
kagaz ki haveli hai, baarish ka zamaana hai..
kya shart-e-mohabbat hai, kya shart-e-zamana hai..
awaz bhi zakhmi hai aur wo geet bhi gana hai..
uss per utarne ki umeed bahut kam hai..
kashti bhi puraani hai, tufaan bhi aana hai..
samajhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz-e-mohabbat ka..
bheegi hui ankho se ek sher sunaana hai..
bholi si ada, koi fir ishq ki jid par hai..
fir aag ka dariya hai.. aur doob hi jana hai ..

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Beautiful....simply beautiful.
Touched my heart
Brilliant👏

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