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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
nice update
yay!! AS shut kala up..suppose she is the onli 1 tht kala may listen to bt tht stil doesnt stop her from plotting against tasha does it..lol
i hpe u shw a madhu-dutta scene, mayb madhu explaining tht he shud understand naku..wud like 2 c thm bond as bro n sis...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Thanks for everyone's comments! And even I am worried for the real FR.😍 I will show a madhu dutta bonding scene alter and then a bajji telling dutta that he already knew and dutta getting angry at bajji and then madhu helping dutta. anddd a small Promo/Precap ummm so Dutta steps into PN with unconcious Nakku in his arms.. Suvi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update sweety:) ohh dutta is in such turmoil i am scared of the real FR hope is all understanding i mean naku loves him whether she is white or black her heart is the same.. (hey that kind rhymes) LOL ne ways.. i am so happy that AS shut kala up and told her to go to her room like a 5 year old kid.. tht was hilarious.

Thanx for the precap and promo.. can't wait .. ps thanx for the pm dear..

vika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Sorry for the delay, I was reading a really interesting book.
Lost Love Part 6
Dutta is lost in deep thought. He thinks about the times Nakku saved him and proved her love. "No my Nakku loves me, but this Nakku, this gori Nakku, I am not sure if she is mine or not" Dutta puts his hands on his face and cries.
Meanwhile, Nakku is walking along the road, sad and dejected. Her feet and hands hurt and she feels as if she is walking with a huge stone on her back. She enters a small clearing which has a lake in the center and dips her feet in. Nakusha rubs her hands and feet to wash the blood off and leans back onto a tree. "I am tired, I don't want to go anywhere, I wish my life was as peaceful and calm as this place" she thinks. She closes her eyes and dozes off.
Dutta steps down stairs, looking furious like a lion. "Where is Naku??" He shouts.
"Saab, I don't know, she went alone by her self, I am really worried, what if something happens to her?" Babi replies
Dutta growls and grabs his keys. He rushes out and goes in his car. He drives along with a photo of Nakku (in her fair avatar) and asks people if they've seen her. Bajji follows in a separate car with the bodyguards.
Nakku wakes up, and coughs. The room she is in is dusty and dirty. She is lying on a bed which seems as if it is gonna break if she moves a single muscle. There is a small wooden table and two chairs in one corner and a light bulb hanging down, emphasizing the dustiness of the room. "Where am I? Who is there?" Nakku calls out. The door creaks open and a man steps in. He's wearing ratty old slippers but with a white sherwani. He has a messy beard and is wearing big shades. Nakku glances at him and screams.
"Morey!"
"Who else?"
Nakku shudders and looks around for a way to escape. Morey looks at her and laughs evilly.
"Dont worry darling, its not your turn yet, I will come to get you in a while"
"Turn? Turn for what, what do you mean Morey?"
Morey just smirks and walks out, locking the door behind him. Nakku frantically searches for some way to get out. She sees a small hole in the wall. She goes near it and touches it, the wall is weak and if she pushes hard enough, she would be able to enlarge the hole so she could fit through. Nakku kicks hard at the hole and some of the rotting, mouldy bricks fall apart, making way for her to crawl through. Nakku's hopes of escape are dashed, as they hole doesn't lead to fresh air, it leads to another room. The room is filled with girls. Some are sitting in a corner smoking, and drinking as if being in a place where girls are sold is a thing they do everyday. Nakku shudders in disgust and hides behind a table, watching everyone and everything carefully. An old, skinny woman comes, holding two girls, around the age of thirteen or fourteen. She pushes the girls into the arms of a lady and greedily snatches the money given to her by the lady.
"Hey, I gave you two girls, and they are beautiful and healthy not like the other wretched girls in this place. My two little virgins are worth much more than this," the woman shouts. The lady sighs and gives some more money to the old woman. The woman licks her lips happily, and without a last look at her children, walks off. "How can she do such a thing? How can a mother sell her own children?," Nakku thinks. The two girls are cowering away from the lady, holding onto each other for comfort, and sobbing. They know what their fate is going to be. (Okay, so I read a really sad book called Princess by Jean Sasson, guys its terribly shocking to see what kind of things men do to women. Do read this book, its very emotional. http://www.jeansasson.com/women-organizations.html go here to find out some organizations that support women in such terrible situations)
There are quite a few young girls and all of them are wailing for their mother. A bulky man comes and hits the loudest one really hard, so that blood comes out of her nose. He threatens the girl that he is going to hit them even harder if they make a single noise again. "I have to help these kids," Nakku thinks. As she scans the room for some sort of idea to come to her head, she spots a girl around 20 years old sitting in the corner by herself, smoking. Reality dawns on Nakku as she realises who exactly the girl is.
Precap: Nakku is helping the little girls climb out of the window when someone grabs her hand.
We had someone for world vision talk to us at school. The lives of kids are horrible, going foraging instead of school etc. Please do something there are lots of things you can participate in to help those little kids out there that don't have enough food or water.http://www.worldvision.org/content.nsf/give/ways-to-give?OpenDocument&lpos=top_drp_WaysToGive Oh yeah and watch these videos too:http://www.girleffect.org/learn/the-big-picture 😊 These girls give hope and courage to the ones around them
Suvi
Edited by supreme_shine - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update... Nakku's dukht and Dutta's anger... All is justified👏
Im happy he went to look for her and Baaji followed..
Haila yeh moorey yahan bhi agaya? 😡Arghhhh..Chii kitna gandha aadmi hain..
I really hope dutta comes back on time and saves everyone..
Thanks for the PM.. 😳
Continue soon..
Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
very nice update hun..good 2 c ur tryin 2 convey an impt message via ur ff...
reminds me of the movie ghagini wer the lead actress, asin in the film rescued 20 odd girls from a similar situation..slightly dif tho...it involved drugs i think...
hpe naku manages 2 rescue thm n herself from tht creep
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

very nice update hun..good 2 c ur tryin 2 convey an impt message via ur ff...

reminds me of the movie ghagini wer the lead actress, asin in the film rescued 20 odd girls from a similar situation..slightly dif tho...it involved drugs i think...
hpe naku manages 2 rescue thm n herself from tht creep

Thanks
Yeah ghajini was a good movie, that bit was sad.
She will rescue the girls, its Nakku herself you have to be worried about😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: supreme_shine

Thanks

Yeah ghajini was a good movie, that bit was sad.
She will rescue the girls, its Nakku herself you have to be worried about😊

yh bt m sure tht dutta saves her... i mean thts the onli way she can becum pregnant😆
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
loved it yar keep writing and update soon eagerly waiting for next part thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
I wrote the next part so i posted it.
Lost Love Part 7
Reality dawns on Nakku as she realises who exactly the girl is. Its Roshni, her sister's best friend! Her fair skin had gone pale, her curvy body as skinny as a pole, her hair longer than her arms, she was beautiful, but frail and weak. Roshni's eyes went to the table, and narrowed as she saw something moving around. There was someone there! She cautiously got up and tried to nonchalantly go to the table and sit beside it. She peered behind it to find a woman, with a familiar face staring at her with tears in her eyes.
"Roshni taayi?"
"Naku?"
"Shhh... someone will find me"
"What are you doing here?"
"Woh..woh Morey got me, I dont know, I fell asleep"
"Oh, so now you are also caught in this trap"
"No! I will escape"
"You can try if you want to, but I remember that I warned you not to. The men here are heartless"
"But I have to try!"
"Okay! You can dig your own grave if you want to, its not my business"
"Roshni Taayi please help me," Nakku pleaded. Roshni's eyes widened in fear.
"Me? No way!"
"Please, if not for me look at those little girls, its their time to play and have fun, not all this" Nakku spat in disgust. Roshni seemed to consider this.
"Theek hai, I will show you how to escape and I will try to distract everyone else, but that is all that I will do"
"Thanks, taayi, that is all I wanted"
"Okay then lets go,"
"Um, taayi.."
"Yes?"
"Where is Roopa tayi? (That was her name right?)
"I thought you were going to ask. But it is better you don't know"
"Tell me, please"
"She's a lucky b*tch, she scored a job as a maid at some prince's palace in Saudi Arabia for two years. They are brutal, but atleast they prefer uncircumcised women and buy expensive gifts if they prefer the errmm.. talents of a specific slave." (I've read a similar, true story except for the uncircumcised part.)
Nakku gasped and started crying.
"My sister, my poor sister, how can you say she is lucky?"
"Luckier than the rest of us I must say Nakku, after her two year contract, she will be free"
"Will she come back to us?"
"I hope so, but I wonder if she will be able to face you guys after all that she has been through. Now lets go before they take the girls away and discover that you are gone."
Nakku and Roshni waited for the guard to go to the opposite side of the room, and sneaked out to a small shed. There was a window, which opened out to a forest.
"Go get the girls!" Nakku whispered. Roshni sneaked back in and brought a troop of about 10 girls, all under the age of 18. Roshni smiled and wished Nakku good luck and rushed back to the room before they were discovered.. Nakku helped each of the girls out of the window. Just as the last one hopped out and was giving her hand to Nakku so she could climb through, A hand grabbed Nakku. She screamed and yelled to the children to run away. Morey turned his head towards the window, but all of the girls had ran away so he turned his attention back to Nakku.
"I won't let you run away, darling."
"Creep, let go of my hand!"
"No, I wont. What will you do?" Morey tried to snatch Nakku's dupatta but she squirmed out of his grasp and ran to the corner of the room. The door was locked. She was trapped. She faced Morey, begging him to let her go.
"Ok fine I will, after obtaining money from your husband and spending some time with you, I will let you go"
"No!" Nakku shrieked. Morey grabbed Nakkus hand and tried to kiss her, but she backed off. He held her by her shoulder,so hard that part of the delicate fabric of her kurta, ripped and came into his hands. He tried to rip off Nakku's clothes but Nakusha was strong enough to let him only get a few scraps. Morey, enraged, tried to slap Nakku, but just then he got punched and pushed onto the floor by someone. It was Roshni! She grabbed an injection and stabbed it into Morey's arm. "It is usually used for girls that are too voilent," she explained. She told Nakku to hurry and run away. Nakku asked her to come along with her but she politely refused. "Who is going to pay for my mother's operation if I dont work?"
"Saab will"
"No Nakku, I am sorry but I will not take money from anyone"
"At this expense? Your ego is more important than your izzat?"
"Nakku I can't, I just can't I am too scared Okay? Just leave me alone and go! I will be fine and take care of yourself" Nakku tried to protest but Roshni wouldn't hear it. Nakku stubbornly bid farewell to Roshni and climbed out of the window and ran away.
Dutta was furious at himself for letting Nakku go."Where could she be? How was she?" he wondered, banging his hand on the horn because some stupid driver was going too slow. He drived onto a lonely road, surrounded by forest. A group of girls hesitantly came running out, trying to make as less noise as ten girls could possibly make. He stopped his car and stepped out. The girls became scared and tried to run back into the forest.
"Don't be scared, I wont harm you"
One girl, the eldest, turned around to face Dutta. "What do you want, sir?"
"Have you seen this girl?" he asked, showing them the picture of fair Nakku.
The girl consulted the other girls in a language Dutta didn't understand.
"Yes"
"Where is she? Can you tell me?"
"Um.. she saved us from that place but.."
"But what? and what horrible place?" Dutta was becoming more and more anxious.
"They sell us like we are cattle" One little girl sobbed, "She was helping us escape and then that horrible man stopped her"
Just then Bajji and the bodyguards appeared. Dutta instructed them to take care of the girls while he looked for Nakku. Nakku emerged from the forest gasping for breath. Her eyes met Dutta's and she burst out crying. She ran with all of the energy left in her, and collapsed into Dutta's arms.
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Everyone in PN was waiting for Dutta's return. Madhu, AS and Babi were praying to Bappa while Kala and her sisters were plotting something new in their room. "Bhao has come! Bhao has come!" a servant shouted, causing everyone to rush to the entrance of PN. Dutta entered, with an unconscious Nakku in his arms. His coat was wrapped around Nakku and she held onto it as tight as she could. Dutta took Nakku to his room and put her down on his bed. He made her comfortable with pillows around her and a warm blanket on top of her. Bajji told the PN wasis what had happened , as Dutta hadn't spoken a word to them in his worry for Nakku.
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Nakku was pedaling on a cycle, and her sister Roopa was cycling beside her. "Hurry up Nakku, we have to return these cycles to Raju, he told us to return them before sunset." "Who cares about Raju?", Nakku replied, she was having a fun time riding her bike. "I am, if Raju is angry at me, then how will he gift me a dress to wear for Diwali" her sister mumbled. "What? Taayi, your crazy!" Nakku pedaled harder and harder. She was cycling uphill, and her sister was gone. Nakku's legs were hurting but she still rode as fast as she could, for she had discovered that Morey was trying to get her. She was panting and her legs felt like stone, but she endured it all and rode. She saw Dutta! She rode towards him, and just as she was about to touch him, he vanished. She screamed "Saab!" until she found him. Again, he disappeared as soon as she was within touching distance. Morey was gaining in on her and she tried to turn right, into a small alleyway, but failed. Her turn was too sharp, she fell. Morey was coming closer and closer.................
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Dutta came out of the shower rubbing his head with the towel to dry his hair. He was about to take out a kurta for him to wear, but he noticed Nakku sweating and writhing about on the bed. He went to her, and sat beside her. He caressed her face and bent down to kiss her cheek. Nakku got up with a jolt, screaming "Noooo!"
Dutta was stunned. He leaped back and said, "Sorry, I thought that, I mean..."
"Saab!" Nakku sighed in relief and went to hug him. Dutta placed his arms around her comfortingly.
"What happened?"
"That morey was chasing me saab, I was so scared"
"Shh, Morey is dead, I made sure. Bajji and the men sorted him out and took care of the girls. We even took care of that girl that helped you, what was her name? Oh yeah, Roshni"
"Saab, thank you so much"
"No, Nakku, I am sorry. You've been through so much and I didn't even respect you or trust you. I know you were wrong in hiding the truth from me but I don't want to lose you because I love you. I promise to take care of you forever"
Dutta helped Nakku to her feet and hugged her. His hands creeped onto her waist, up her back. She intertwined her fingers with his hair as he kissed her passionately.
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See, now I got them together so quickly even though I hadn't planned it that way. I was getting bored of all the sadness and stuff and plus i want to end the flashback as quickly as possible (though not without treating you with some cute TaSha scenes of course😛) And dont forget, you can do something: look at these websites :http://www.girleffect.org/question and if you think you cant be bothered or have too many troubles in your life I hope you wont think the same after watching this :http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BhIm6l83FDA

Suvi
Edited by supreme_shine - 14 years ago

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