In YOUR words, Dutta and Naku post-FR conversation

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gp00

@gp00

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

We have so many fantastic writers on this forum, and an imagination par excellence.

So, for our common amusement, I've created this post:

Here is the setup. I know the setup itself will set the tone for the conversation/exchange between Naku and Dutta...but I'm making an assumption here that Kala will start the process of the revelation. And Naku will finish it.

SO, LADIES, if you could write the dialogues, or guide the development of this scene, what would it be.

Here is my scenario. GP sharpens those verbal knives....😆 Just kidding....

Kala wipes a part of the soot off of Naku's face. Says I told you, Dutta Bhau, a long time ago, that this ladki will show you her true rang. And she has. Dekho! Apki Nakusha. This ladki has been living in this house, this house which accepts her as the bahu, and look at the choices she has made. So tell me...what is better? I was kicked out of this house because I said the truth...that this ladki and her mother are up to no good. You, Dutta Bhau, kicked me out of our family's home. So what do you say of her actions? Are you going to kick her out too for her lies, or only sister can be treated that way?

Babi, the good for nothing that she is, will feebly try to interject...But Saab, it was never like that. Naku loves you. I forced this rang upon her...into this lie. She wanted to tell you the truth, but I was afraid that you would not understand and would only hurt her. I entrusted Bappa with the truth--that he will one day make it so that it comes out.

Naku wipes the rest of the rang off her face. This is my face, but I am the same person....same heart, same love for you. I know you do not question my love...please understand why. You hated beauty...whenever I was ready to tell you, something you said would scare me away...that you would hate me...for my face. I was born with this, I did not choose it. I could not tell you, for I was scared to lose you.

Dutta will be shocked, and the anger will bubble up....but there will be a sadness, a realization of being lied to again. He looks at Naku, does not recognize this person...this person who had shared his room, with whom he had shared all his feelings, kept nothing from....TRUSTED with his whole being...and she keeps this from him? That he professes his love and sides with her against even his family, and she does not trust his love enough? That he saw her every day and yet not once did she feel like she should be true or herself. He will walk away in shock. Naku will be shocked at his sad and angry reaction.

This is the initial exchange. I'm sure they will show Dutta think a little, then go to Naku and accept her.

NOW YOUR TURN!😃

Edited by gp00 - 14 years ago

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Musarrat

@mussy.jamshed

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

lovely post parul as usual. Dutta will say 'mujhe nahe pata tha k teri masumiat k peechay aik khobsurat aur dhokebaaz chehra hai' . Keon chupaya mujhse itna bara such? Kia maqsad tha tera meri zindagi mein anay ka. Naku wil say 'mein ghareeb hai, mere liye khobsurati aik shrap hain, jisne meri khobsurati dekhi mujhe istemal karna chaha islie meine budsurati ka naqab orr lie saab' dutta wil b quiet remembering past instances when they first met, his fight with more, saving fair nakusha when she was harassed by gundas, fair nakusha in Anna's den, Anna last words. Quiet moment with hmself . Then Dutta remembers the day when Naku rejected hs proposal, her teary eyes. Dutta tears all over hs face n here he speaks ' Naku mera khud pe bharosa khatam hogaya aj keonki tune mujhe pyaar k qabil tu samjha magar apne barosay k liaq nahe samjha. Aray aik mauqa tu deti apnay dutta ko, dutta ko aik mauqa denay qabil na samjha. Aur tu mujhse shadi karnay ja rahe the. Dutta walks away frm Naku . Naku crying.

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

Alright let me try...

Dutta: KYUNN??? Kyun kiya aisa?

Nakku: Saab yeh meri majboori thi...jis ne bhi mera chehra dekha usne mujhe istemal karne ki koshish ki

Dutta: Lekin tumne yeh baat mujhse kyun chupayi nakku? kya main tere barose like nahin hoon.

Nakku: Aisa nahin hain saab.. jab bhi maine aapko sachai batane ki koshish ki.. kuch na kuch hua hai.. Pehle moorey ne mujhe publically rape karne ki koshish ki.. phir Anna ne mere chehre ko dekha aur suhagraat manana chahta tha..

Dutta's flashback to anna's den when he saw fair nakku and then dark nakku in the room.

Dutta: Lekin baad mein to tumhare paas bohut sare mauke the na

Nakku: haan lekin phir kala tayi ghar chodiya. Aur jab bhi main aapko batane ki himmat karti to aap kuch na kuch kehdete aur phir main darr gaye.

Dutta: Tu mujhse darti hain?

Nakku: Nahin saab... lekin main jaanti hoon ke aap ko lagega ke maine dhokha diya hain

Dutta: HAAN DOKHA DIYA HAI TUMNE MUJHE

Nakku: aisa mat kaho saab.. Nakku apne saab ko dokha nahin deh sakti. Main aapse bohut pyar karti hai saab

Dutta: Agar pyar karti hain to barosa bhi karti .. lekin tumne to apni sabse badi sach ko mujhe chupaya..

Nakku: Saab..

But dutta storms into his room and closes the door on Nakku's face. She sits outside his room and cries.

Dutta has a flashback of the 'Tu meri zindagi hai' sequence and looks outside the window with tears and anger in his eyes. It starts raining and he lets the rain drops on his face and closes his eyes remembering all the moments Nakku told him about her love for him and his marriage with her.

*Ishq Ki Gali - Milenge Milenge* Plays in the background...

Nakku walks down stairs in a trace remembering her FR and passes infront of bappa. She looks at him with teary eyes and goes to him. She breaks down infront of him and cries.

Dutta comes out of his room angrily and goes out but sees Nakku crying infront of bappa. For one second he looks at her with a hurt expression but then storms out of PN. Nakku sits down infront of bappa and puts her hands on the diya and prays for his safety. Dutta is out drinking away at the beach. He has a flashback of people taunting Nakku about her colour. He throws his bottle and starts using his brain (yes the same brain which he doesnt use often lool)

*song finishes*

Dutta *to himself*: Aisa kyun kiya nakku... jab tum itni kubsoorat ho to log ki taane kyun sunti thi? Mera sar pata jaa raha hain..kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha hain. Kispe yaakeen karoon?

Baaji comes there and puts his hands on Dutta's shoulder. Dutta looks at him and looks back at the sea.

Dutta: Mujhe akela chod do baaji..

Baaji: Nahin bhao.. aaj aapko meri baat sunna hoga

Dutta: Usne aisa kyun kiya baaji? usne mujhe dokha kyun diya?

Baaji: dokha? Bhao.. yeh wohi nakusha hain jisne aapke saath nahin choda tha jab aap maut ki mou main the.. yeh wohi Nakusha hain jisne aapki jaan bachayi thi. wohi nakusha hain jo aapse bohut pyar karta hain. aur kaisa dokha bhau? agar usne yeh sab pehle bata deti to aap uspe shaq karti.. usne apni khoobsurati ka istamal nahin kiya aapko pane main.. woh aapse bohut pyar karti hain bhao.. aap uss pe shaq mat karo.. mat karo bhao varna aap use kho do ge.

Baaji's words echoes in dutta's head and he looks at him with teary eyes. He gets up quickly and rushes to the car. Baaji gets in the car as well. Dutta runs into PN and looks for Nakku but she can't hear him. Baaji also looks for Nakku. Evil Trio watches from upstairs and they run down.

Kala: kya hua bhao.. aap uss dokhebaaz ko kyun doon rahe ho?

Dutta: TAI.. mere Nakusha dokhebaaz nahin hain

Kala: Lekin bhao..

Dutta: BAS tai..

Without listening to her he runs to the small mandir in the house and sees Nakku their, he breaths a sign of relief and runs to her but realise her hand is burning. He pulls her hand away from the diya and Nakku looks at him. She stands up "EYELOCK". *Jaana jogi de naal in background* Dutta holds her burnt hand and looks at it with teary eyes. His tears drops on the wound and he hugs Nakku tightly. PN wasis watches in the background, everyone happy apart from ET. He caresses her hair and they both cry in each other's arm..

Ahhh well not that good but i tried.. Hope everyone like it.!

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soaplover1

@soaplover1

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Posted: 14 years ago

I think Kala will find out abt Naku's soot and tell the whole house that this whole family was making a fool out of Dutta bhao and they used Naku to make Dutta fell in love and how Ganpat is looting Dutta and Babi and Naku also knew abt it...and since Ganpat was actually doing that naku will have no answer and she will not be able to tell her truth to Dutta....this will be the new twist of the story and will last till Diwali....that is my predictions ...hope I am wrong

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

Hey interesting posts hope one of the above posts happen,very well written by every one👏

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

Very very interesting Parul wonderful post

but here I am smitten and eagerly waiting for wat the CVs have in store for us so I am a lil loss at ideas ...... although i personally think there will be a major hulchul about it and Dutta the gadha isnt a listener ...... I have major doubt that he wud listen to anyone initially ....... I have a wiered feeling that this is where Madhu will be very handy ...... with the help of Baji both of them will be playing the trial and error theory od proving exactly why it was necessary for naku to keep her koel avatar up for so long ..... and even if that does not work the CVs always have the back up plan of abducting Naku by the goons in this case Morey with the help of Kala ..... I am mentioning Kala here because Kala is the major catalyst which brings TaSha close each tym

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Leandra

@Leandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

I have no Idea about kala plan but when nakku FR happen. datta will be shocked to seen nakku he won't speak a work just walk back to his room and close door and break the bajji new sofa (I really want that) and cry and drink. nakku run back to his room look at the room in shock and try to explain about it. Datta won't listen shout at her and say that the nakku my love is no more, not even exist, he will break down and cry, nakku try to explain he asks nakku to leave him alone for ever and every.

Kala will come inside the room and pull nakku out of the room and say did u hear what datta said leave him alone, leave the PN as he said. Nakku will cry and go to is room.

Madhu will run to nakku and ask what it is behind the snoot. Nakku will explain about her life.

Madhu walk straight to datta and speak for nakku and explain and make datta to understand. Datta will come back to his sense.

Kala make nakku to pack up her things and nakku will take a step out of PN. datta will say "ruko"

he walk toward nakku and hold her sholder and ask why nakku why u did not trust me. i am not worthy for ur trust. sab i am sos scared that i will loose u i would rather die than loosing you.

rest i'll edit it later😉

Edited by sasha_1 - 14 years ago

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Musarrat

@mussy.jamshed

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha_1

I have no Idea about kala plan but when nakku FR happen. datta will be shocked to seen nakku he won't speak a work just walk back to his room and close door and break the bajji new sofa (I really want that) and cry and drink. nakku run back to his room look at the room in shock and try to explain about it. Datta won't listen shout at her and say that the nakku my love is no more, not even exist, he will break down and cry, nakku try to explain he asks nakku to leave him alone for ever and every.

Kala will come inside the room and pull nakku out of the room and say did u hear what datta said leave him alone, leave the PN as he said. Nakku will cry and go to is room.

Madhu will run to nakku and ask what it is behind the snoot. Nakku will explain about her life.

Madhu walk straight to datta and speak for nakku and explain and make datta to understand. Datta will come back to his sense.

Kala make nakku to pack up her things and nakku will take a step out of PN. datta will say "ruko"

rest i'll edit it later😉

sasha I like your post but yaar I want naku to explain to dutta her story without taking anyone's help..........I want dutta to listen to what she says...........I want madhu n baji help dutta to understand her stance...............

Edited by mussy.jamshed - 14 years ago

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Leandra

@Leandra

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mussy.jamshed

sasha I like your post but yaar I want naku to explain to dutta her story without taking anyone's help..........I want dutta to listen to what she says...........I want madhu n baji help dutta to understand her stance...............

that would be good
i also want nakku to explain about her situation to datta, datta heart get melt after hearing nakku story but he ask why nakku why u did not trust me i am not worth for ur trust, then nakku will sab i am scared that i will loose u. i would rather die 😉

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Sheeba

@Princess_Priya1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#10

I knowwwwww never in the world will happen what i am going to say next still aaj mastii ka mood hai isliye saying it............

Dutta will say----Aye nakku............tu toh ek dum.....boley toh chiknii niklyy.................sach re..........tu toh rang badlney wali nakusha hi merii...................😆

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