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We have so many fantastic writers on this forum, and an imagination par excellence.
So, for our common amusement, I've created this post:
Here is the setup. I know the setup itself will set the tone for the conversation/exchange between Naku and Dutta...but I'm making an assumption here that Kala will start the process of the revelation. And Naku will finish it.
SO, LADIES, if you could write the dialogues, or guide the development of this scene, what would it be.
Here is my scenario. GP sharpens those verbal knives....đ Just kidding....
Kala wipes a part of the soot off of Naku's face. Says I told you, Dutta Bhau, a long time ago, that this ladki will show you her true rang. And she has. Dekho! Apki Nakusha. This ladki has been living in this house, this house which accepts her as the bahu, and look at the choices she has made. So tell me...what is better? I was kicked out of this house because I said the truth...that this ladki and her mother are up to no good. You, Dutta Bhau, kicked me out of our family's home. So what do you say of her actions? Are you going to kick her out too for her lies, or only sister can be treated that way?
Babi, the good for nothing that she is, will feebly try to interject...But Saab, it was never like that. Naku loves you. I forced this rang upon her...into this lie. She wanted to tell you the truth, but I was afraid that you would not understand and would only hurt her. I entrusted Bappa with the truth--that he will one day make it so that it comes out.
Naku wipes the rest of the rang off her face. This is my face, but I am the same person....same heart, same love for you. I know you do not question my love...please understand why. You hated beauty...whenever I was ready to tell you, something you said would scare me away...that you would hate me...for my face. I was born with this, I did not choose it. I could not tell you, for I was scared to lose you.
Dutta will be shocked, and the anger will bubble up....but there will be a sadness, a realization of being lied to again. He looks at Naku, does not recognize this person...this person who had shared his room, with whom he had shared all his feelings, kept nothing from....TRUSTED with his whole being...and she keeps this from him? That he professes his love and sides with her against even his family, and she does not trust his love enough? That he saw her every day and yet not once did she feel like she should be true or herself. He will walk away in shock. Naku will be shocked at his sad and angry reaction.
This is the initial exchange. I'm sure they will show Dutta think a little, then go to Naku and accept her.
NOW YOUR TURN!đ
CID
