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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
so emotional DD...love ur dialogues... they r full of such emotions...amazing ending....loved the Dutta-DP hug, it was so emotional... n cute wer he sed "yeh bohat gandi hai baba" for the 1st time he called DP Baba, sad tht we wnt c tht in the shw cos m sure DP died thanks 2 kala in ydays epi

Hey thanks Yuvi!!!....I agree Yuvi, I too am disappointed with the DP track end...I wish Dutta had forgiven before DP died...I wanted to get Baba seamlessly...not as part of a desperate attempt.....and I wish in actual LTL, dutta too wuld have done smethng like tht!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: rama_2010
Yeh kya kar diya dear... Naku ko jaga toh diya hota.... very nicely written ... too emotional

I am sorry rama, I just culdnt wake her up....probabaly if I had written next part, I could have woken her up but I just culdnt in this part....I really tried rama but I couldnt see Dutta's eternal love moving like tht!!....It was his test of love, and life threw this test at him....as he said, "Ab Naku aur Imtihaan nahi degi".....

I m so sorry!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123
Lekin teri nazar ke binaa toh, mein hee nazar nahi aata Naku!" (awesome dialogue)
Wow DD fabulous OS through out very powerful dialogues and apt pics and VMs Vah Vah u deserve a round of 👏 👏👏 applouse u r mindblowing u should b a writer srsly excellent work but the 2 last part v.emotional i was 😭😭 all the way & sad after finishing the last part my heart is all heavy. i need s/thing to cheer me up u always choose apt. VM as well perfect for dutta's situation @ excellent VM shona and v.good scenes i love it. Ohh DD i am glad naku is not dead i knew u wouldn't b that to us i am sure she will b back from coma coz dutta will give her lots of love "Waapis Aaogi na?" now i get it why u chose the title v.apt. it is nice to c dutta & DP got a chance to talk and dutta to pour out his emotion lovely scene of dad & son. wow what a decision he slapped the pagal N on their face now they should try living w/out dutta. now DD i won't bore u with my long comment bas itna kehna chtahu excellent work i am sad to c ur Os finish but a good one tanx a tone dear and have 🤗 on me!

ps: i forgot can u pm me pls when u can when i want to read it again i can easly get it tanx DD.

Thanks a lot Jordaa!! I too think that my last two parts were better off than the first four...I was just in the right zone when I wrote them....The same zone I was in when I wrote my first OS....and hence, I enjoyed writign the last two parts very much!!!!

Oh yes!! I couldnt kill Naku...How can I else there LS would have been incomplete and no true love is incomplete even if it has a sad ending....And Naku will wake up...I too am 100% sure, she would wake up!!!

and dnt ever say, u bored me with long comment, I love this kinda reviews...detailed that shows me my writing in a diff mirror!!!!......

On the title, I must confess, I knew that Naku and Dutta would be separated mentally for some time and hence, I chose the "Waapis Aaogi Na" from the scene in the real show when Dutta holds her hand while she is leaving his room...The last part wasnt planned, when I came up with the title...I couldnt see any thing beyond Naku in the hospital and Dutta crying with her in the hospital bed...The story was not visible to me after tht point when I puclished my first two parts....and that is why I chose this title......then at the end of 4th part, I suddenly saw the last part v clear in front of my eyes and the last scene, I ended with the title for poetic end but I actually wanted to write, "Ghar chalein".....😳😳😳

I will PM you right now!! 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11
wow, i can truly say i've read alot of FF's here, and believe me they've all been extemely exceptional from one to the next, but i can honestly say you are truly a very talented and skillful writer, and i can clearly see dat many others can see that too. I don't usually comment, but the way you wrote the whole story, keeping true to the characters, always keeping the readers on the edge with what Dutta had to say, 'cause he's obvioulsy very unpredictable with his words in the series also.

I really love the way kept all the emotions, good and bad, running through the reader, the same plight of the story was without doubt also ur readers', very well done.

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic, i think somewhere along the lines everybody was expecting Naku to recover, but i think it was acutally even better that she didn't, ur imagination is also well apreciated as are ur writing skills.

sorry 2 go on a bit😳

Hey tinker....Its nice to see comments from u....I am so glad my writing could compel you to give me a feedback, because good or bad, we writers really want feedbacks to improve!!!

Now that u mention, I realize that yes, Dutta is unpredictable and the way he moved between the parts of the OS, he did astound me too!!! .....and the fact that my readers walked thru the journey with my characters and me, this has to be the highest of high compliment for me because I feel this is the toughest job to accomplish!!!!

I am sorry, but I just couldnt see Naku waking up...It seemed romanticized but unrealistic....It didnt seemed justice to me because I felt that itbwas time for Dutta to justify his love, for him to prove his love and he would.....My heart just couldnt see Naku waking up!!!!.....

Yes, I do see her waking up in future....I am not hopeful but certain tht she wuld, but not in the last part....and I am glad u understood it.....

u dnt have to be sorry....I loved ur feedback and we writers just die for such feedbacks tinker!!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: Sophia21

OMG... I'm not in a state to write long cmments but i have to say nice ending.. i'm sure she will come back!

I'm so happy he left with DP and Baaji lol n Roops followed!

So damn emotional!!! *wipes tears*

DP and Dutta convo was Ahhhhhhh can't even express it...too good..

Sophia, thats alright as long as u do post ur feedback....keeps our spirit high.....and I am also 100% sure Naku wuld come back...else their LS would be incomplete and no LS can ever be incomplete....Universe wouldnt let them remain so!!!...My belief! 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: kiran255
NOOOOOOOO DD <
You cant end it here like this ,
my eyes are wet tears and i dont know
k im shedding happiness tears or painful tears
plz give it a end :(
its soooooooo sad
but DD u have done amazng job with dialogues
ur no less than Anil Deshmukh :)
superb job with selection of vm
but DD thi is too much
the pain is sheer
do continue
atleast itni update kardo k naku wake up
no naughty , sweet scene demanded
only make her awake :(((((((
and DD plz dont write aise Os
i love ur hilarious side
cuz when ur on serious side ur quite brutal , u just tore my heart into pieces
its like i could feel Dutta 's pain :(

I am so sorry Kiran....So, I have atleast one unhappy reader and I was scared about that....and just for this, I really tried, I mean really really tried to wake her up but I couldnt....atleast not in this part.....probabaly if I had written next part, I would have... but if it helps, I know Naku wuld wake up!!!...as I was telling others, Naku cannot die, because there are lot of emotions felt but left implicit.....lot of words untold, lot of expressions not shown between the two...and no LS can ever be incomplete....so, she wuld wake up.....

its just tht I my heart doesnt see how the story wuld progress from here...I see Naku waking up, I dnt see the intermediary steps and hence, i had to end here....

I am so sorry Kiran.....I promise, if I see the intermediary part, I will update this OS......I promisee.....Oh!! u like my sense of humour...u have to be kidding Kiran because I suck in comedy!! 😆😆😆

I am sorry Kiran and I never wanted to make u sad!! 😭

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey DD thanx alot for the DD for the wonderful update .....OMG what a beautiful and emotional ending ..really brillantly done....loved it ...couldn"t have asked anything more from u ...i mean u left me speechless and spellbound by this mindblowing OS ...the dialogues deeply touched my heart truly ...u are excellent writer yaar .....the father and son convo was very superbly done,i wished they would have showed something like this in LTL....Naku is in coma but there soul is connected,there love is so divine ....tasha"s match made in heaven ....finally dutta left PN looking forward toward new start .....Awww baaji is true friend....he followed dutta.....i was reallyy suprise to see roops following ...loved it ......thanx alot DD for such a excellent OS i will cherish it always...🤗....

"DD TUM WAAPIS TOH AAOGI NA NEW FF or OS LEKE'.....will wait for ur new OS or FF eagerly ....i know u must be tired with one...i know had to put lots of hardwork yaar..really apperciate it all ...

i won"t bug u now....u can take a break for now 😆.....take care and see ya around ...Love and Hugs Suhana🤗

@Shona ....i can"t never get enough of this VM...i have watched countless time....but everytime i watch it seems iam watching it for first time.....loved it to core ....excellent yaar .....thanx for making such a beautiful VM on tasha.....Love and hugs suhana🤗

Here is something from side to u DD for completing 2nd OS

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....suhana...thanks a lot.....u r such a sweetheart...u did make me write a 2nd OS......and thanks for letting me have the break because after such an emotionally drained OS, I seriously need to rejuvenate!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 u r a sweetheart! 😳

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: vika1981
DD, I am left speechless at this update. All i can say is the most emotional and intense final update. I loved that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with the people that he and Naku love. He finally accepted his father, was so great!

I bow to you 👏

I will look forward to more FF from you:) please add me to the pm list!

Thanks Vika....Thanks for liking my end...I felt that in one shot Dutta had to justify his love and punish the evil and yet keep in mind what those ppl have done for him even if with wrong intentions!!!!....I am glad u loved it...ofcourse u r in my PM list...😛.....I added all the subscribers from my 1st OS and I remember u loved my 1st OS too! 😳

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: supreme_shine
Kitna empotional part! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 I actually started crying. Naku didn't get up 😭 😭 😭 😭 aww very nicely written 😭 😭 😭 Someone give me a tissue box please! 😭 😭 😭

awww....heres the tissue box for u....*hands a tissue box with just 1 tissue left*...I am sorry, I utilised all of it while writign it!!

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