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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......................DD................AM AT LOSS OF WORDS................beautifully written.....................loved it..................DUTTA,DP AND BAJI'S PLACES WERE GRTTTTTTTTTT..................lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy❤️and that word of waapis to aogi na..............was toooooooo heart rending.............yaar grt vms...............and choice of songs............too good................looking forward to have more such updates...............😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG finally I got to read the last two parts. Wow DD absolutely fabulous.
👏 👏 👏 👏 u r really an awesome writer. 👍🏼 the dialogues r just absolutely fabulously written. The pics that u select match so well with the scenes. 👏 poor Dutta and naku. my favorite part is when Dutta is crying and hugs his Dad and says: Yeh aankh Kyun nahi kholti!!"..He cries desperately..."Yeh bahut gandi hai Baba! Mein ro raha hoon lekin iss par koi asar nahi hotaa! Mere aansoon se pehle yeh mere paas hoti thi...Toh aaj kaise yeh in aansooan ko girne de sakti hai?"This is so heartbreaking. 🥺 🥺

Lovely VM by shona. love the mouth organ and the song in the first vm and teri yaadein is absolutely perfect for ending the VM. 👍🏼 👏

Awesome work DD and shona.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonee

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i'm be4 u pm me😉😉😉 .....sooo emotional

Awesome update DD👏👏👏.....very emotional😭😭😭😭😭.....u never woke up nakku from coma😭😭😭....but u done it......
finally ...dat kala n jhumari😡😡😡....go to hell...👏👏👏
omg d dialouge from previous OS... just too good👏👏👏
Datta's hearbreak infront of DP....unbelivable but honestly just out of dis world.....just amzing...kaash we get dis scene in LTL.....
n father_son dialouges superrrrrbbbbb......
nice story DN leave Pn wit DP😊😊😊...omg 😊Baaji is also emotional😭😭😭
Fantastic update DD...as usual wit ur amazing dialouge writting skill👏👏👏
awesome VM selection great song Teri yaadein😊😊😊😊😊
Hey DD...last part😭😭😭.....omg.....hope we get next OS soon😉😉😉
@ DD...great efforts n thnks 4 sharing so amazing Os👏👏👏👏👏 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
@shona....great effort....n tooo goood VM 👏👏👏👏👏



Hey sonee, I m glad that u concured with the end inspite of the fact that I didnt wake up Naku....and I hope I could justofy Kala and Jhumri's end!!!!......
on next OS....I dnt know...If anything in LTL story line inspires me, I wuld defn write an OS.....Probabaly during the FR!! 😃
Thx for the compli!! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ZubyDutta

So emotionally draining!😭 But you never woke up Nakusha from her coma. But brilliant that was.Leaving that as it is.Superbly written. Loved Papaji & Dutta scenes.DD, that was what I hoping to happen in LTL and these CVs just handed over a syringe to Kaala to kill Papaji.Kitna silly tha kal ka episode😡 Yours is so much more realistic & expected in the way these characters were etched in the first place.Kaash you were the writer of this show.😊

Shonu,Shonu jeete jee maardoge kya mujhe!😭 Ek toh ye Patil Saab aur uppar se backgraound mein aisa song.A very fatal mix for poor Zuby yaar.Heart mein bahot pain ho rahaa hai yaar.😭😭😭
Ek Dum Jhakaas!🤗 Especially the male version.

Oh! I am so glad Zuby u found the end apt!! I was skeptical whether u all wuld like it but I couldnt change it....just couldnt.....
Zuby, Your this post informed me tht DP died else I was in jungle and hoping tht Dutta and DP would have this kinda scene one day....but the end of DP track was not right in my mind....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sasha_1

my heart is so heavy -why nakku still in coma stage. i feeling very bad for datta. nakku should come back -datta left PN.

very nice ending. wonderful work DD.

Hey Sasha..Thx sweetie....I am sorry, I just culdnt wake Naku...I tried but I couldnt...My heart didnt let me.....but I am glad u still liked it....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

sooooo emotinol DD loved it.....dutta and DP scene was great im speechless....👏👏👏👏

Thanks Naina....I am glad u lobved Dutta and DP scenes!!!!...I loved writing them too!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pbtghosh

kya bolu samajh me nehi a raha hai.

ro ro ke bura hal hai.😭😭😭😭😭
Naku Waapis jaroor ayegi ye meri biswas hai.
aisa ending hum soch nehi sakte but that was brilliant.
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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ritun

ritun, Aapko pasand aaya toh achcha hee hogaa!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
and yes, I am also 100% sure, Naku wuld one day get up!! she would!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chochu15

DD..... I am speechless.......it was too good. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Sooooo emotional 😭. The dialogues were simply out of the world!!! 👏. Har ek doosre pe bhaari!!!! Every scene was so well executed.......
I am a person.......for happy endings....but the way you ended this one...........first time in my life.....a non-happy ending mujhe pasand ayaa.
This is called true love...one is in coma...hanging on to her life for her love...and Other......without any question...safai..saboot..has accepted her love....beautiful. Nothing can come between such love!!!
Baap bete ka milaap was also so well done.........no forgiving word spoken..non asked..just simple acceptance. Kya Baat hai..👏.
Baaji a true friend..always there in thick and thin. Best ws the way you showed Roops...she said nothing..but she simply walked behind them.....
@Shona....the VM is soo good....👏.

hey shishma, u just got the right essence of my OS.....the way Dutta was ready to wait till the last breadth of his life for her, that was the true feeling for me...that was true love that transcends beyond the physical existence.....thats love for me!!!
and I dnt know why, I didnt want dutta to check the saboot.....The love was enough proof for him...If Naku was convinced of a fact, his love for her, made him believe her...thats all!!
On the Baap-Betaa scene, I thought DP had already said loads of Sorry's....He had left the ball in Dutta's court...Naku had left the ball in Dutta's court...It was upto Dutta now...Even in the coma state, Naku could make Dutta see the right path...How beautiful could love be!!!!
We have anyways talked in depth about this....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: isatb

DD wow i read it b4 ur p.m.😳


DD ur an xcellent writer....👏

It was a vry emotional part. Vry touching. 😭

It had so many emotions in it... LOVE
❤️, ANGER,😡 DEPRESSION😒,FRUSTATION.😡.. and wat not.👍🏼

I loved it to the core.👍🏼

Thanx DD for such a beautiful OS.👏

And Shona gr8 VM... Gud job. 👏

And DD nice Vm selection and loved the song too.😳

I will always remember it and cherish it...😍

Luv u for this🤗

Hey gal...BTW, What shld I call you?? 😛
I am glad u found the OS and VM worth cherishing,....this means a lot to me!! Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shallymann

awesome update dear ..... it was so well written .....👏👏

Thanks Shally!! 😛

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