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Rama

@rama_2010

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

Yeh kya kar diya dear... Naku ko jaga toh diya hota.... very nicely written ... too emotional

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bfunofbb123

@bfunofbb123

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Lekin teri nazar ke binaa toh, mein hee nazar nahi aata Naku!" (awesome dialogue)

Wow DD fabulous OS through out very powerful dialogues and apt pics and VMs Vah Vah u deserve a round of 👏 👏👏 applouse u r mindblowing u should b a writer srsly excellent work but the 2 last part v.emotional i was 😭😭 all the way & sad after finishing the last part my heart is all heavy. i need s/thing to cheer me up u always choose apt. VM as well perfect for dutta's situation @ excellent VM shona and v.good scenes i love it. Ohh DD i am glad naku is not dead i knew u wouldn't b that to us i am sure she will b back from coma coz dutta will give her lots of love "Waapis Aaogi na?" now i get it why u chose the title v.apt. it is nice to c dutta & DP got a chance to talk and dutta to pour out his emotion lovely scene of dad & son. wow what a decision he slapped the pagal N on their face now they should try living w/out dutta. now DD i won't bore u with my long comment bas itna kehna chtahu excellent work i am sad to c ur Os finish but a good one tanx a tone dear and have 🤗 on me!

ps: i forgot can u pm me pls when u can when i want to read it again i can easly get it tanx DD.

Edited by bfunofbb123 - 14 years ago

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@tinkerbe11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

wow, i can truly say i've read alot of FF's here, and believe me they've all been extemely exceptional from one to the next, but i can honestly say you are truly a very talented and skillful writer, and i can clearly see dat many others can see that too. I don't usually comment, but the way you wrote the whole story, keeping true to the characters, always keeping the readers on the edge with what Dutta had to say, 'cause he's obvioulsy very unpredictable with his words in the series also.

I really love the way kept all the emotions, good and bad, running through the reader, the same plight of the story was without doubt also ur readers', very well done.

Fantastic, absolutely fantastic, i think somewhere along the lines everybody was expecting Naku to recover, but i think it was acutally even better that she didn't, ur imagination is also well apreciated as are ur writing skills.

sorry 2 go on a bit😳

Edited by tinkerbe11 - 14 years ago

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Madhia

@-Madzy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Hey Madzy...ab last part mein bhi teri besharam aankh sirf roni chahiye...promise kar!! 😆

kiya😆 hay hay dekho zamana😆........
Mujse shart laganey ka natija janti hain ? (dutta style)🤣

Edited by newbe - 14 years ago

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

OMG... I'm not in a state to write long cmments but i have to say nice ending.. i'm sure she will come back!

I'm so happy he left with DP and Baaji lol n Roops followed!

So damn emotional!!! *wipes tears*

DP and Dutta convo was Ahhhhhhh can't even express it...too good..

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Nikita

@Dancingdoll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Guys! Middle of jungle n I m accessing my net with the most feeble signal. I culd copy paste the OS but couldn't PM anyone as the signal got lost. Will PM everyone ASAP I come back. Thx 4 ur comments. Will reply when I m back.

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

NOOOOOOOO DD <
You cant end it here like this ,
my eyes are wet tears and i dont know
k im shedding happiness tears or painful tears
plz give it a end :(
its soooooooo sad
but DD u have done amazng job with dialogues
ur no less than Anil Deshmukh :)
superb job with selection of vm
but DD thi is too much
the pain is sheer
do continue
atleast itni update kardo k naku wake up
no naughty , sweet scene demanded
only make her awake :(((((((
and DD plz dont write aise Os
i love ur hilarious side
cuz when ur on serious side ur quite brutal , u just tore my heart into pieces
its like i could feel Dutta 's pain :(

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Hey DD thanx alot for the DD for the wonderful update .....OMG what a beautiful and emotional ending ..really brillantly done....loved it ...couldn"t have asked anything more from u ...i mean u left me speechless and spellbound by this mindblowing OS ...the dialogues deeply touched my heart truly ...u are excellent writer yaar .....the father and son convo was very superbly done,i wished they would have showed something like this in LTL....Naku is in coma but there soul is connected,there love is so divine ....tasha"s match made in heaven ....finally dutta left PN looking forward toward new start .....Awww baaji is true friend....he followed dutta.....i was reallyy suprise to see roops following ...loved it ......thanx alot DD for such a excellent OS i will cherish it always...🤗....

"DD TUM WAAPIS TOH AAOGI NA NEW FF or OS LEKE'.....will wait for ur new OS or FF eagerly ....i know u must be tired with one...i know had to put lots of hardwork yaar..really apperciate it all ...

i won"t bug u now....u can take a break for now 😆.....take care and see ya around ...Love and Hugs Suhana🤗

@Shona ....i can"t never get enough of this VM...i have watched countless time....but everytime i watch it seems iam watching it for first time.....loved it to core ....excellent yaar .....thanx for making such a beautiful VM on tasha.....Love and hugs suhana🤗

Here is something from side to u DD for completing 2nd OS

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

DD, I am left speechless at this update. All i can say is the most emotional and intense final update. I loved that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with the people that he and Naku love. He finally accepted his father, was so great!

I bow to you 👏

I will look forward to more FF from you:) please add me to the pm list!

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Kitna empotional part! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 I actually started crying. Naku didn't get up 😭 😭 😭 😭 aww very nicely written 😭 😭 😭 Someone give me a tissue box please! 😭 😭 😭

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