New FF - Just Another Love Story(Updt Chpt 9 pg22)

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: kateleode
Very very very nice Mithai...................Well,I was wondering why havent you updated your FF from so long..................Meri bhi nahi padhi.................... ...........................

dont feel disgeartened I will ASAP n comment big one

K...............Coming to the part..............Wow............Anu is really very lucky to have three moms.............................I mean..............three mom love...................... ...................

yeah she is

Who is this Riki?????????????????????? .............Nakku's BF???????????????????

who do you think he is???

Hmmmmmmmm....So Leela is quite a bold girl having affairs now & then................This time serious????????????? ......................

yeah she is bold n beautifu;l but unfortunately she is serious for the wrong guy you will see soon😉

So,Roops is elder than Nakku as she got married??????????or same age????????????? ..............

same age almost ...... well lets just say for Roops it was an early hasty marriage

Well,dear nice part............I hope Nakku meets Dutta soon.................

oh yeah they will ..... bina miley jayenge kaha???? 😆 they arte destined to be together😳

Thx for the lovely update........................

Thanks😳 for liking it

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

hey thanks for the PM dear..........

n anu n nakku scene's were cute...........

n nakku was soooooooooo moody ................ i think all dutta's effect😆..........

well waiting for Tasha scene yaar..................

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

i just love ur style of writing ....u describe each and every scene in so much detail that one can easily visualize them👏

little anupama is so cute...love the bond that she shares both with nakku and leela... so our dutta has manged to leave a deep impact on nakku..very different story...waiting for the next part

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Bella

@darkchoco

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Very nice update.. I liked leela.. Why dont u hook her up with dutta's BG sudarshan?ROFL.. And yeah.. Is Riki the Morey of ur story? Hoping for next chapter soon

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

vry Welll written mithai👏

Missed ur upadates.....

Thnx for the pm....

I too had the same doubts which sunshine had...

u cleared them...will definitely wait for the nxt part....😳

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554064

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

🤗Hey mithai...so finally got ur update....as usual...nice part...
n loved ur writting style....it's just too good...👏👏👏

n i feel like reading a novel/luv story by a great writer... which usually i avoid...😆😆😆 .but like ur updates...so my last comment was short😕but as i told u sumtim in detail...so here i'm😉😉

n BTW Agree wit rose on dis....
i just love ur style of writing ....u describe each and every scenein so much detail that one can easily visualize them...

so lets me start.......
ohhh Anu seems very lucky n sweetheart....so nice moment wit nakku
smart kid...understand abt d aunt's stuff...😊😊😊
hmm leela very diff. hun...serious affair wit a wrong guy... ohhh poor girl😕😕😕

ohh oo roops dear having so much problem...ohh baaji d lowyer
handle a custody case...good...baaji 😉😉👏👏

sooo it's Dutta's impact dat nakku is so disturb... may b... b'cz of his strange behaviour....not good nakku...😃😃
Riki!!! quite looking interesting character....😲

BTW...in ur story is der any chance of Duji scene...😆😆😆
no...just wonder...Ke teri story me Duji ka aamna -samna hoga ya nahi
so waiting for tasha's next meeting🤗

Edited by sonee - 14 years ago

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tahera vejlani

@taherav

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

hey!! just read ur latest update..all i can say is ur going gr8!!!
just don't keep us waiting.....hehehehe...

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Hey mithai thanx for the update and PM🤗 how was durga festival?...iam sure u must have had lots of fun....did u get the job yet?...

i was waiting for ur FFs update ...i know u were really busy .....

Very well written yaar ...dutta left an impact on naku...she is angry but thinking about him ....Baby Anu is sweet heart ...so cute ....i love the bond naku share with roops and leela....u goona introduce ruji romance soon....i hope tasha meets soon too ....pls jaldi update karna ...take care and see ya around ...thanx for a wonderful update .....👍🏼👏🤗

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: vaniabi
hey thanks for the PM dear..........

n anu n nakku scene's were cute...........

n nakku was soooooooooo moody ................ i think all dutta's effect😆..........

well waiting for Tasha scene yaar..................

ur welcome u read my update for that i have to thank u😃

yeah Anu and Naku are really close😊

well Naku isnt moody she is just sure of wat she wants in her life😳 ull see

yeah her present mental distractions are all Dutta effect😆😉

yup ull have them pretty soon😃

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princessmithai

@princessmithai

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
i just love ur style of writing ....u describe each and every scene in so much detail that one can easily visualize them👏
little anupama is so cute...love the bond that she shares both with nakku and leela... so our dutta has manged to leave a deep impact on nakku..very different story...waiting for the next part

Thank u for loving my style of writing😃

yeah lil ones are always cute😃

yes Dutta indeed have managed to leave a deep impact

wait n watch for more impacts😉