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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

Oh i ve missed all these OSs 😭...have you written them for LTL forum??

Im still trying to catch up with Ek thi kahani...but still far behind 😭...will complete it hopefully during eid holidays 😊...


hey warda..u can find links in media centre of ltl forum dear...happy eid
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Posted: 14 years ago

Happy Pateti to all...after suhana's lovely movie i am much inspired to finish this..so as i write i will updtae the chapter...more coming!

Ch61

CH61

Dutta jumped out of the jeep before it had been braked and took lion's strides towards the niwas. As he entered the drawing room he stopped at the threshold. He took in the scene being played out, his lips pressed and eyes narrowed in volcanic anger. He had calmed nakku down with his reassurance enough to get a few facts out of her. She had said Misaal had gone missing but now he was back and safe but madhu was saying Kalatai had something to do with his kidnapping. It had made his head swing thinking that kalatai can do something this vile. He had had a battle in his head all the way home where a part of him knew that indeed he had been duped by his own blood all this while as Yogi had said and another part of him who remembered his sisters fasting and praying for his wellbeing ,wanted him to believe it was all a misunderstanding. With home ministers signed papers he and baaji were free men to walk out and Harsh was busy taking hostages safe back and clapping the two gangs of yogi and chinna behind bars. Yet, he had warned them that he would be back in PN to take some statements from them.

Dutta's eyes scurried around to take in the scene in a glance. Nakku sat with Misaal sleeping in her lap as her face was deathly pale with AS beside her. While babi and ganpath stood beside her. Kishore was sitting on the couch with his head bent low both his hands looking defeated. Leela and roops where looking at the floor with tears slipping through their eyes as they held the staircase banister in death grip. Madhu was sitting facing kalawati on the settee in front of coffee table with a gun laying between them. Her eyes trained on kala with a feline danger blinking in them.

Nakkusha saw him at the door ,"Saab!" Dutta gave her a silent look of assurance as he took measured steps towards his two sisters facing each other as adversary. He sat down with ease in between then and drew the gun towards him and clicked the magazine. Madhu and kala watched his each action with a suppressed unease. AS called out softly,"Dutta?" He kept his eyes on the magazine,"Do khane khali hai. Kaun tha? Madhu?" Madhu relaxed a little and blinked. Hs ehad been on edge since dragging kalawati to PN. She had doubted if anyone will believe her over kalawati, the elder daughter of the house. After all Madhu was still a bystander in many ways in the family even though AS, nakkusha and Dutta tried hard to involve her in the family. But at that moment with Dutta asking her the question with so much faith in her, she felt at peace. A corner of her heart bloomed with happiness. Madhu looked dutta in his eyes as she told him the whole story right down to kala's hurry about getting rid of Misaal. Nakusha and AS sat stunned, babi tittered on her feet as Ganpat held her shoulder to support her.

Baaji burst out in anger- Iski to main…Bhau! Tu bol to main isko…Bhau..kuch bol na..tu chup kyun hai? Roops took a step forward-Tai…ye sach hai? Apne Misaal ka..ek chootey se bacchey ka istamaal kiya..usse maarna chahti thi aap…Chee! Aajtak aapke har sajish mein humne aapka saath diya..Supriya ko bhaagaya…nakku vahini ko kitna sataya…yahan tak ki baaji….par ye..ye ghaatiya kaam karne se pahele aapne ek baar bhi nahi socha..Ghin aati hai mujhe! Aaisaheb looked at roops in shock- Kai boltos tu pori? Supriya ko tum logon ne….Kala, ye hum kya sunn rahe hai?

Kalawati looked at aaisaheb- aap ye sawal aapne aap se kyun nahi karti aaisaheb…Kya galat kiya maine…iske baap ne humari zindagi ki kushiyan cheen li…to main isse kaise khush rehne deti? Main to isse us bikhari ki tarah dekhna chahti hoon jisse eke k muskurahat bheek mein milley…Mujhe koi pachtava nahi hai…Haan main maarna chahti thi iske sapoley ko…Aur kya galat kiya maine? Isne bhi to koi ganga snaan nahi kiya..Apne hi behen ke suhaag ka khoon hai iske haathon mein..Isne maara hai sudarshan jijaji ko…aur..

Leela whispered softly- nahi…everyone turned to look at her in surprised. Leelawati could sense every eyes on her as she gulped and tried again- Nahi Tai….bhau ne unhe nahi maara. She looked at her mother and then at Dutta who sat immobile still staring at the gun in his hand yet his lips where now pressed in hard line and forehead creased in confusion. Leela continued- Main jaanti thi ki mera pati koi dharmatama nahi hai..par is baat ka yakeen tha ki wo mujhe dhoka nahi de saakte..mujhse sachmuch pyar kartey hai..par mera ye vaham unhone tord diya…unke galat harkaton se mujhe un par shaq ho gaya tha..par main kya karoon samajh hi nahi aaraha tha…phir bhabhi ke godhbharai ke din maine unhe bathroom mein kissi se phone pe baathein kartey sunna. Wo bhau ko dhandey mein nuksaan pahucha rahe the..aur bhau ka kaafi paisa haathiya chuke the..wo us lardki ke saath wo saara paisa leke kahi chale jaane waale the..mujhe aur pari ko chord ke…main ghabra gayi thi, Aai…maine unka picha kiya…unhone bhau ke office mein jaake kuch files ke panne liye. Phir us drawer ka security lock kholla. Bhau ne bhi un par kitna bharosa kiya tha. Unhe dhandey ka hissa banaya tha. Unhe bhua ke safe ka number tak pata tha..aur wo gun nikal li thi. Maine unke samaan aur cell phone bhi check kiya..hotel ka naam aur room number pata chal gaya tha..main bas us aurat ka chehra dekhna chahti thi jissne mera ghar tordh diya…hotel pahuch kar main reception mein koney mein baithi rahi…sochti rahi ki kya bolungi usse...main bhi to bhau ko dhoka deke khud amir banana chahti thi..sudarshan ko har burey kaam mein maine saath diya..apne swarth ke liye..aaj agar sudarshan mujhe dhoka de raha hai..to kahi meri bhi to galati thi. Maine tab dekha sudarshan ko bhaagtey huye hotel ke aandar aatey..bas than liya ki aaj main unsey sawal karke rahungi..

Leela stopped and swallowed a sob and broke down on a chair. Aaisaheb and roops placed a hand on her quivering shoulder. Leela looked at the carpet as she continued- Par sudarshan jaise log jonkh hotey hai..kissi ke wafadar nahi hotey. Main jab tak us kamare mein pahuchi to dekha un dono ke beech ladai ho rahi thi.. sudashan aur us ladki ke beech gun ke liye cheena jhapat ho rahi thi…issi beech wo gun chal gayi aur…pal ko laga sab khatam..par goli roxy ko lagi thi..wo larkhadatey huye bed par gir gayi..aur mar gayi…main ghabra gayi wahi darwaaze ke bahar chup gayi…sudarshan bhi baukhla gaya tha..usne jald saara kamara sametne ki koshish ki…us ladki ke gehne aur paise..kaagzaat files sab ek bag mein daalne lagey…us gun par unki nazar pardhi to unhone usse utha liya..aur ussey aapne rumaal se poochene lagey..ungli ke nishan mitaney ki koshish karne lagey..aur naa jaane kaise gun saaf kartey huye bandook chal gayi aur goli unke gale mein ghus gayi…wahi unki bhi maut hogayi. Leela touched her head in hysteria- kaise chal gayi…khud-b-khud aai..haan..tai..kala tai..wo goli khud se chal gayi..dono ki maut aaise hi ho gyai..jaise jaise wo bandook un dono ke khoon ke pyaasi thi. Main to..meri to aankhon ke saamne andhera chaa gaya…tab baaji ke aawaz sunni…bhau! Bhau? Unhone mujhe dekh liya to? Kya bolungi..police..police aagayi to…mujhe kuch ho gaya to pari ka kya hoga….main..jail nahi jaa sakti thi..maine kuch nahi kiya..par phir wo goli kaise chali? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya..aankhon ke agey andhera sa chaa gaya tha..main wahan se bhaag gayi….kya karti? Par bhau ne wahan kissiko nahi maara...

Babi sobbed looking at ganpath,"dekha..dekha meri roopa kiss rastey chal pari thi,ganpath...itna paap kiya usne ki..Bappa ne khud saaza de di…haye meri bacchi…kyun..kyun kiya re roopali..maazi roopa..ga bai! "

Kalawati laughed sardonically,"jhoot bol rahi hai na leela..tu is dutta bhau ko bachana chati hai na? kyun? Kyun itna lagav hai tum logon ko is naali ke keedey se…theek hai agar isne sudarshan ko nahi maara to bhi main isse utni hi nafrat karti hoon jitna uske baap se..aur meri aankhen isko utne hi dard se tarapta dekhna chahti hai jitna iske baap ko." As she leaned her face at him she smirked,"bhala na samjha bura na samjha..kalawati ko kya samjhega tu dutta damodar patil…tera baap bhi mere samne bheek maangta huya maar gaya tha…tujhe main waise hi pal pal maarety dekhna chahti hoon…teri zindagi mein toofan chahti hoon main…kabhi seema naam ka toofan to kabhi supriya …aur kabhi is nakusha ke naam ka…par ye do kauri ki ladki….isse main utnhi nafrat karti hoon jitna tujhse..aur tere is pilley se." Dutta's hand tightened on the gun as he clicked the magazine in place. Kalwati was so far gone in her hatred she didn't notice a thing as she continued to sprout venom,"Tujhe bhi main waisi maut dungi jaise tere khooni baap ko di thi." She burst out laughing,"kaise chatpataya tha..wo jab maine injection ka high dose diya tha usse…aur kissi ko pata bhi nahi chala..doctors tak ko samajh nahi aaya…bhala na samjhe bura na samjhey…" "Dutta Sriram Patil ko kya samjhegi.." Dutta pressed the barrel of the gun between her forehead and inclined his head to the side,"huh..Kalawati..Kya samjhegi tu dutta bhau ko? Aajtak mere dil pe hamesha ek boojh tha..mere baap ke paap ka boojh…Damodar ke haathon baba ki maut huyi…is ka boojh….par tune aaj wo boojh mere kaandhey se haata diya." He turned his head to his other side as he deliberately cocked the gun and taped the barrel on her forehead,"maien kaha tha tai..kaha tha maine ki mere patni..mere parivaar se bardh ke kuch nahi hai..Agar inhe kuch huya to main sab bhul jaunga…tai tune wahi galati kar di...mere bte ko beech mein nahi lana tha."

Madhu looked with wide eyes at the gun in her brother's hand. She would have grabbed the gun and killed kalawati herself for her daddy but common sense prevailed and she realized that killing kalawati was not the answer but she was afraid that dutta bhau would not think so. She shook her head quietly as she saw the grim smile on dutta's face. He spared a glance at her face and all expressions hid behind an dense mask. He moved his gun to a side and fired a shot making everyone jump. It was followed by another as a startled Misaal let out a loud scared bellow. Dutta looked at his son sideways as he brought the smoking gun back and pressed the hot barrel to kalawati's forehead. The heat of he gun singed kalawati leaving an angry red burnt mark. Dutta looked at her grimly,"tumhein maarne mein mujhe zara sa afsoos nahi hoga..par main wahi kahani dubara nahi dohrana chahta…bhai behen ka khoon bahaye iska asar humare bacchon pe pardey ye main nahi chahta…par tai main tujhe meri zindagi pe kale saaye ki tarah mandrane bhi nahi dunga…ab aur nahi!" Nakkusha who had managed to quieting down a now hiccupping misaal placed a hand on his shoulder,"Saab?" Dutta raised a finger to stop her without breaking eye contact with kalawati. Dutta brought the finegr to his lips,"Shhh! Jaa bacchey ko andaar jaake ke sulaa." Nakkusha licked her lips,"par saab..ek baar.." Dutta growled softly,"Main dubara nahi bolunga..JAA!"

Nakkusha was startled at the vehemence. She looked around at the people of PN and slowly walked towards the stairs with Misaal. Dutta didn't even acknowledge nakusha's retreat. He relaxed back on the settee with easy grace of a lion on afternoon sun and rotated the gun on his fingers,"Bol tai..tereko kya maangta hai…mukti…ya…mauka?" Kalawati smirked- tujhe lagat hai dutta bhau kit u kalawati ko kuch de sakta hai…tu ab bhi nahi samjha mujhe Dutta. Dutta shook his head- main samajh gaya tai..tu nahi samjhi. Chal ek mauka deta hoon. Tu aaj hi yahan se patil wadi se patil khandaan se durr chali jaa…aaisaheb apni beti nahi khoyegi…roops leela apni behen aur anay apni maa…warna…

Kalwati- mujhe maut se darr nahi lagta dutta…main aisi zindagi se marna passand karungi.. Dutta smiled-jaanta hoon...isliye to zinda choda hai..Baaji!

Baaji came behind kala and stood with anger simmering down his face. Kalawati gave one look at her family as they all stood with disapproval on her face. She walked away with her bearing regal like that of a queen, defeated yet dignified.

Dutta stood up as kala left the hall and walked towards his room without saying a word to anyone.

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Nakkusha was standing near the crib with Misaal deep in a well-fed slumber. He came and stood beside her, slowly extending his hand towards the baby. Nakkusha held it before it touched the baby. Dutta looked at her questioningly. Nakkusha- Haath dho lo saab! As dutta's frown darkened she continued speaking still looking at a point near his shoulder- chottey bacchey ko jaldi bimaari lagti..doctor ne bola…bahar se aake isko godh lene se pahele haath sabun se dhona…hamesha! Dutta broke into an amused grin as he spread his arms for her. She walked into them without a word.

Dutta murmured softly in her hair-Nakku! Oh Nakku…She brushed her cheek against his kurta feeling the thud of his heart-Saab! Mujhe aise mat chord ke jaana saab…main akele kya karegi..aap nahi to nakku kuch nahi saab. Dutta hushed her- Ab tera Saab kahi nahi jayega nakku..bas! ab kuch aisa nahi hoga…Main tujh pe mere betey pe koi aanch nahi aaney dunga. He smiled as she straightened- Ab jaake sabun se haath dho loon…hmm? She nodded and looked down shyly as he gave a fleeting tender look towards his son.

Dutta was in the shower as nakkusha took out fresh clothes for him when aaisaheb entered the room. "Nakku". Nakkusha turned to her-Aaisaheb..aap? AS looked at her pensively- Dutta kahan hai beta? Naku looked at the bathroom door just as dutta came out rubbing his wet hair with a towel. He saw AS and pulled on his kurta- Aaisaheb aap..kya baat hai?

Aaisaheb swallowed a sob- Beta, aapni aai ko maaf karede…us din maine tujhe pe shaq kiya…itna galat kaha maine..akhir sautela bana hi diya na tujhe….aapni aai ko maaf kar. She joined her hands and bowed her head. Dutta grabbed her hand and shook his head- nahi aai! Hey kai kartoos! Aap aai hai..aap mujhe daatogey to mujhe kabhi bura nahi lagega aai..apka haq hai..aur who waqt hi kuch aur tha…mujhe koi gilla nahi hai..mujhe fakar hai ki aap meri aai ho…bas! He looked at nakkusha and continued- Aai main waha jail gaya to bas is yakeen ke sath ki meri aai meri nakku ko aur mere bacchey ko sambhal lengi…main aapke jitney ehsaan uttaun kum hai..maafi mujhe maangni chahiye ki aaj maine aapse aapki ek beti cheen li. Aaisaheb shook her head- nahi kala ko aapni kiye ki saaza mill rahi hai bas.usne jo kiya wo galat kiya..apna rasta usne khud chunna hai. Dutta looked at her and closed his eyes then looked back at his sleeping son- Aaisaheb aap chinta mat kariye..kalatai ko kuch nahi hoga…maine unhe bas paatilwadi se durr bheja hai..wo har waqt meri nigrani mein rehengi…taaki kabhi dubara aisa kuch na kar sakey…main majboor tha..main nakku aur aap logon ke surakhsha mein koi gunjaish nahi chord sakta tha. Aaisaheb nodded and caressed his cheek lovingly- kitna dubla ho gaya hai re tu! Main kuch khane ko banwaati hoon. Nakusha moved towards the door to go to the kitchen when aaisaheb called her- naku tu rehne de..yahi ruk dutta aur misaal ke paas..hum dekhtey hai. with a final look of love at her son and grandson AS went out of the door. Dutta was about to say something to nakku when misaal wimpered in his bed. Dutta and nakku walked in unison towards their son. As nakkusha picked him up to soothe him dutta whistled softly caressing his head and placing a kiss on his cheeks.

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It took a six months to finally get Chinna nad yogi sentenced for treason and terrorism. Try as he might Dutta couldn't escape the court case as he was connected to closely to the incident. The diary provided enough ammunition and proof to shake up the whole system. And though Dutta took a stand of helpful, patriotic citizen with the means to help the government, his whole business was scrutinized minutely in the process. The clean-chit from the home minister and Kishore's Careful handling along with Dutta's business brains helped him making a complete clean come back of all his assets. Other than a few small land acclamation issues and few suspicious alcohol factories dutta came out clean.

Ganpath- main dutta bhau ka sasur! Prosecution lawyer- aap dutta patil ke sasur hai..phir bhi unhe bhau boltey hai.Ganpath- wo kya hai na..adat pardh gayi hai..bhau ko bhau bolne ki..isko to meri baiko bhi bhau bolti hai. Prosecution lawyer- to bataiye ganpath ji kya aapke damad gairkanooni gold biscuits ka dandha karta hai? ganpath- Gold biscuits ka dandha? Arey saab aap kya boltey ho..mera damaad to gold biscuits ka factory chalata hai..hi hi hi. Prosecution looked at the judge and opposition lawyer victoriously- achha sach keh rahe hai..Ganpath- To nai to kya..main caretaker hai re us factory ka…Prosecution- to dekhye my lord, dutta patil ke sasur khud maan rahe hai ki dutta patil gold biscuits ka dhanda karety hai..unki factory hai. Ganpath nodded looking at the judge with his hands folded- haan ibaap..aur factory ka naam meri baiko ke naam pe hai..humara lagan ka wo happi wala birthday gifat hai..Babi maarie gold biscut…

Dutta was fined a amount of 10lakhs as fine for the tax evation and licence irregularities but he came out of all charges as not guilty unlike Chinna and Yogi who were shipped off for a death sentence. Harsh met dutta and baaji at the end of court precedings. Dutta looked at him sternly- bola than a…main bas businessman hoon. Harsh shook his head- tu conman hai…bahut accha conman hai….kanoon ko dhoka de sakta hai par main tujhe jaanta hoon. Bas ek sawal ka jawab de de. Jail ke CCTV ko kaise cheat kiya tum logon ne…maine kai raaton tak socha..baar baar wo footage dekhi..date time sab kuch verify kiya..par…kiya kaise tum logon ne.

Dutta smiled- wahni to baat hai…..tune time aur date verify kiya…mera aadmi Mumbai ke film editing center jaake sabse acchey editor ko pakad laya…uska kaam tha tere saare cameras ki footage is bariki se edit karna ki time aur date bardhtey rahe aur humari footage repeat hoti rahe.. tune dekha to wahi par har baar alag samay pe alag tareek pe. Bas!

Harsh laughed- of course! He looked at baaji and back at dutta- Mera transfer ho gaya hai..Gurgaon! Main ye nahi keh sakta ki tum dono se mujhe ishq ho gaya hai..par haan chinna aur yogi jaise mujrimo ko pakadne mein jo tum dono ne meri madat ki hai wo main nahi bhul sakta. Thanks. Madhu ne mujhe bataya ki ab se tum log koi gaikanooni kaam nahi karoge…koi gangster bhua nahi but complete legit business. Sunke bahut accha laga. Best of luck.

As harsh turned and walked away from them Dutta looked at baaji who had gone quiet. On the way to PN baaji was silent as usual. Dutta was not blind to his friend's agony. Shamiaka had told baaji that she couldn't go against her brother to marry him. Not finding a way out they had put an end to their relation. But it was killing his friend a bit every minute.Madhu had also told dutta that she would never go against him but the He had a different relation with madhu. They understood each other respected each other but knew they still had limitations which had been imposed due to their different bringing up. Madhu was far more independent and stern than Shammi was and she took her own decisions. She had never declared her relationship with harsh neither dutta ever broached the topic but it was like a landmined no man's land between them. He decided he would bring things to right in his friend's life and that of his sister.

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It's really quite impossible to look intimidating to your opponents when u can feel the front of your kurta becoming soggy and wet by the minute. Yet Dutta tried to frown at the constructors who were supposed to work on his Housing society in Pune,"To tum log garibon ka haq maarke mera faida karna chahtey ho..Dutta…hmm..Ek minute beta..Baba ka kameez choddo.."dutta tried to pry away his kurta buttons from his six month old son's wet fingers and slobbery mouth. Misaal clutched at his kurta cloth and immediately started sucking the fabric. Dutta grimaced at the wet sticky feeling. Another good pathani ruined, his fourth of the day he sighed. Turning back to the amused contractors he tried again,"Jo zameen ki keemat hai..usse ek paisa kun nahi dena un logon ko…Dutta bhau..garibon ka haq nahi maarta samjhe…uff ho misaal…"Dutta changed hands to keep mishaal from bending and licking the table top. Misaal was not amused by his father's unsure handling of himself and gave a experimental cry to warn his daddy off. Dutta's panick was rising inside as he felt mIsaal's little body turn and twist unnaturally to reach the table for a lick. "Ye nakku kahan reh gayi…doodh garam karne mein itna waqt lagta hai kya?" He thought in frustration. He cleared his throat,"Haan to main kya keh raha tha.."

A young promoter looked at the little active baby and smiled,"meri chotti beti bhi yahi karti hai…par bhau sabse mushkil hoti hai jab ye log zameen pe crawl karne lagtey hai…job hi cheez zameen pe milley wo seedha muh mein daal detey hai." Turning to his neighbout he continued jovially,"abhi parso kya hua mallom Rane…meri beti aise crawl kartey kartey garden tak pahuch gayi aur gamaley se nikal ke mitti kha liya.." Dutta frowned at his son trying to decide if increasing security would prevent his headstrong son from reaching any such potted plants around the house or maybe he should consider throwing out all such potted ornamental plants. Misaal had had enough of clumsy handling by his father. He needed some warm cuddling and food now. And even a change. He bellowed his needs loudly enough to sermon an emergency at the nation's capital. Nakkusha rushed into the office with a harried look on her face,"Saab…aap thodi deer ko to bacchey ko sambhal saktey ho na..main bas doodh leke aa hi to rahi thi….aaja mera beta.." Misaal wimpered in his mother's arms as she took him out of the room jostling him a little.

Dutta turned back to see amusement in the faces sitting across him. he cleared his throat and brusquely turned back to the work at hand.

...To be continued soon for the final installments of the story stay tuned!


Edited by shilpita87 - 14 years ago
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omg shilpi ur updating and dat 2 so soon compared 2 ur recent updates...me is shooo happy!!!!


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awesome work shilpi just loved every bit of it it seems to be a perfect story for eternal lovers.so dutta finally released from all charges and loved when madhu realized that he trusted her.loved the confrontation btw kala and dutta and his way to punish her but is still concerned about her safety what a brother he is a darling.happy that nobody killed suds he died bcoz of his oversmartness he deserves this.

cute conversation btw tasha liked this part the most and both again confess their love and their need of one another in their unique style.the most funny part was ganpat confession about gold biscuits.dutta was more smarter than harsh he should be the cop.
and misaal what a cute and naughty baby doing everything to irritate dutta got same stubborn attitude like his father and one come love nakku.
nakku scolding dutta for not handling misaal properly was the best and loved misaal got the temper of his father.
in short a cute,romantic,awesome,fantastic,emotional and lovely update.thanx again shilpi for such a lovely update.😊
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awsem so dutta reach house and mishal is sleepin peacefully in nakku lap and dutta trust madhu and now roops takes family side and finally roops ne supriya waali baat bataa hi di and kala tell the their truth and leela tell the dutta didn't kill suds so suds and roopa killed by gun itself and this kalawati is really a bit how dare she called mishal anything and now she reavealed whole truth about hersely awsem and the dialauge "Dutta Sriram Patil ko kya samjhegi " awsem and he shot in air and leave kala daraa diya nakku ko so kala marna pasand karegi but our dutta didn't kil her and throw her out and nakku says 'Haath dho lo saab! chottey bacchey ko jaldi bimaari lagti..doctor ne bola'bahar se aake isko godh lene se pahele haath sabun se dhona'hamesha!' and aai sahib clears that kala deserved the punishment and 6 month leap so ganpat joked in court babi maarie gold biscut so finally harsh find his answers about cctv so harsh ka transfer and baaji ki tension and dutta decides do do everything ok and the last part was fab mishal teases dutta and they talk about children in office mishal had enough of dutta's clumsy handling so he cried loudly to call nakku and nakku to aate hi baras padi and tae mishal with him and now am waiting for you last chapter so do it soon
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Thanks guys for ur support throughout the long journey...here is the last installment i am adding in bits as i am still writing it. My net connection at home has gone dead so will have to post from office only..so i don't know when it will end.....PMing frm office is dicey so no pMs..once all things are ok..will send out PMs to all.


Edited by shilpita87 - 14 years ago
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i edited my comment for your whole chaper and eagerly waiting for last chapter
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Posted: 14 years ago
my fav ff is coming to end bit heavy hearted ,but loved the story so much & plz include more of tasha in the coming update ,have missed their bonding for long time ,thanks for keeping the memory of tasha from ltl1 alive ,loved it & plz more of tasha 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
.. REs 😉 ( meine miss kaise kiya ?)😃
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as always lovely update,thnx for the surprise was not expecting it so soon 😆,
loved the cool way dutta handled the Kala face off,loved the way he asked madhu abt wht hapend ,, madhu felt so gud tht he trusterd her version of truth and
oh boy ,, fianlly leela came out iwth the truth and confessed , roops also realised the truth abt kala ;s hatred ,, loved it the way dutta fired the gun in air and placed the hot nozzle on her forehead and how kala reaceted ,,defeated but dignified refused to accept her defeat ,,, so dutta is going to keep an eye over her and
aS also aplogised, that was a sweet gesture ,,,
loved dutta playign with misaal at the end
oh ya loved the way u justifed and bght closure to dutta business as legit by his payign off the govt in form of taxes n all ,,loved that part now his businese is legit ,, and now me waiting for next update 😉 eagerly 😃
Edited by prncz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update plez add me to ur pm list

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