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Posted: 14 years ago
Yes yes next update is tomorrow.. sorry yaar there are so many kebab mein haddis in my house that distract me when i start writing loool😆😆😡
Pyar ke dhoke is being written at the moment.. hopefully will finish today lol😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshiine21

Yes yes next update is tomorrow.. sorry yaar there are so many kebab mein haddis in my house that distract me when i start writing loool😆😆😡
Pyar ke dhoke is being written at the moment.. hopefully will finish today lol😆


Kebab Mein haddis ! Hmm ..The Hot ones or the irritating ones ... If the Hot ones ..what r they doing to distract u nd if the the Irritating ones .. show the ur a Dutta's Diwani nd LTL sherni
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpio10


Kebab Mein haddis ! Hmm ..The Hot ones or the irritating ones ... If the Hot ones ..what r they doing to distract u nd if the the Irritating ones .. show the ur a Dutta's Diwani nd LTL sherni

Hot ones? hahahahaha even since i saw MR aka Dutta no1 can be hotter than that man but irritating ones i tell you so annoying...Every time i sit down to write.. someone comes and drag me away! 😡Angry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.Angry ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
I haven't even watched the other serials that i usually watch lol😆
Scorpio.. please update yours soon yaar.. yours is so interesting😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshiine21

Hot ones? hahahahaha even since i saw MR aka Dutta no1 can be hotter than that man but irritating ones i tell you so annoying...Every time i sit down to write.. someone comes and drag me away! 😡😡😡
I haven't even watched the other serials that i usually watch lol😆

Yes ! Girl Today ....
Scorpio.. please update yours soon yaar.. yours is so interesting😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sophie..great part yaar
i am happy that nisha got up but she is going to bbe real sad to know the truth about the death of her child
noops fight my have to see that
looking forward to tasha pillow fight..hope you update soon..cant wait
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 39

Nisha comes in the room with a tray humming. She puts it on the table and wakes baaji up.

Nisha: baaji...baaji utho

Baaji: hmm

Nisha: baaji utho varna main chali jaoungi

Baaji: emotional blackmail mat karo

Nisha: to utho na.. main nashta lekar aayi hoon

Baaji sits up: kyun? Tumhe kaam karne ki zaroorat Nahin hain.. araam karo

Nisha: theek hain baba Nahin karoongi.. lekin ab utho aur nashta karo.

Baaji: theek hain mein fresh hokar aata hoon

Nisha: theek hain.. Jaldi karna..

Baaji goes to the bathroom and Nisha happily tidy the bed. And starts making his tea. Baaji comes out wiping his hair and throws the towel on the bed.

Nisha: towel bistar par Nahin rakte...utao

Baaji: jaane do na

Nisha: maine kahan utao

Baaji: theek hai.

Baaji takes the towel and puts it in the bathroom. He makes himself comfortable on the sofa next to Nisha and feeds her before eating. Nisha also feeds him back and gives him his medicine. Baaji is surfing through the channels and Nisha is sitting next to him...

Nisha: baaji?

Baaji: haan

Nisha: tumne hamare bacche ke liye koi naam socha hain?

Baaji gets shock and drops the remote. He looks at her completely stunned; he didn't know that Nisha didn't know about the baby. Tears starts flowing in baaji's eyes.. He tried, tried so hard to hold them back but as soon as Nisha mention THEIR kid, he couldn't control himself. Nisha got confused when she saw baaji's tears. She didn't understand why he was crying. For a second, all kind of thoughts start flowing through her brain...but she shrugged them off and looked at baaji, trying to figure out why he had tears.

Nisha: baaji.. tumhare aankhon mein aanso kyun hain? ...Baaji *shakes him*...Main tumse baat kar rahi hoon jawab do...*shakes him again*.. aree kya hua? DEKHO BAAJI YEH MAZAAK KARNE KA WAQT NAHIN HAIN.. batao kya hua??... *pulls his face to her*... Baaji kuch to bol.. tumhari khamoshi mujhe tadpa raha hain... please baaji..kuch to bol...*makes him stand up and makes him look in her eyes * Baaji? Hamare bacche theek to hain na?... tum aise chup kyun ho batao!!!

Baaji: NAHIN... woh theek Nahin hain *cries* woh theek Nahin hain *sits back down and puts his hands on his head*

Nisha *kneels down to him*: baaji tum kya kehrahe ho? Mujhe kuch samajh mein Nahin aa raha hain.. tum aise baatein kyun karahe ho?... aise khamosh mat raho baaji...*takes his hands and put on her head* tujhe meri kasam! Sach bata!

Baaji is shell shock and doesn't find any words to tell her. Nisha looks at him still holding his hand on her head...

Nisha: sach sach bata baaji.. kya hua?

Baaji: hamara..*sobs* hamara baccha *cries*

Nisha: hamara baccha kya baaji?

Baaji: hamara baccha ab Nahin raha Nisha.. woh Nahin raha.. accident mein..

Before he could finish his sentence Nisha lets go of his hands and sits down on the floor numb. Baaji's voice echoes in her head. Baaji looks at her and makes her stand up.

Baaji shakes her: Nisha? Nisha...kuch to kaho.. aise chup mat raho..

Baaji shakes her by the shoulders but Nisha feels dizzy and falls unconscious in his arms. Baaji gets worried and carries her to the bed. He puts her there carefully and holds her face..

Baaji: Nisha...NISHA utho.. NISHAAA..

Baaji runs out the room and calls everyone. PN wasis comes running to baaji..

AS: baaji? Kya hua?

Nakku: Nisha to theek hain na?

Baaji: Nahin woh behosh ho gayi hain... maine sab sach bata diya hain aur phir... *cries*

Dutta consoles Baaji while the rest runs inside the room. Nakku sits on the bed next to Nisha and AS sits on the other side.

AS: Leela, doctor ko phone karo

Leela: Ji AS.

Leela leaves to call doctor and Duji comes in the room. Baaji is crying on dutta's shoulder and can't control his tears. Leela comes back and informs them that doctor is on the way.

Nakku: baaji.. tune bacche ke bare mein?

Baaji: haan Vayhini.. main kya karta.. usne apna kasam de diya..

Nakku: tum chinta mat karo.. Nisha bohut himatwali hain.. sab theek ho jayega... rona band karo.

Nakku stands up and pats baaji's shoulder; he turns to her and hugs her letting all his tears come out. Nakku consoles him.

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Everyone is outside the room waiting while the doctor is checking Nisha. She's awake but quiet and isn't responding to anything. Doctor comes out saying he gave her an injection but she's still in shock, do whatever but they need to make her cry. Everyone rushes in the room to see Nisha. She's sitting up against the wall on the bed and looking straight forward. There's no tears whatsoever in her eyes. Baaji and Nakku sit on each side of the bed.

Baaji: Nisha? Nisha meri taraf dekho..*holds her face*.. Nisha?

Nakku: Dutta, Rahul aur Aman ko le aao.. Shayad unke dekh kar Nisha ro paregi.

Dutta: haan ek minute... *Dutta leaves to get RaMan*

Nakku: Don't loose hope baaji, sab theek ho jayega.

Baaji: kaise Vayhini... Nisha kabhi theek Nahin ho payegi. *Dutta comes in*

Dutta: jao maasi ke paas jao..

Aman: papa maasi ko kya hua hain?

Nakku: sawal baad mein...yahan aao

Rahul: Chacho..mujhe utho, mujhe bistar pe jaana hain.

Baaji: aaja. *picks Rahul up and puts on the bed next to Nisha*

Aman: mama.. uthao *Nakku picks aman up and puts him on the bed*

Rahul: Maasi aaj ap mujhe chocolates Nahin doge? *pats his hands on Nisha's shoulder*

Aman: Bhaiya.. maasi humse naraaz hain?

Rahul: Nahin chotu.. maasi humse bohut pyar karte hain.

Aman: Maasi *pats her cheeks* ma... maasi ko kya hua hain?

Rahul: Chachu... maasi humse baat kyun Nahin kar rahi hain?

Baaji: pata Nahin beta...

Nakku: Rahul...Aman...Maasi se baat karo

Aman: lekin mama.. maasi humse baat Nahin kar rahi hain..

Rahul: lagta hain naraz hain

Nakku: Dekh Nisha.. bacchon tumse baat kar rahi hain... jawab do... yeh dono tumhare bhi hain na.. jab yeh dono payda hua tha to woh tumhi thi jo in dono ko pehli baar dekh. Bhool gayi? Tumne kahan tha ke tum in dono ko apne bacchon ki tara dekhoge.. ab kya hua? Bolo Nisha... ab yeh dono tumhare liye kuch Nahin lagta? Tum itni kamzor bangayi? Nahin... kamzor Nahin... khudgarz ho tum...*shakes her* khudgarz ho tum samjhi.. tumhe sirf apna dukh dikhta hain... kisi aur ka Nahin...isiliye tumhara baccha tumhe chor kar chala gaya...hamesha ke liye...woh chala gaya Nisha.. aur tum yahan ek zinda lash bankar reh gayi... ab kya karoge? Tum usse wapas Nahin laa sakte ho Nisha.. ab woh Nahin ayega.. chala gaya...chala gaya woh...*shakes her* samjhi tum?

Nisha: NAAHIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNN....NAHIINNN WOH MUJHE CHOD KAR NAHIN JAA SAKTA..*cries and hugs Nakku*...mera baccha Nakku... mera baccha...

Nakku: ro le.. jitna rona hain ro le...lekin aise chup mat raho.. hum sab hain na tere paas.

Baaji: haan hamesha. *hugs Baaji*

Nisha: Baaji.. hamara baccha...

Baaji couldn't do anything but cry. He didn't know how to console her. Everyone else was crying in the room. Nisha sees RaMan on the bed and quickly envelope both of them in her arms. RaMan wipes her tears and kisses her cheeks.

(Alright, Don't even think i'm giving RaMan away to BaSha...Well Keep reading.. There's a surprise coming up...Now lets get over with Noops Fight which was delayed for long)

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Roops is in bed with Arjun (her son) sleeping and Naman is in the living room talking on the phone. Roops touches Naman's place and doesn't find him there. She opens her eyes and Naman isn't there. She slips out of bed silently because Arjun is sleeping and goes look for Naman. She stops behind the living room door when she hears him talking on the phone...

Naman *on the phone*: dekho aisa mat karo..main aja ounga...maine Roops ko kuch Nahin bataya hain lekin main kis mou se bata oun? Dekho Riya...mere baat samajh ne ki koshish karo...main aisa Nahin kar sakta...mujhe kaam hain..disturb mat karo..*cuts the phone*

Roops *comes to Naman*: Naman, who par kisse baat karaha tha?

Naman: woh... Mr.Gupta... business partner..uska phone tha

Roops: aur uski beti ne phone pick up kiya.. hain na?

Naman: matlab?

Roops: i'm sure ke Mr.Gupta ka middle name Riya Nahin hain.. ryt?

Naman: tum meri baatein sun rahi thi?

Roops: sun rahi thi matlab? Biwi hoon main tumhari...

Naman: biwi ho to meri baatein sun sakti ho

Roops: ji haan.. pura haq hain mujhe

Naman: oh common roops.. you're spying on me

Roops: Spying on you? NO! I heard you when i was coming to see you...

Naman: don't chat rubbish.. bakwas band karo

Roops: bakwas? Ab meri baatein bakwas lagti hain tumhe? Aur yeh Riya kaun hain?

Naman: kaun Riya?

Roops: jisse tum baat kar raha tha

Naman: main koi riya viya ko Nahin jaanta..

Roops: jhoot mat bolo Naman.

Naman: mujhe office ke liye dher ho raha hain main...

Roops: meri baat abhi tak khatam Nahin hui hain Naman.

Naman: to khatam karlo ... aur aise sawal mat pooch ke main jawab na de paaoun

Roops: RIYA KAUN HAI??? AUR KYA RISHTA HAIN TUM DONO KE BEECHE?

Naman: none of your business. *roops holds naman's collar*

Roops: jawab do Naman...

Naman: mujhe choddo.. mujhe office jaana hain..

Roops: pehle mere sawal ka jawab do..

Naman pushes Roops off and slaps her. Roops holds her cheeks and cries...

Roops: oh isiliye tum pichle kuch mahinon se aise behave kar rahe ho..Riya ke wajai se?

Naman: Roops.. I'm sorry.. i didn't mean to hit you, I'm sorry. *goes near her*

Roops: chhona bhi mat...Don't you dare touch me!

Naman: Roops.. maaf kardo..Nahin Riya aur mere beeche kuch Nahin hain.. kasam se

Roops: aaj tumne mujhe tappad mara ek aur ladki ki wajaise?

Naman: Nahin meri baat suno roops..aisi koi baat Nahin hain... main tumhe sab kuch bata doonga lekin main right time ka intezaar kar raha tha.

Roops: mujhe tappad marne ka intezaar?

Naman: Nahin... i didn't mean it okay? ...

Roops runs in her bedroom and locks the door. She slides against the door and sits on the floor crying. She tries calm herself down because Arjun is sleeping on the bed. Naman knocks on the door.

Naman: Roops please darwaza khol do.. please

Roops: tamasha band karo.. Arjun sau raha hain.. aur awaaz neeche rako..

Naman: please

Roops: tumhe office jaana tha na.. to jao..

Naman: lekin...

Roops: Jao... varna main chali jaoungi Arjun ke saath

Naman: Nahin.. tum kahin mat jaana.. ma office jaa raha hoon.. ake baat karleinge..

Roops puts her head on her knees and cries silently. Naman leaves reluctantly.

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Nakku is making the bed in her room and dutta comes throwing himself on the bed. Nakku gets angry and pulls the bed sheet but she ends up falling on dutta. They share and eyelock for a moment but Nakku shoves a pillow in dutta face and tries to run off but he holds her hands and pulls her back... Nakku hits dutta with a pillow. They both stand on the bed hitting each other with pillows and protecting themselves. Dutta rips Nakku's pillow causing all the cottons/feathers to fall all over the place. Nakku runs around the room but dutta catches her but RaMan comes there. Nakku runs to them and stands behind them knowing dutta won't be able to do anything if the kids are there. Rahul and Aman signals each other and runs to the bed. Dutta smiles at Nakku naughtily. But Rahul and Aman attack dutta with pillows. Dutta picks both of them up and puts them on the bed, holding a pillow to protect himself from his strong kids who seems to be stronger than him.

Rahul: mama...papa ko attack karo..

Aman: aao na..

Nakku stands near the door with her hands behind her back, Leela comes there and gives her something in her hands but Dutta doesn't see Leela behind the door. Leela leaves and Nakku comes closer to dutta with her hands behind her back. Dutta is busy protecting himself from RaMan when Nakku puts ice inside his kurta making him scream. Nakku starts laughing and dutta jumps up and down to take the ice out. Grabbing this opportunity RaMan attack Dutta making him fall on the bed. Nakku joins in and they all hit dutta leaving him helpless.

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Nisha and Baaji are at the hospital in the doctor's office waiting for the doctor. Doctor comes with report and she's reading it seriously.

Baaji: kya hua doctor... sab theek hain?

Doctor: ji ek minute.

Nisha: koi problem hain doctor?

Doctor: ji Nahin.. lekin iss report ka akhri page missing hain.. main abhi aayi. *she leaves*

Nisha: baaji.. sab theek hoga na?

Baaji: haan main tumhare saath hoon.. *doctor comes back*

Baaji: reports to theek hain na doctor?

Doctor: reports to bilkul achi hain... infact im surprised.

Baaji: kya hua doctor?

Doctor: Nisha phir se ma ban sakti hain...

Nisha and Baaji's face lighten up and they both look at each other with big smiles.

Nisha: main phir se ma ban sakti hoon?

Doctor: absolutely. Itne bade accident ke baad mujhe laga ke reports acha Nahin hoga lekin yeh to miracle hain...You are fit and fine to be pregnant again.

Baaji: kya baat kar rahe ho doctor.

Nisha: thank you so much doctor...Thank you so much...

Doctor: You're welcome Nisha... Actually since you're not well, you have 2 months holiday already, if you get pregnant soon, i might extend it to a year.

Nisha: can you do that for me?

Doctor: why not? Here's your reports and take care of yourself.

Baaji: don't worry doctor. I will take care of her myself

Nisha: Bye Doctor.

Baaji: thanks doctor.

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Sorry for the delay girls
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Posted: 14 years ago
me likes it a lot
great update
loved it big tym
jaldi next part update karo n pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice dear................now nisha came to know the truth n finally she had good news from the doctor toooo...........so happy for Basha ......................


n feel bad for roops........ so somebody black mailing naman na that's why he behaved strangely ................ k anyways i believe him ........... he must me good person coz he was nisha's bro n most important naku's friend na .....sooooooo he must be a nice person......


n finally my fav Tasha scene .................... it was awesome ................... i can imagine those scene's ..................poor dutta his kids supported their mom na......... n ice cubes on dutta's kurta ..............wow!!!!!!!!! in that situation i want to see dutta's reaction yaar.......... i saw many expression of him............but not like this kind of expression................... very well written 👏 ..... i loved it...........

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Posted: 14 years ago
yea it was all that u promised..u r a superwoman ..handling so many ffs at a time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the tasha scene..so cute...
poor nisha bt atleast she can becum pregnant agen

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