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Soumya

@AbhiAni

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#561

well written...people like Morey deserves such type of death but really feel soory for nisha😭

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#562

hey really fantastic update yaar................as usual dutta's BG r useless😆 in this kidnap scene's too na..........but u narrate this kidnapping scene very well👏...........it was superbbbbbbbbbb n wat kind words that moree spoke with dutta...........really i want to kill him coz of that .......but our super hero be na there😉............finally moree dead by dutta's hand...... moree deserve's that.............thank god u save my sweet heart rahul😊............again u written it very well dear.....i like the whole........

n ur precap...........really feel bad for BaSha.........after 2 years they have a baby now only.......but y yaar u gonna kill the baby.........how BaSha gonna accept this it is really very hard them na............. they r such a pure hearted n loving couples...........i loved them toooo......

anyways i have a hope on u...........looking fwd.............

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Wow, gr8 one yaar Sophie. Kamina 😡Moore mar gaya. Dutta usey kaise chodta. Itni Danger death diya hai usne. Loved it vry much. And last part was so cute. Awww all 4 of them hug. Aww.

Nisha ka accident, and her baby dies. 😭

Nisha in coma and Baji breaks down😭

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Dibya Nanda

@swati2008

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#564

sophie......very well written..........loved the action........NiSha's child died.....poor Baaji......update soon......

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Madhia

@-Madzy-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#565

hey fantastic update 👏loved everything great work 😉

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bfunofbb123

@bfunofbb123

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Hey sophie tanx alot dear i just finished reading part 31-33 bohot bohot acha hai i liked it very much sorry 4 late comment. i was coming ol 4 few minutes didn't have much time and since u wrote very nicely the least i can do is read it aram se don't want to rush it i like the leap raman r grown up and they r very talkative 4, 2yr olds but very adorable at the same time they have their own room now so they won't interupt tasha as much. tasha r adorable couple and parents they r doing a v.good job 👏and u kept they romance alive v.well done to u too👏. the CV's can learn so much from u they can do alot with the characters instead of dragging it to keep it fresh u have a fantastic ideas which never run's out i admire u 4 that and enjoyed ur every update. wow tasha r having another baby girl so nice i wonder dutta how he will b in the second pregnancy but no lifting naku now she should insist she will walk will b more realistic. i feel sorry for basha though they r going to lose their baby ohh a heart break 💔 in store 4 them, but tank God naku is not going to give basha her child that will b unrealistic no matter what u r close or family u wouldn't give away ur baby i am glad it is not happening. sophie dear keep writing u r v.talented girl i look forward to read ur next update and naku pregnacy and the twist well done girl.😉👏. sophie if u r not bored by the long comment here u r.

Edited by bfunofbb123 - 14 years ago

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Shally

@shally_m

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#567

very good .... and interesting update ....👏👏👏

can't wait for more 😉😉😉

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#568

very heart touching update dear................. Dialogs are awesome............ I was expecting Dutta to salp nakku to get her consious back......... But its also ok with AS...........................

I am very happy that Dutta stays on his words and give moorey a painfull death.......................... the scene was very heart touching when nakku begs to Duji for rahul & when bajji took rahul safely, the way she huged and thanked him....................

overall its very emotional update....................

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#569

OMG OMG OMG Sophie
what an update
it was crazy than King Taka ride
full on thriller
it was like i was watching a full on rocking movie
DUtta was flawless
but Morey was himself awesome
his entry and exit superbbbbbbbbb
im loving it
gr8 job sophie !

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#570

one hell of a rollercoater ride this part was.. full of action and fast paced, so unlike our original LTL😆.. maybe u should give them tips on how to move the story forward and make optimum use of their main cast!

and thansk so much that there was no cliffhanger.. as i am not sure i could have handled that esp a mum going mad after her child was kidnapped.. and dutta was a sher today.. excellent.. morey was 😡

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