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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshiine21

Writting in PROCESS!!!!

I will make sure Today's update is VERY long lol

update soon...m waiting for it..hpe theres lots of tasha scenes..we arent gtin much in the shw hpe u giv us a tasha treat in ur fan fic...😳
btw congrats with ur english result👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey, just read all ur updates and i am loving it! Plz post the nxt part quick! Ur 17 so cool im 16 and i can understand ur stress with the work overload. its only my first yr of college/6th form. Anyways i cant wait 4 ur nxt update plz hurry! Btw who is naman being played by or shall i say who r we imagining him 2 be. I personally thnk it should be naman shaw 4rm rakt samband on imagine, jst bcoz his name is naman lol. Tho i do thnk he will suit roops compared 2 harshad chopra. :D PS. Add me 2 ur PM list plz...
Edited by meriyaar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meriyaar

hey, just read all ur updates and i am loving it! Plz post the nxt part quick! Ur 17 so cool im 16 and i can understand ur stress with the work overload. its only my first yr of college/6th form. Anyways i cant wait 4 ur nxt update plz hurry! Btw who is naman being played by or shall i say who r we imagining him 2 be. I personally thnk it should be naman shaw 4rm rakt samband on imagine, jst bcoz his name is naman lol. Tho i do thnk he will suit roops compared 2 harshad chopra. :D PS. Add me 2 ur PM list plz...

Thanks yaar
i knowww its hard to learn and do other stuff
anyway you can imagine naman as anyone...
Everyone has their own imaginary naman... so Harshad or Naman or Iqbal Khan or Barun or Karan Tacker loool Imagine him as whoever...😆
Your Choice!!!😉
My next update is on the way
I've been writing since 2 oclock loool... Everytime i starts rightin someone calls me or my mum asks me something.. ARGH soo annoying,. Finally im nearly finished....
Update will be up soon
@ Yuvika,,, Thanks yaar im so happy i passed even doe i didnt revise lool.. Anyway as i jus sed to meriyaar update will be up sooooon😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
good to hear update will be up soon. Lol. Congrats with ur english btw ddnt say it b4. cnt believe u've been working on it since 2 thn it must be amasing but them agen theres no doubt bout tht . :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sunshine, Ur FF:- RKN is awesome...............
I must say I almost faint by reading ur ff but still its awesome..............
and really appriciate ur thought process.............
keep rocking sweetheart....................................
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Posted: 14 years ago

The wait is OVER....

Morning Time in PN...

Kala in her room brushing her hair thinking that today things will go according to her, ONLY her. Leela and Roops comes in. Kala gives them a nasty looks as if she's asking them why the hell they are here?

Roops: Tai, I know you are angry with us but aaj to khushi ka din hai

Leela: Haan Tai

Kala: Haan Aaj to khushi ka din to hai. Aur main Naraaz Nahin hoon.

Roops: Sach Tai?

Kala: Haan. Ab Jaoo, tayaar ho jao.

Leela/Roops: Ok Tai

Kala thinks she will not tell Leela and Roops about her plan because they like Nakku now and might try to save her. But i won't let that happen. She continues to get ready. Kishore walks in and gives her a dirty look.

Kishore: They will be lots of guests in the house today, don't do any tamasha (drama)

Kala: Don't worry darling, i won't *strokes his cheeks*

Kishore: Hmph, Don't touch me with your dirty hands.

Kala: Dirty?

Kishore: Yes Dirty, Look at your hands, it's full of blood because of all your sins.

Kala: Oh common

Kishore: I'm going downstairs, come when you're finish doing your drama.

Kishore leaves. Kala thinks to herself that today is Nakusha's last day in the house, No in this world!! *Evil Laugh*

Scene Shifts to Nisha...

Nakku went to Nisha's house early in the morning to get her ready. Dutta is there as well with Naman to help him get dressed and brought Shagun for Nisha. They leave for PN.

Nisha and Naman are both ready for the happiest day of their life. Afterall they waited for this day for so long. Naman goes to Nisha's room and finds her sitting in front of her mirror looking beautiful in her lengha. He walks in the room and calls her.

Naman: Mishty (her nickname... You remember right?)

Nisha: Bhaiya!! *Runs and hugs him*

Naman: Kya Hua? Why are you crying?

Nisha: Im missing mummy papa

Naman: Im here with you

Nisha: Yeah I know. But remember mummy always use to talk about our marriages and how she wanted us to get married together.

Naman: Nisha, this is our engagement.

Nisha: Yes and after that we will get married, we will both settle down. That was mummy's dream.

Naman: Yes and today we will fulfil their dream.

Nisha: Bhaiya, when I get married and go, you won't forget me ryt?

Naman: Never. How can a brother forget his sister?

Nisha: I will see you ryt?

Naman: Ofcourse. Roops would want to come to her brother's house as well. And you have to tie rakhi to me

Nisha gets happy and hugs his tighter and cries her heart out.

Scene shifts to PN...

Baaji is getting ready in his room. Nakku and Dutta come to see him. Nakku gives him a broach and she puts it on him herself. Dutta fixes Baaji's sherwani and punch him jokingly.

They take Baaji to the hall where everyone is. Dutta goes upstairs to see Roops. She's ready and sitting down in front of her dressing table. Dutta comes in and gives her Shagun that Nisha sent for her. Nisha is the only person Naman has so she sent Shagun to fulfil the duty of a mother. Seeing Roops happy, Dutta is also very happy. Dutta tells her she's looking beautiful and takes her downstairs. Just then some people come in dancing on drum tunes and Nisha and Naman walks in. They greet everyone and take blessing from the elders. Nakku stands there with a taali with 2 rings in there. One for baaji to give to Nisha and the other for Roops to give to Naman. The engagement ceremony starts... Baaji and Nisha stands together, Nakku offers the ring to Baaji and Naman offers the ring to Nisha. They exchange rings and everyone claps. They have an eyelock while exchange rings. Now it's Roops turn. Nakku gives Roops the ring and Nisha gives Naman his. They exchange rings and stare at each other happily. Everyone again clap and bless both couples. (lots of blessing going on init). Some dancers come and dance to "Kehti Hai Mangni Ki Aangooti" (Movie - Koi Mere Dil Se Pooche). Nisha and Roops dance as well and they are being admired by their fiancs.

During the song, Nakku tells Dutta that she forgot to get the gifts upstairs. Dutta offers to go get the gifts but Nakku insists to go because only she knows where they are. Dutta agrees and takes her upstairs. Downstairs everyone is still dancing suddenly kala steps on a glass and shows *song finishes* everyone stops and looks at her. Dutta comes running down on hearing kala shouts and sees blood. He rushes towards her and picks her up. He puts her on the sofa and runs to get water and tells Leela to get first aid. Nakku who is upstairs thinks she needs to go down as well because dutta ran down when he heard kala. Nakku starts coming down the stairs with a few gifts for the newly engaged couples. She holds the barrier and walks down gently... (is your heart beating faster and faster?)

Dutta comes sit next to kala and cleans her blood. Leela comes with First aid box. Nakku still coming down step by step, slowly and carefully. Dutta completely forgot that Nakku was upstairs. Everyone's eyes are on Kala and Dutta that No one noticed Nakku coming down with her big belly and gifts in her hands. She didn't want to make any noise as everyone was tensed.

Kala lying on the sofa was thinking that today her plan will surely work. Her eyes search for Nakku. She sees her coming down the stairs. Kala keeps quiet and waits for something to happen. She has a flashback while dutta bandage her feet.

A while Ago...

Everyone was dancing and TaSha went upstairs. She took a little bottle, very little bottle which was under her saree out, she pours it 10 steps from the bottom on the stairs. She then throws the bottle away in the kitchen and takes a broken piece of glass and puts it next to her feet in the hall. She stepped on it purposely so that she gets hurt and screams. She knew dutta would come down running leaving Nakku upstairs. And things went according to her plan. If she can take a bullet then a broken glass in nothing she thinks to herself.

Back to present...

Dutta still bandaging and asking Kala if she is fine but Kala's eyes were only on Nakku counting every second of her death. She knew nothing could save Nakku today, not even dutta. Nakku is still coming down quickly. (that staircase must be very long init... dnt start throwing chappal)

The oil is just 2 stairs away from Nakku; she comes down step by step. 1 more stair left. Nakku places her feet right into the oil and BANG she slips throwing all the gifts in the air. She screams and EVERYONE looks back at her. Nakku rolls down the stairs and screams in pain holding her belly. Her head and nose was bleeding. Dutta shouts "NAKKUUUUUUU" and runs to her. He knelt down and holds her head in his lap. Dutta screams and cries. He tries to wake her up. Everyone rushes towards Nakku except kala. Baaji comes running with Nisha. Nisha knelt down as well and check's Nakku's pulse. She doesn't look happy. Dutta screaming still holding Nakku. Nisha tells them that she needs to be taken to a hospital right now... Broken Dutta gather some courage and picks up Nakku with baaji's help. They both hold her and put her in the car. Dutta gets in and drive off to hospital. Baaji and Nisha gets in another and follows.

Babi is crying in the hall, but AS assures her nothing will happen to Nakku or the babies. AS decides to go hospital as well. She tells Kishore to ask the bodyguards to take out 2 cars. AS, Babi and sethji went in the first car with a driver and the second one Roops, Leela, Kishore and Suds went.

Arriving in the hospital, Dutta rushes inside with Nakku in his arm bleeding. He's crying like a crazy person. Everyone shocked to see Duttabhao. He puts Nakku on the stretcher. He shouts for the doctors. Nisha comes running in with baaji with her lengha (LOOOL)

She quickly advises the nurse to take her in and tells them that she is 7 months pregnant with twins and she fell down the stairs. They take her in and dutta follows but Nisha tells him to wait outside. Baaji and Dutta sits down and Dutta cries, Baaji consoles him. Just then the rests comes except kala ofcourse. AS and Babi sees Bappa's idol and they both pray for Nakku and her babies' safety. Naman comes in and brings a friend of his. A doctor. He explained everything to the doctor on the way and the doctor is going to help Nisha in Nakku's case.

Dr.Sharma, the doctor goes inside with Nisha to see Nakku.

Outside, Everyone is maha worried. Dutta can't seem to control his tears. Baaji and Kishore consoles him but he doesn't seem to understands. He blames himself for leaving Nakku upstairs and he completely forgot she was upstairs.

Nisha comes out. Dutta stands up and runs to her with tears.

Dutta: Meri Nakku kaisi hi? I want to see her, Can i go inside? Move let me go inside.

Nisha: Duttaji, you can't go inside but you will see her because we need to take her to the operation theatre.

Dutta: OPERATION?? Kyun? Kya hua Nakku ko? Nakku theek hai!! Usse Kuch Nahin hua haii!! Meri Nakku theek hai Nisha..

Baaji comes and takes dutta with him. He makes him sit down and tells him yes Nakku will be absolutely fine. Just then Nakku comes out on the stretcher unconscious. The nurses stops in front of dutta so he can look at her. Nisha tells everyone that the operation needs to be done now to save the babies. Dutta gets another shock and so does everyone else. *Black and white mode*. Dutta breaks down on nakku's chests and tells her to wake up. He holds her face in his hands and tells her if she loves him for even one moment she would wake up and hold him. Dutta holds her hands and tells unconscious Nakku to hold his hands back if she loves him. Nakku tightens his hand and breathes harder and harder. Dutta felt her grip and gets happy but he sees her breathing harder and harder. Nisha tells them her condition is getting critical and they are going for operation now. Dutta breaks down on the floor this time as they take Nakku into the operation theatre. Baaji unable to see Dutta like this is also crying. Roops is sitting down numb. She thinks even when kala tai was shot i never felt like this. She remembers her bad moments with Nakku and then the good ones. How Nakku got her and Naman together. Naman on the other hands thinking the same thing.

Naman's Flashbacks...

Nakku told roops she will talk to naman. Nakku went to see Nisha and Naman at their house and she saw naman day dreaming. She told naman that he should settle down as well as Nisha will go from this house soon, you will need someone with you. While hearing this all Naman could think of was Roops. He kept seeing her face infront of him.

Nakku: Do you have any girl in mind?

Naman: No why?

Nakku: Good because i have a girl in mind

Naman: What?? Noo no its okay

Nakku: atleast listen to the name

Naman: Nooo

Nakku: you don't want to know? Well you know the girl

Naman looks at Nakku curiously and asks: Who?

Nakku: Roops?

Naman: Roops? She likes me? I mean ..

Nakku: i know what you mean. I know you two have something for each other. Go tell her before it's too late. Oh btw i told her about you. She didn't say anything but she was shy.

Naman gets happy and Nakku decides to send them on a date. Naman planned it with Nakku's help and asked Roops out without anyone knowing. Roops happily agreed. But Dutta found out. Nakku tried her best to make dutta understand but he didn't want to listen and he certainly didn't want Naman. But Roops tears changed Dutta's mind. Dutta couldn't see roops crying. She loves Naman. So Dutta decided to agree to this for his sister's happiness...

Back to present...

It's been 2 hours since Nakku went inside and there's no news whatsoever. Dutta is sitting on the floor leaning against the wall thinking from the time he met Nakku for the first time to their marriage, the face revelation, the SR and finally the pregnancy. He was devastated. He was broken. Even Baaji couldn't do anything to console him. He was sitting right there next to Dutta crying as well.

4 hours passed...

Noone moved from their position. Duji on the floor sitting and everyone else sitting on the chair. Suddenly Dr.Sharma and Nisha comes out. Nisha comes towards Baaji and Dutta while Dr.Sharma goes into the office. Nisha who is crying as well looks at Duji. Dutta looks up and sees Nisha. He gets up quickly and then everyone sees Nisha. They all rushes towards her and asks her about Nakusha. Just then Dr.Sharma comes with some papers.

He tells everyone Nakku's condition is very critical and he needs to know who to save? The mother or the babies?

*SCENE FREEZES ON DUTTA'S SHOCK FACE AND MAKES A 360 degrees ROUND AROUND HIM*. Every1 is SHOCKED!!!!!. Dr.Sharma tells them to be quick as they might loose all three if they take time. Dutta without thinking shouts "SAVE NAKKU,...I WANT MY NAKKU BACK"... Dr.Sharma asks dutta to sign and dutta does so. Nisha and him rushes inside to do the operation. Dutta hugs Baaji and starts crying Loudly. Everyone stood still, still in shock.... (the readers meaning YOU are in shock as well lol)

THAT'S IT FOR TODAY!!!!

HAAHAHAAHHAH It's a CLIFFHANGER!!!

ANYWAY PLEASE COMMENT!!!!! AND PRESS 'Like'

Don't throw anything on me lol

NO PRECAP - IM EEEVVVVAAALLLLL

Edited by sunshiine21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh my gosh sophie tum aisa kase kar sakti hoo,,,,,noooo its tooo saaad.....pls naaku aur babies ko sahi kardo....plsss......upload tomorrow fast yaa....pls pls....great written
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOOOOOOO... How could u leave it on a clifhanger, lovd it but hating u 4 this current situation and leaving it on a clifhanger!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nooooo...plzz save all three of them...plzzzzz updtee asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update. All three should be safe.

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