CREATIVE POEM--attempt # 2. - Page 3

Originally posted by: triasha

<font size="4">wowwwwwwwwww</font>..................nazzzzzz loved it .......................yaar kitne creative ho!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: HumaG

tooo good i have tears in my eyes from readdint that khushi ke ansoo 🤣 the last line is soo true

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hey every one!! to my astonishment the response to my last creative poem was quite good ..hence i decided to write another one just for u guys as most of u requested.😆...so sorry ,this one has no title!😃

dil ki kaali, paise ki bhooki hai kala,
make-up itna thopti hai, asliyat kaise janega koi bhala?,
chahti hai dutta nakku ka bura,
lekin humein pata hai is ki khushi hai bas ek bulbula! ,
pati chahta hai ho kala ka bhala,
par kala khud na jane kya bhala kya bura! ,
to bolo kaise rokegi ye dutta nakku ki mohabbat ka silsila?,
bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala,
yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala.

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hi samiheenu!! 😃
so glad that u liked it!! thanx a lot!

hey BTW may i know your name?? 😊 i think u are new here so welcome to the forum!

hi nazia welcome buddy

such me tumne kalawati ka band baja diya😆😆

nic👏

well mY nam is salman an muje 4 monts hue he forum par😊

agli bar aisi creative poem likho to plz add me in ur pm list

Thanku

Originally posted by: samiheenu

hi nazia welcome buddy

such me tumne kalawati ka band baja diya😆😆

nic👏

well mY nam is salman an muje 4 monts hue he forum par😊

agli bar aisi creative poem likho to plz add me in ur pm list

Thanku

well as far as i make u all laugh i dont mind being called a phateechar khatara poet 🤣 🤣 ...thanx a lot shweta!! 🤗 ....im so glad that u liked it!! 😳

Originally posted by: Shweta_Dutta

Mind u Nazia..!!
u r no phatechar khatara poet..samjhi..waise if u want more appreciation 4 ur work frm my mouth..yeh lo ab hi kar dete hai tumhari adhoori iccha pori..
AWWEESUM FANTABULOUS HILARIOUS KALA KO KAALA KARring😆 FORUM GIRLS SE DHO daaling😆😉..hhaha🤣..just kidding re..hope u dont mind😃

Originally posted by: betty123

OMG!!!!!! such a nice poem on kala
ab tumhara zaroor hoga bhala.......😆

luved it yar.........so cute😆

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hey every one!! to my astonishment the response to my last creative poem was quite good ..hence i decided to write another one just for u guys as most of u requested.😆...so sorry ,this one has no title!😃

dil ki kaali, paise ki bhooki hai kala,
make-up itna thopti hai, asliyat kaise janega koi bhala?,
chahti hai dutta nakku ka bura,
lekin humein pata hai is ki khushi hai bas ek bulbula! ,
pati chahta hai ho kala ka bhala,
par kala khud na jane kya bhala kya bura! ,
to bolo kaise rokegi ye dutta nakku ki mohabbat ka silsila?,
bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala,
yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala.