CREATIVE POEM--attempt # 2.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey every one!! to my astonishment the response to my last creative poem was quite good ..hence i decided to write another one just for u guys as most of u requested.😆...so sorry ,this one has no title!😃

dil ki kaali, paise ki bhooki hai kala,
make-up itna thopti hai, asliyat kaise janega koi bhala?,
chahti hai dutta nakku ka bura,
lekin humein pata hai is ki khushi hai bas ek bulbula! ,
pati chahta hai ho kala ka bhala,
par kala khud na jane kya bhala kya bura! ,
to bolo kaise rokegi ye dutta nakku ki mohabbat ka silsila?,
bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala,
yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala.


Edited by nazia.icycool - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala, yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala... I especially loved these lines...this Kala is in the mood for creating some trouble soon... but no worries, we girls will be ready... u lead the way nazia😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mashallah Mashallah Nazia, kya poem likhi hai. I just logged into IF and I see a poem by our famous Poet Nazia. 🤗I can't stop laughing especially the last line.
btw Nazia. hope u watched MYNM episodes. I sent the link to shikha to watch it on Star one website. Luckily, the links work for her but they don't work for me since videos are not available outside of India.😡



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Originally posted by: 2010huma

bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala, yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala... I especially loved these lines...this Kala is in the mood for creating some trouble soon... but no worries, we girls will be ready... u lead the way nazia😊



hey huma!! thats so sweet of ! 🤗thanq!
haan baat to sahi ha..we girls will be ready!!..muh tod kawaab denge kala ko!! 😆 😈
Edited by nazia.icycool - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chandanafan

Mashallah Mashallah Nazia, kya poem likhi hai. I just logged into IF and I see a poem by our famous Poet Nazia. 🤗I can't stop laughing especially the last line.
btw <img src="http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/000200D6.gif" alt="" />Nazia. hope u watched MYNM episodes. I sent the link to shikha to watch it on Star one website. Luckily, the links work for her but they don't work for me since videos are not available outside of India.😡



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hi ritu!! 🤗
bas just tried doing something ya!! 😆 some ala bala battar..thats what kala deserves 😆

im watching MYNM on TV ritu..actually shikha watches it on the net 😊 ...hey u sent the links to her!!..thanx a lot ritu.. 😊 ..so do u mean u are unable to watch it there?? 😕 thats sad! 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool


hey every one!! to my astonishment the response to my last creative poem was quite good ..hence i decided to write another one just for u guys as most of u requested.😆...so sorry ,this one has no title!😃

dil ki kaali paise ki bhooki hai kala,
mak-up itna thopti hai asliyat kaise janega koi bhala?,
chahti hai dutta nakku ka bura,
lekin humein pata hai is ki khushi hai bas ek bulbula! ,
pati chahta hai ho kala ka bhala,
par kala khud na jane kya bhala kya bura! ,
to bolo kaise rokegi ye dutta nakku ki mohabbat ka silsila?,
bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala,
yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala.



OMG Nazia...congo..so u finally turned urself into a poet..hmm.....really a very nice 1..hehe..kala khud nahin jaanti kya bhal hai n bura hai..😆 d rhyming words..girl u rock full tym..very well written⭐️..very funny 2..😆
Edited by Shweta_Dutta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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by god nazia...ltl is surely making u a good poet

hoping to see more of ur poems
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta_Dutta


OMG Nazia...congo..so u finally turned urself into a poet..hmm.....really a very nice 1..hehe..kala khud nahin jaanti kya bhal hai n bura hai..😆 d rhyming words..girl u rock full tym..very well written⭐️..very funny 2..😆





well as far as i make u all laugh i dont mind being called a phateechar khatara poet 🤣 🤣 ...thanx a lot shweta!! 🤗 ....im so glad that u liked it!! 😳
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Originally posted by: mariescott14

by god nazia...ltl is surely making u a good poet


hoping to see more of ur poems




hi marie!! 🤗
haan kuch aise hi lagraha hai...LTL is magical!! 😆 ..ok so u want more?? 😛 ..ill surely make a few more dear...im so glad that u liked it!!! 😃 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool


hey every one!! to my astonishment the response to my last creative poem was quite good ..hence i decided to write another one just for u guys as most of u requested.😆...so sorry ,this one has no title!😃

dil ki kaali paise ki bhooki hai kala,
mak-up itna thopti hai asliyat kaise janega koi bhala?,
chahti hai dutta nakku ka bura,
lekin humein pata hai is ki khushi hai bas ek bulbula! ,
pati chahta hai ho kala ka bhala,
par kala khud na jane kya bhala kya bura! ,
to bolo kaise rokegi ye dutta nakku ki mohabbat ka silsila?,
bas jee karta hai bappa iski zindagi mein laye walwala-o-zalzala,
yeh nahin to hum forum members ghot dalenge iska gala.


Naziaaaaaaaaaaa.....😆😆😆😆awesum yaarrr👏👏👏👏😆😆
" Jo bala na samje bura na samje, woh nazia poem ko kya samjegha..!!"😈🤣
⭐️!!!too goooood yaaar...!!!⭐️
Edited by shonapinky - 14 years ago

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