New FF..Lagi tujhse lagan..NOTE....Pg106.......... - Page 69

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankx neh19 I am soooooooooooooo glad u liked this one too😛................Next longggg part asap......................😊........Hope u like it too..............Yaar working on the dialogues give me little more time plzzzzzzz.........😍...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankx triasha I am soooooooooooooo glad u liked this one too😛................Next longggg part asap......................😊........Hope u like it too..............Yaar working on the dialogues give me little more time plzzzzzzz.........😍...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
I will wait yar i really like ur FF . 😉. teress right😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thankx irika I am soooooooooooooo glad u liked this one too😛................Next longggg part asap......................😊........Hope u like it too..............Yaar working on the dialogues give me little more time plzzzzzzz.........😍...............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Ok guys I am so sorry for the late update lekin kya kartii''..I wanted some nice dialogues and shutter ek dum down tha dimaag kaa'''..at last kuch aaya and decided to pen down'.i just hope u all like it!............😳😃

Here's the next longggg part!............Enjoy!..........😊😛

Dutta comes out of his room and into the hall'''where he meets AS again!............(Dutta bhii naa baar baar AS ke saamney aa jaata hai'''.bechaara''..Abb nakku nahiin miltii toh AS se hii baat karnii padegii naa'''..)''''😆

There Nakku had come out of her room too and seeing AS with Dutta she hides behind a pillar and wait!...............(smart girl''''pataa hai kii Dutta wants to meet her alone!..........)'''.

As says to Dutta-----Humney guru jii se baat kar lii hai''''vo kal subah aayeingey Ganpati sthapnaa ke liye'''..😊

Dutta says----AS iss baar''''.iss baar ganpati kii sthapnaa main karnaa chahtaa hoon'''..

AS is delighted and surprised as she embraces dutta's face lovingly and says----Aj hum bahot khush hain dutta'''..sach beta''..nakku ke bahot ehsaan hain hum par''''..ussney hummein humaara DUTTA LAUTAA DIYAA HAI!............😛👏

Dutta smiles and there nakku feels tears welling up in her eyes as she realizes how changed dutta had become!..............

AS then tells Dutta in that case he will have to do a nirjal vrat the next day and dutta agrees saying he would do it all WITH COMPLETE SHRADDHA ''''😃

AS says-----Aur haan'''.humney purohit jii se bhii baat kii hai''''shraad khatam honey ke baad hii'''..ek achchi sii taarekh dekhkar hum tumhaari aur naksuha kii shaadi kii rasmein shuru kar deinge'''..

Dutta lowers his eyes and smiles trying hard not to blush but in vain!................😛

AS is all smiles too as she walks away to her room''''.

Dutta turns to leave for the terrace''''

There nakku makes her way to the kitchen''''..😳

Upstairs u see'''..Dutta walks around the terrace alone'''.the cool breeze blows across his face''''.as a dreamy dutta recalls all the beautiful momnts he had spent with nakku from the first time she met him''''and hid gherself behind him''''.to the other day when she had fallen and dutta had caught hold of her!...............The lute tune plays in the BG'''..😳😍

U see is standing by the jhoola with his back to the entrance when nakku walks in saying----saab'''.

Dutta is all smiles as he realizes nakku had indeed come there and turns around''''ending up to gaze at her!..........

He notices she had a plate in her hand''''..

He walks upto her and says----Yeh kya hai nakku?.............😊

Nakku says----Vo'''.vo kal aapka vrat hai naa''''..isliye mainney sochaa'''aap din bhar ghar par nahiin the naa''''kuch khayaa bhii nahiin hogaa'''.isliye yahiin aapkey liye khana ley aayi'''.😛

Dutta keeps on gazing at nakku in complete awe '''.as he realized how much she cared or him and alos wondering how she knew it was his vrat the next day''''..😳

Nakku extends her hands to give the plate'''..and as dutta takes it from her'''''.his hands touch her and nakku lowers her eyes feeling the warmth of his touch''''

Dutta asks her----Tunney khaaya?.............

Nakku moves her head sideways in a no ''''

Dutta holds nakkus han and makes her sit on the jhoola'''..he sits next to her and puts the plate in between the two and waits'''..

Nakku looks at dutta questioningly'''..and he asks her----Aisey kya dekh rahii hai nakku?.............(Guys I HAD TO INCLUDE THIS DIALOGUES FROM SHOW AS IT IS!..............OMG'''..Dutta jaantaa hai kii this dialogues is applicable to all of us'''''matlab''''Hum sab sirf ussey dekhtey reh jaatey hain isliye naa!..............He asks not only nakku lekin us too''''AISEY KYA DEKH RAHEYHO LTLIANS?!............what say?😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.............ok bad joke'''..)'''..

Nakku remains quiet and dutta says-----Har baar mere khanaaey ke baad tu khaati hai naa nakku''''..(Nakku recalls how in the jungle she had frouits only after dutta did and how when he had given her tea in the jeep she waited for him'''.)'''.Lekin aaj''''tu pehley khaayigii''''..😳

Nakku is about to say a no lekin the look on dutta's face tells her he won't take no as an answer!................

Nakku eats first and dutta keeps on looking at her'''..she looks up to finde herself gazing at into dutta's eyes'''..as he says softly----Yaad hai nakku''''..uss din main eter se bola tha''''jo ladkaa tujhey nahiin samjhegaa'''''vo gadhaa hogaa''''.Gadhaa toh main hii tha'''..Jo tujhey nahiin samjh paaya'''..😳😛

Nakku is about to say something when dutta says ----Nakku''''..Tu mujhe JAISEY INSAAN SE ITNAA PYAAR KAISEY KAR SAKTII HAI?!.................KYUN NAKKU?.............KYUN CHAHTI HAI TU MERE KO?...........

The two look at each other for what seemed like eternity as Nakku looks into dutta's eyes and says a heart beat later-----KYA''''KAB'''..KYUN?...........Yeh sab baatein pyaar nahiin jaanta saab''''Nakku kaa dil sirf ek baat jaantaa hai''''.Kii aap'''aap bahot achchey insaan ho''''Aur aapka dil ek dum saaf'''Jo aapkey mann mein hotaa hai aap wahii kehtey ho'''.(Dutta looks at nakku''''completely struck by the sincerity in her words as sh goes on saying''..)''''..Gareebon kii madad''''.Besaaharon ko sahaara'''..Bdon ka adar''''..choton ko pyar'.doston ko apnapann'''..AAP APNAA HAR RISHTAA KITNI KHOOBSURTII KE SAATH NIBHAATEY HO'''..Aap aisaa insaan aaj kii duniya mein kahaan hotaa hai saab''''..😳😛👏⭐️

Dutta says ----agggar aisaa hai nakku toh phir main''''MAIN AISAA KYUN HOON?.............

Nakku says matter of Saab'''.humari zindagii ka har faislaa humaari kismet kartii hai''''AUR HUMAARI KISMET''''BAPPA LIKHTEY HAIN'''''.AUR MAIN JAANTI HAI''''BAPPA NE AAPKE LIYE JO BHI ZINDAGII CHUNNI HAI''USSKEY PEECHEY KOI NAA KOI WAJAH AUR KOI NA KOI ACHCHAYI ZAROOR CHUPII HAI''''.MERE KO APNEY BAPPA PAR PURAA BHAROSAA HAI''''''⭐️👏😳😛

Dutta looks at nakku lovingly ''''..

Slowly he takes her hands in his''''and looks at her''''all of a sudden he felt calm''''along all the hatred and bloodshed dutta had seen all these years''''.finding nakku by his side''''..he felt like his life had found its aim'''..Jaisey dutta kii kashtii ko NAKU NAAM KAA KINARA MIL GAYAA HAI!.................😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

He presses onto naku's hands sotly and says----AUR MUJHEY BAPPA KII NAKKU PAR POORA BhAROSAA HAI!..................😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

Nakku lowers her eyes and smiles''''while dutta's lips too curl up into a smile as he sees nakku blush and smile'''''..

Precap---Dutta is driving fast and as he turns the car round the corner'''.a truck comes and to aoid the collision he turns and bangs the car into a tree!.........hi head hits the steering hard!............and few goons get out o the car and make his way to where dutta's car had met with the accident!..........😕

Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
tu update karke pm karne se pehle hiy mein paar letiy hu 😛 bohut acche dialogues hein
Lovely yaar jaldi jaldi update kar
waise yeh goons Damodar patil ke hein kya????
hmmmmmm
*Mithai is in a thinking mode*🤔
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg there is a goons. . i don't want datta to get hurt plz.plz update soon yar. i love were nakku bring food to datta and datta ask her to join😍

very well written 👏i love it every bit. keep writing and don't forget to pm ok.
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Posted: 15 years ago
HAILAAAAAA precap is scaryyyy Anyway back to the update.. I LOVE IT!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

sheeba......loved this part......its amazing........TaSha's moonlight dinner........n pre sounds interesting......update soon.......par maine bhi apne FF ke liye terrace scene socha tha.......now i hav to think something else.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for the PM really liked today's update

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