Tere Bina ~ TaSha ff~ First Step of Dutta P8 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: skavitha08

hi apra sorry for editing comments so lately had some work sooo..hmmm but i just edited my comments 😊



hey savitha loved mishal's photo he looks cool
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 2

Kala and Kishore left dutta alone and went down to Aayi sahib "aaye….. bhao ne haan ker di" kala said happily, supriya smiled devilishly "1st step successful" she thought

"bus ab ganpat ji jaldi se jaldi hum shagun kerna chahte hai" aayi sahib said and ganpat and babi nodded happily

"jaisa aap kahe" ganpat said

"hum kal hi pandit ji ko bulayege aur shadi ki tareek pakki karege" kala said

"accha toh hum sab chalte hai aradhana ji ghar ja ker nakku ko bhi yeh baat batani hai" babi said happily

Diveker Niwas

"no never main kisi bhi dutta naam ke ladke se shadi nahi karoongi" nakku screamed on top of her voice

"ladke main ek kami toh bata" ganpat argued

"voh mujhse saath saal (7 years) bada hai" nakku answered back

"main bhi teri maa se nau saal (9 years) bada hoon" ganpat answered back

"maine usse dekha bhi nahi" nakku said

maine bhi teri ma ko shadi se phele nahi dekha tha ganpat answered

voh 30 saal phele tha, main aaj ke zamane ki ladki hoon nakku screamed

aayi agar nakku nahi chahti toh hum usse force kyun ker rahe hai" baji spoke in support of nakku

"baji aisa rishta baar baar nahi aata" babi said "aur voh log itne bade hain aur ladka bhi kitna accha hai"

"pen aayi… nakku abhi bacchi hai" baji said

"bacchi!!!!!!! baji if you remember leela aur meri shadi ho gayi thi iss umar mein" supriya said

"dekho supriya main nahi chahta ki tum iske beech mein pado" baji said stubbornly

"kyun supriya kyun na bole aakhir voh bhi naaku ki utni hi chinta kerti jitna ki tum aur leela balki voh shayad tum dono se zayada uski chinta kerti hai isiliyeh toh itna accha rishtaa dhoond nikala hai ussne" ganpat said

Baji and nakku looked at supriya and ganpat hopelessly and left the place "mujhe leela tai se baat kerni hai main uske ghar jaa rahi hoon" nakku said stubbornly and left with baji.

"I don't care about your approval because I have already said yes to them" ganpat screamed from behind

----Leela's house----

"tai mujhe shadi nahi kerni per baba aur aayi zabardasti meri shadi kera rahe hai" nakku said hopelessly

"nakku dekh hum kuch sochte hai….. tu chinta mat ker…" leela said

"naks tu chinta mat ker main hoon na waise bhi supriya ki ismein h=bhi koi chaal hai tai" baji said

"baji hum jitna bhi baba aur aayi ko supriya ke bare mein bole unke liye voh humesha acchi hi rahegi" leela said

"tai per uske chakkar mein main kyun apni zindagi kharab karoon" nakku justified

"nakku tu jaanti hai na usne meri aur sudarshan ki shadi ko ek hathiyar ki tarah istemal kiya hai aur baba aur mere beech phoot daal di" leela said "aur main nahi chahti kit ere saath aisa ho isiliyeh nakku tu iss shaadi ke liye haan ker de"

"tai per" nakku said

"nakku tai theek bol rahi hai dekh supriya jaanti hai kit u itni ziddi hai ki shaadi ke liye haan nahi karegi aur voh iss baat ka fayeda zaroor uthayegi" baji said

--- Patil Niwaas---

"aayi pandit ji bol rahe the ki hum kal hi shagun ker sakte hai aur bhao aur nakusha ki kundali bhi mil gaye hai poore 32 gun mile hain" kala said

"hey bappa aur shadi ki kaun si tareek nikali hai" aayi sahib asked

"bus 15 din ke baad" kala said "aayi main toh bahut darr gayi hoon ek toh shadi aur voh bhi itne kam waqt main"

"kala sab ho jayega bus main abhi ganpat ji ko bolti hoon ki hum kal ka shagun karege aur 15 din main shadi" aayi sahib picked up the phone and informed ganpat.

"aayi jaisi hi bhao aata hai hum shagun ka samaan lene jayege" kala said excitedly.

Babi called up leela and told her about the shagun and shadi and also asked her to take nakku shopping along with her, baji rushed back home to do the preparations for the shagun.

The First Meeting

"tai mujhe in sab ki samajh kahan hai… aur aayi aap bhi isi ko support karti ho" dutta roared in anger

"arre dutta tera shagun hai ab tujhe hi apni hone wali patni ke liye sab select kerna hoga" aayi sahib explained

"yeh kaam kala tai bhi toh ker sakti hai" dutta justified

"baho zayada nakhre mat ker ab chal phele ek saadi dekhte hai teri patni ke liye" kala said

Dutta, Kala, Aayi sahib and anay entered a shop to select sarees for nakku, while nakku also entered the same shop to select her saree "tai shagun toh ek bahana hai hum shopping toh kabhi bhi ja sakte hai" nakku giggled "ab kal main uss ladke se miloongi aur mana ker doongi shadi se"

"zayada bade plans mat bana… suds keh raha tha jo ladka aayi baba ne dhoonda hai voh bahut accha hai" leela said

"jiju ko kaise pata" nakku questioned

"baji ne usse saari details di thi and he says ladka is rich and the family is good too… suds ka ek client hai tera dulha" leela said

"oh…. Toh now you all say that I should get married to that man…" nakku asked

"meri maano toh haan isme bura kya hai" leela said

"tai please haan… aap bhi ab aayi baba ki side ho gaye ho" nakku said in frustration

Just then dutta crossed their way while talking on his phone in-fact screaming at someone and nakku banged into him dutta's phone fell and broke into pieces while nakku lost her balance and fell down

"aye mr. dekh ker nahi chal sakte kya" nakku said in anger

"look who is talking…. Madam aap dekh ker chaliyeh" dutta screamed back
"oh sorry mujhe pata nahi tha aap andhe hai" nakku screamed back

"andha kisko bola…. Shayad aap andhi hain" dutta said in anger

"oh hello main theek se chal rahi thi shayad aap ko yahan ek play ground dikhayi de raha hai…. Waise bhi main kisi bhi aire gire ke muh nahi lagti" nakku said sarcastically

"zaban sambhaal ke madam, aap janti hain main kaun hoon" dutta screamed

"do I care" nakku gave a hollow laugh "BTW you aren't the president of India" nakku said

"nakku bahut hua chal yahan se" leela pulled nakku out of the shop, and dutta stood there in anger, for the first time in his life he couldn't answer back to a girl, and he had seen this girl somewhere but couldn't recall where, dutta stomped his foot in anger "main iss batameez nakchadi ladki se apne iss apmaan ka zaroor badla loonga".

Ok as they say the first impression is always the best one lets see what happens next

Post comments even if you dont like the part

😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Hehehehe!!I loved reading Naku's reaction part!!LOL!!! It was relly gud apra!Update ASAP!😊
Edited by kritika4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
omg...they met...wel both are gunna get the surprise of their life *excited* please continue its good!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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my god kitna jhagda karte hai ye dono.😆
it's very intersting. plz tasha ek aur mulaquet kara do na.😊
plz kuch baaroops ke scene daal do na.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
APRAAA!!!!!
I just loved it.....
Nakku and ganpats discussion was really funny :):)LOL
JUst loved it....update asap
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was so nice...continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritika4eva

<font color="#330033">Hehehehe!!I loved reading Naku's reaction part!!LOL!!! It was relly gud apra!Update ASAP!😊</font>



thanks a ton I will surely continue soon 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: raziya56

omg...they met...wel both are gunna get the surprise of their life *excited* please continue its good!



Lets see who gets the actual surprise dutta or nakusha 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love the part apra...pls do continue. want to see what dutta does when he realizes that the girl he met at the shop is his betrothed.

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