ONE SHOT..SHATTERED DUTTA..UP Dt!!!!!!!!!!!!!PG 2!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi everyone.........well..........I know u all must be missing Dutta just like me..........OMG...........LAST NIGHT WHEN I LAID DOWN TO SLEEP I CRIED😭..........I really miss him soooooooooooo much and abhi there's this longggggggggggg weekend ahead.........ANYWAYS.........Here's a one shot I decided to post in.......... 😳

It starts from the last scene where baaji tells someone on the phone scolding him that why did he let Dutta go out alone like that?...........😊

U see an angry baaji leave the room while a concerned nakku stood worrying for Dutta's safety..............

Tears well up in her eyes as she realises how messed up she had made Dutta's life...........still she was detrmined to set things right and promises she would stand by Dutta always..........and prays for his safety and well being crying----Bappa.........saahib ko theek rakhnaa..........woh..........woh sahii salaamatt ghar laut aayein...........😭

There u see Baaji has searched every nook and corner of the city but in vain...........

The sun sets ..........and baaji wwndered where dutta had gone?...........

There u see Dutta sitting by that pond and drinking from the bottle ........staring at the setting sun.............HE HAD BEEN THERE ALL DAY!...........WONDERING WHY LIFE HAD ALWAYS BEEN HARSH TO HIM?!.........

WONDERING WHY EVERYONE BROKE HIS TRUST ALWAYS?..........

WONDERING HOW COULD HE BE WRONG IN CHOSSING A FRIEND?..........

WONDERING WHAT FATE WANTED FROM HIM?..........

Dutta was a broken man as he sat by the pond.............The sun went away and darkness covered the whole sky..........BUT THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT WAS NOTHING COMPARED TO THE DARKNESS WHICH HAD ENGULFED DUTTA'S SHAATERED HEART............HIS SHATTERED DREAMS...........HIS SHATTERED HOPES............... 😭

Dutta drinks more wishing somehow his pain would leave him.............BUT IT WASN'T HELPING............THE PAIN WAS IMMENSE AND UNBERABLE!............😭

Just then he feels someone put a hand on his shoulder and Dutta turns around to find another Dutta smile at him dressed in white kurtaa payjaama...........😊

Dutta was taken aback to see his alterego which comes to sit by his side..............😕



Kaisa lagaa?..........😊


Jaldii bataao............😊


Should I continue it?.............😊



Edited by PremLeoManav - 15 years ago

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sana786a thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow do u even need 2 ask it really good continue quickly😃
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real good hun..hope u continue real soon
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that is nice i loved it pls continue sheeba
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow dii Loved it! Jaldii update karnaa!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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A good statement/write up, i suppose check with reality !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i still think that he is confused about Naku wether he loves her or not ? If he didnt love why marry her in the first place.... does anyone agrees with me ? Dutta please come for MONDAY !😭😕😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Methinks he loves her but doesnt realize that at all. He's thinks he is upset with her becuz she broke the trust he had on her as a friend. but he acts as if he fell for her and then realized she never loved him. but he cant let go of her either.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You should continue PremLeoManav! I like it so far and hopefully other Dutta tells him if he doesn't like Naku, why did he married her and make him realize that he loves her or why is he doing this to torture or punish himself. <:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Methinks he loves her but doesnt realize that at all. He's thinks he is upset with her becuz she broke the trust he had on her as a friend. but he acts as if he fell for her and then realized she never loved him. but he cant let go of her either.



That's what I was thinking Shreya! You just read my mind. <:
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaly07



That's what I was thinking Shreya! You just read my mind. <:




Yeah...actions speak louder than words...and dutta's actions and words say different things.

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