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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely parts yaar
do continue
bye sumi

hey sumi...glad you enjoyed it...will try to continue soon😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6

Before nakusha could fall down baji ran and caught her'on seeing her condition..it was as if a red haze had come front of his eyes..dutta removed his gun and shot morey..and killed him'looking at naku it was as if everything had become silent around him'he could see baji mouth moving but could not here what was being said'all he could see the one he loved bleed to death'he went towards them and took naku in his arms holding her tight as if not to allow her to go anywhere leaving him.

Baji saw his friend and realised he was not in a good state..he hurried and went to get the jeep'naku was feeling completely numb..she could see dutta crying'and without any thought moved her hand upwards to wipe away his tears'dutta whose eyes was closed felt soft hands wiping away his tears..and saw his naku looking at him..immediately he caught her hand and said you are not leaving me'do you hear me..you are not going anywhere..naku was beginning to feel faint'she released her hand from his grip and traced his face as if trying to memorize him and slowly darkness clouded her vision and she felt nothing..

Dutta closed his eyes as naku traced his face'the minute her hands fell from his face'his eyes opened and he saw nakusha fainted..immediately he started to shake her begging her to get up'.he felt her pulse and knew she was still alive'he picked her in his arms..and carried her'immediately his vehicle was there standing write in front of them..baji got down and opened the back door and told dutta to get in fast'after settling in 'baji zoomed to the hospital.

On reaching the hospital,dutta carried naku and got out of the car'he entered the hospital and began screaming for the doctor to attend to her'the doctor came forward along with the ward boy and laid her on the stretcher and wheeled her towards the ICU'dutta followed them but was stopped outside as he was not allowed to enter'he tried to fight his way in but immediately baji caught him and dragged him backwards'.and the operation light was on.

Immediately dutta moved away from baji and began pacing up and down'baji felt so helpless'he did not know what to do'both his friends were suffering..one naku in the operation theatre and other dutta out here'baji did not know what dutta would do if anything happens to her'his phone started ringing and he looked on the screen and saw it was aayisaab.

Aayisaab could not understand what was taking baji and dutta so long to get naku..She could not help but feel happy that her son finally found the one whom he will spend his life with'Her daughters were sleeping but how could she get sleep'the minute naku would come in she would shower her with so much love that naku will never have bad memories of this day'as she was moving down the hall she came front the house mandir and saw babi standing front of the ganpati statue.

She went towards her and called her'babi on seeing AS immediately wiped her tears..AS told her don't worry my son is bringing your daughter home'he wont allow anything to happen to her as he loves her a lot'hearing this babi could not help but be happy'it was as if all her prayers were answered and naku has finally got her love'on seeing babi relived smile AS told I m just going to phone baji now and see where nakusha is

She phoned baji'her smile wiped out as she heard what baji had to say'the scene shifts to the hospital.

Dutta was still pacing the floors'waiting for some news'finally the operation light switched off and the doctor came out'on seeing him dutta immediately rushed to him and asked doctor how is she'is she alright when can I meet her'the doctor looked up and said bhao'she has lost a lot of blood'she is at a very critical state now'she has to pass this 24 hours..once this 24 hours pass she will be ok'otherwise I cant say'on hearing this dutta got angry and grabbed his collar and began shaking him'are you a doctor a what'make her alright or I will bury you alive here this instant he growled at the doctor'seeing him baji immediately went and held dutta away from the doctr'though shaken the doctor looked at dutta and said all we can do now is pray and went from there.

Dutta stood there..not knowing what to do..first time in his life he felt that he was completely helpless..he felt someone hold his shoulder..he turned around and saw his mother standing there'he knew she heard everything..on seeing her it was as if he could no longer be strong..and finally he broke down in the middle of the hospital holding on to his mother.

I know 'kind of sad..i tried to bring out the emotions..but don't know if I did well.

whatsay

Edited by mariescott14 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
vah vah taliyaa...👏👏👏...
rulaa diya yaar...😭😭...kya dukh bari upd8 thi...😭...
Dutta attacking doc n then breakin down...*weep weep*...so so sad...
xlent writing Marie...cnt w8 4 the next part...really hope Naku gets well soon...😳...
hope ur study is goin well...
missin ya in forum...
speak soon...
mwahzzzz....🤗...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey marie😃..amazing update ya!!!! lived the idea of having babi n ayi sahib talking together😃😃that was a very rare thought..sumthing different...i also LOVED the possessive attitude of dutta when he comes to knw that nakku is in a critical state...the way he gets angry at the doc was fab!!👏👏well done!!...waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: faithy

awesome marie update soon

hey faithy...glad you enjoyed it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

vah vah taliyaa...👏👏👏...

rulaa diya yaar...😭😭...kya dukh bari upd8 thi...😭...
Dutta attacking doc n then breakin down...*weep weep*...so so sad...
xlent writing Marie...cnt w8 4 the next part...really hope Naku gets well soon...😳...
hope ur study is goin well...
missin ya in forum...
speak soon...
mwahzzzz....🤗...

jani🤗....missing u 2...few more days..will come in the ccc soon
aw dont cry jani here 🤗..still even through your tears glad you enjoyed it😳
hope to speak 2 u soon
mwahzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 92icycool

hey marie😃..amazing update ya!!!! lived the idea of having babi n ayi sahib talking together😃😃that was a very rare thought..sumthing different...i also LOVED the possessive attitude of dutta when he comes to knw that nakku is in a critical state...the way he gets angry at the doc was fab!!👏👏well done!!...waiting for the next update...

hey nazia...glad you enjoyed this part...i felt it necesarry to show the interaction between 2 moms...afterall their children are in love😳..wish 2 see dutta possessive attitude in the serial..but will b a long time...so will have 2 put my wishes through ff😆😆...will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
I just read your FF for hte first time and its really well written:) Great job...really enjoyed it...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonya263

I just read your FF for hte first time and its really well written:) Great job...really enjoyed it...

hey sonya..m glad you are enjoying it
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it totally
do continue dear
bye sumi

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