TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 54

Hey Shabz..........

Originally posted by: Anshika_1692

wow.....
just read ur whole FF.....
Mindblowing....
TaSha.... Baji and Rano nd Mayur....
and what a way to shut naku up.....hehehe
wow wow....
please continue soon....

Originally posted by: nabilamubeen

hey shabz great update love mayur tasha scenes love the way he shut up nakku so romantic thanks for pm and update soon

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

ohhh loved it....dear

Originally posted by: moully

ha...........................haaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤣 haaaaaaaaa........ haaaaaaaaaaa

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

awesum awesum upd8 Shabz...👏😉...*hugz*...

Thanx Jani ..
Ur a sweety ....🤗

totally njoyed reading it...funny thing though...i was reading it 4m my cell while out in the car wiv my dad...😳😆🤣...on Dutt's kiss bit i was lyk 😲 n giggling...my dad was lyk..."ki hoya jaan"...

i was lyk oh "nothing dad" stilling giggling...😳😆...

OmG .....wat if he would hav asked to check ....🤣

Dutta is so cheeky n cute...😍😳...

luved it Shabz cnt w8 4 the nex part...😛...

Will update soon ...😉

missed Baji in the upd8...😳...

Baaji in the next update ...

mwah...

Originally posted by: Irika95

OMG OMG OMG what an update..
dutta kissed nakku plzz update soon...

Originally posted by: sinak

Loved the update

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Great Update!

I finally got round to reading it, Hahaha he kissed her, aww I can't wait to see what happens next!

Cont soon!

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Hey Shabz..........

Beautiful!!

Thanxx ....but not as beautiful as urs ...😳
meri to sirf ek adna si koshish hai ...

Mayank giving Nakli phool to Nupur!! so, like them!! and that By God!! 😆....Awesome!!

BTW, I Loved how u linked Dutta's friends with Naku's, in Duttas memories...what a natural thing to do!! 👏👏👏.......

I dunno ..but I felt that Dutta should remember Baaji & Pari while watching MayUr & Naku bonding .. glad to knw that u felt the same ..

and how these gals got their way!! 😆......that was class.....tum nahi chahte tumhaari Naku sabse khoobsurat lage? 😆😆😆

Mayank might be ready to hit his head on the table!! 😆😆😆

Lagta hai ur enjoying Mayank ki haalat ..😆

abhi toh Naku ka bolnaa achcha lag raha hai?? shabz really?? 😆

u know this is what I was thinking of our actual Dutta....abhi toh bechaara chahtaa hai Naku shld interfere, stop his daaroo etc, but baad mein jab woh bar band kardegi, tab beechaara apne bachelor days yaad karegaa!! 😆

Usko apne DuJi ke befikar dayz yaad aayenge ....🤣

Mayank blurted out?? 😲😲

tut tut....He broke the code.....he is changinf!! 😕😆

Galti se muh se nikal gaya .... he was so getting so irritated at the girls & Dutta .. 😆

Finally Kiss karaa diyaa!! Haye...and Mayank ne bhi behti ganga mein haath dho liyaa!! 😆😆😆

Yh ...he did ...
First I thought not to make him do it .... then I thought why not ..there is actually a little bit of naughtiness in Mayank too ... that's what I felt ..😆

Awesome Shabz!!....but I am also missing Baaji and Rano....just Like Dutta!! 😭

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

shabz continue yaar...plz... i wil giv u chocolates..lol...