TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 52

AWESOME DEAR!...👏.update next part soon plz...

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wah ji..wah...ramadan ke mauke pe.. update....shukriya...Shabnam ji....😛

Ab mujhe sharminda mat karo ..k maine update kiya ..😳

n hai...my Mayur.........soo cute..me luvd their fight..n how Mayank got down on his knees n finally gave the rose...to Nups... totaly adorable..!! ❤️

magar pehle to naqli diya tha ...😆

me like the Glare match of Nups-Naku from Dutta boy to Mayank..😆😆 so cute....n phunny 😆 n OMGEEEEEEE yeh Dutta boy ne.. 😲 did he.. did he..just.. KISS ...Naku..?? 😲😲 *Faints* hai mai mar jawa.....Sher in phul phorm...me likey 😈

Yh ..he is in full form ......😆

n lolz..bechara Mayank.......bhegi billi ...🤣!! Great update shabz...!! Me luvd it..!!

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

lmao...another hilarious update... as i was reading i gt a hint tht dutta wud kiss her 2 shut her up n he did...awww tht was awesome yaar...naku talks a lot in the shw too..wud like 2 c him do tht in the shw...lol...

Oh so u got the hint .. great ..

Dutta agar show mein aisa kar de to kya baat ho ....😆

mayank is so cute...putting cotton in his ears...lmao...

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: kiran255

OMG OMG OMG

Dutta at its best

love it love it love it

i love the way he shuts up naku

very entertaining

missed my Baji n Rano

update more and fast

u are rocking this FF miss Shabzzzzzzz :PPPPPPPP

Originally posted by: Vedika126

awsome part dear. MN rock

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey shabz thanx for the update and Pm yaar 🤗 loved the way all are gelling well together ..Omg omg dutta kissed naku "faints and drools " pls somebody pinch me to bring me bk from heaven ..naku was bugging dutta ..so he shut her up very well ..dutta is gettin very naughty 😆 me lovin it yaar ..
Mayank and nupur was cute and sweet too he also took a chance and kissed nupur but small one 😆
Loved every bit of it ..missed baaji and rano ...pls jaldi update karna.take care and see u around ⭐️ 👏 🤗

Originally posted by: chandanafan

Wow shabz. I really missed out on your FF. I did not know u were writing a FF. 😒 and it has Mayank and Nupur in it. 😎 Since I don't watch MJHT any longer, this FF is such a treat for me to read. Mayank and Nupur are my fav characters but can't watch the show any longer. I only have read the latest part of this ff. I got a lot to read. 😆 Awesome update. Continue updating it and if u provide pm service, plz do pm me. 😳

Edit: OMG I finished reading the whole story. u really know Nupur and Mayanak's characters really well. hatsoff to u for writing such an amazing FF. 👏 👏 👏 ab jaldi se update karna and do pm me. I'm eager to know what happens next.