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just read the prologue ......it was touching....... don't know how to put it in words how much i liked it i wish u could see those tears i had in my eyes when they came together, then closer,
n parted..........sigh heavily
ek pal ke liye hi sahi sadiyaan hamko mili makhmali pyaar ki ..........
it was just perfect *me all dreamy now*
*comes back from dreamy land*
ok moving to chapter 1 now
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done with ch one........can't take my eyes off it though u din tell anything more than the way their lives turned out to be but still u made me feel what they must have felt wow jaz simply mesmerising n the song choices u made makes me wonder how good a writer u are .......to relate ur story so well with it
on my way to chapter two.....
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*me trying to control my anger*
uagrrrrrrr 😡 kill that ravi jaz make dutta beat him to death for doing this to his Nasha...............
i loved it wen he saw her n i hated it when i noticed the update was over
oh pls pls go ahead write the next part n update soon loved it simply loved it u r amazing.........
i regret my decision to read this afterwards i should have read this at the first place......well done jaz 👏
Edited by skavitha08 - 15 years ago
