New FF: Yeh Ishq Hai Kaisa Ajeeb...part 18-1-pg42 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
mujhe ab tak padhe sare FF me ye sabse best laga. i give you 10 out of 10. becaz isme originality hai. Dutta Nakku or Baji ke dialoges waise hi hai jaise wo bolte hai. or saare FF me dialoges hindi me hote hai. isase wo originality nahi lagti. kyunki wo english me dialoges to nahi bolte na. usme dialoges ke andaz badal jaate hai jaise. main nahi jaayegi. ya kai karta tum log. please continue it jaise hai waise hi. story bahut acchi hai. or comments to or bhi acche. Dutta ka Nakku ko ignore karna what a style of writing thaks for this great FF. thanks........... so much
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vs-kmh

mujhe ab tak padhe sare FF me ye sabse best laga. i give you 10 out of 10. becaz isme originality hai. Dutta Nakku or Baji ke dialoges waise hi hai jaise wo bolte hai. or saare FF me dialoges hindi me hote hai. isase wo originality nahi lagti. kyunki wo english me dialoges to nahi bolte na. usme dialoges ke andaz badal jaate hai jaise. main nahi jaayegi. ya kai karta tum log. please continue it jaise hai waise hi. story bahut acchi hai. or comments to or bhi acche. Dutta ka Nakku ko ignore karna what a style of writing thaks for this great FF. thanks........... so much

thanks yaar...........tumne kitna kuchh notice kiya.......i m glad.........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi guys......i am sorry for being late........but i was quite busy.........hope u guys are not so much mad at me........neways....i know you all are eager to know about the new entry........but this part is about TaSha convo..........i'll definately bring the new entry in next update......i promise.....i'll update tomorrow.......plz....dnt throw chappals at me........

So here's the next part..........

Part 10

Naku's eyes fall on the image of her face on the glass door n she realizes she's in her true self n Dutta realises it too.......she looks at Dutta worriedly.........Naku tries to speak when Dutta interrupts her...........

Dutta: Naku......agar tujhe nahi batana hai to mat bata........mereko koi phark nahi padta tu kali hai ya gori......tu hamesha meri Naku hi rahegi.......meri sabse achhi dost......
(hamara gadhhe ko akal aagayi.....)

Naku: nahin sahib.....mereko aaj sab kuchh batane do........me pehle bhi batana chahti thi......par Aayi ke bajay se ruk gayi.....

Naku starts her story as Dutta patienly hears........
Naku: sahib........sabke liye khubsoorati bardan nahi hoti.......mere jaisi ke liye to woh abhisaap hoti hai......me ho to janm se hi manoos hai.......

Dutta: tu aisa kyun bolti hai......tu kabhi manoos nahi ho sakti........

Naku: nahin sahib......me sahi boli.....isiliye to meri paida hote hi meri aayi beghar hogayi.....

Dutta: beghar???

Naku: han sahib......beghar......Ganpat baba mere asli baba nahi hai........mujhe to apni asli baba ki sakal tak yaad nahi.......unhe dusri beti nahin chahiye thi.......

Dutta: dusri beti???

Naku: han dusri beti......meri ek tayi bhi thi......mere baba aur aaji ne mere paida hote hi meri aayi aur hamein ghar se nikal diya......dekha sahib.....kitni manoos hai main.....me sach mein hi Nakusha hai.... tears roll down her eyes as she speaks.......Dutta wipes her tears n says......

Dutta: aisa mat bol Naku......mere liye tu kabhi nakusha nahin ho sakti.......mere liye yeh bas ek naam hi hai.......

Naku: aapke liye na sahi.......dusro keliye to hoon.......jab meri aayi raastein par besahara bhatak rahi thi......tab hamein ganpat baba mile......woh hamein ghar le gaye.....mere liye hamesha se wahi mere baba hai.......phir hum khushi khushi rahne lage.......dekhte dekhte bakt bit gaya......aur me badi hogayi.......meri tayi bohut sundar thi....basti ke mawali ladkon ne use behkaya aur unke baaton mein aakar woh baar mein nachne lagi......aayi pareshan thi....rokne ki koshish ki....par tayi nahin mani......baba ko to paisa bha gaya.....

Dutta: phir kya hua???

Naku: phir woh hua.....jisse meri jindagi hamesha ke liye badal gayi.......tayi hamesha ke liye hamein chhod kar Dubai chali gayi.....aayi bohut dukhi huyi.......tayi jane ke baad woh bohut dar gayi......aur ek din usne mere chehre par yeh kaalik lagadi......mujhe pata tha.....aayi pareshan hai......isliye maine use nahin roka.......

Dutta: Naku......tu kaisi ladki hai.....apni aayi ke liye ita kuchh saha.......

Naku: aayi ne bhi to mereko itna pyaar karti hai......sahib.....meri aayi woh dar sach bhi hua.......Morey bankar......woh mereko Dubai mein bechna chahta tha.......aayi ne use ek aurat ko marte hue dekha tha.....jiski beti ko woh pehle hi bech chuka tha......phir hum wahan se bhag nikle.....par usne hamra pichha kiya......aur phir aap mile........bas yehi hai meri kahaani.........

Dutta is touched by Naku's story.....he's thinking about the pain......Naku must hav undergone.......he wants to hold her...hug her n say.....he'll never let pain touch her anymore.........
Dutta: Naku......tere liye mere man mein ijjat aaj aur bhi badhgayi.......
Then doc comes n examines Naku......n allows them to go home......
On reaching PN......everyone is shocked to see Naku......Dutta tells all that......Naku had told her the truth n he doesn't want anyone to question her more......then he leaves for his room........AS further asks Babi n Babi tells her all n she assures Naku's safety n promise to find a good proposal for her........
Baaji goes to Dutta's room......n Dutta tells him all that Naku had told him......Baaji too is touched......
Baaji: hamari koyal....kitni achhi hai na.......usne apni aayi ke liye itna kuchh saha.......

Dutta: han Baaji......bohut achhi hai woh......

Baaji: (to himself) me sahi tha bhau.....naku aur tu ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho......me tum donon ko milake hi rahega.......

The epi ends on determined face of Baaji............
Pre- entry of a new family.......
Edited by swati2008 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome....
wonder who the new family is gna b? hpe its nt sum1 who wnts 2 marry naku...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

awesome....

wonder who the new family is gna b? hpe its nt sum1 who wnts 2 marry naku...

thanks dear.........yup.......its a new guy in naku's life........sorry........😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Just luved it Swati ...
I m so glad that naku told her story to Dutta & he didn't get angry at her ...
What .....a new guy in Naku life ..😲😲......Nahhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ....!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Just luved it Swati ...
I m so glad that naku told her story to Dutta & he didn't get angry at her ...
What .....a new guy in Naku life ..😲😲......Nahhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ....!😆

yup........a new entry n u r going to love him.............😆.......dutta doen't get angry......mere FF mein Dutta bohut understanding hai.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.. thanks 4 updating
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Posted: 15 years ago

enjoyed this part

hope u update soon...cant wait to see the new entry
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks Irika n marie........i'll update soon........

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