Tum bin jiya jaye kaise....NEW FF...Epi 6-Pg 19 - Page 9

Originally posted by: betty123

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Originally posted by: am_leo

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EPISODE-4

SCENE-1 (IN FLSHBACK) 250 METRES AWAY FROM PATIL NIWAS (INDIA)

Naku is walking on d deserted road thinking abt her first meeting wid dutta, her entry in patil niwas her touchy-wouchy scenes wid him n is walking unknowingly lost in her thought wen she finds sumone following her. She recover her senses n finds herself in an unknown place. She is now scared about her surrounding wen she finds a couple of rascal behind her. She walks faster n dey follow her.

1^st man:- koyle ki khan se aayi ho kya....

2^nd man:-.kahin se bhi aayi ho.....hai to ladki hi na.......(*he stares at naku from head to heal n den stops her way*)....itni bhi jaldi kya h ........thodi der humare sath bita lo...........

Naku is frustrated n starts running . Dey follow her speaking sum nonsense .Suddenly naku trips n falls on d ground. She finds one of dem arriving near her from d opposite side of d road. She doesn't know wat 2 do n moves bak. Just den a car came in between d man n naku ,stops dere for a sec n moves on. His eyes follows d car n wen it return 2 naku he finds no one dere.

SCENE-2 IN RUPA'S HOUSE(U.K)

Naku is sitting helplessly on d floor. Now dere r no tears in her eyes t pain is still clearly visible.

Outside d house a car stops n sum one steps down .D girl is wearing high heels n black midi . She walks in n sits on her couch .One of her attendants gives her a glass of water n says-" Mam naku tai aayi h."She just moves d glass away from her lips ....n gave d attendant a sharp luk. She gets up n says:- naku kahan h'??

Servant:- upar h tai........vo band kamre ki chabi lekar gyi h........bohot preshan lag rhi thi...ro bhi rhi thi.......pata nhi kya baat ha..........

She gives d servant n angry luk n says:- jitna poocha jaye utna hi bola kro ........vo meri behen h.......use naku tai nhi naku madam bolo..........ab mera muh mat dekho jao yahan se

Servant nods her head n goes.D girlclimbs d stairs n moves 2 d room were naku is sitting helplessly. She luks at d pic on d wall n yells" Naku..........

Naku recovers her memory n turns she says:- Rupa tai.......ap kab aayi.

Rupa;- tu yahan kya kar rhi.....ye karma tune kyun khola.........jo yadein beet chuki h use baar baar yaad kar ke khud ko takleef kyun deti h'.

Naku;- dard...takleef .....ye sab meri zindgi ka hissa ban chukka h tai...........(she sobs).........main ye sab yad nhi karma chahti par zindgi mujhe phir she unke paas vapas le jana chahti h.........main jisko pyaar karti hoon usko dhoka nhi de sakti..........

Rupa is confused n she says :- tu kya bol rhi h mujhe kuch samajh mein nhi aa rha.....theek se bata kya baat h.........

Naku tells her abt Mr.Rao n dat den says:- Mr. Rao chahte h ki wapas uske ghar mein usi tarah jakar rahoon aur unhe arrest karne mein help kro........unka kehna h ki ye project mere career ke liye bohot achcha h ........main unhe kaise batao ki main aisa nhi kar sakti.........(she sobs).

Rupa too doesn't like d idea of naku 2 go bak dere bt she insist naku 2 go dere cause of her personal reasons .

She says :- Naku tu apne ateet ko bhool chuki thi .......phir tujhe ye kya ho gaya h........tu apna farz nhi bhool sakti.......main janti hoon kit u Dutta se pyaar krti h par in do saalon mein kya use ek baar bhi teri yaad aayi'........kya usne ek baar bhi tumhe dhoondne ki koshish ki'..

Naku knows dat her sis is saying d truth bt she don't know d complete truth.

SCENE -3 (IN FLASHBACK) PATIL'S NIWAS

Babi- na jane ye naku kahan chali gyi h......Naku......kahan h tu re......naku

Kala- kya hua mausi??

Babi- tai wo naku na jane kahan gyi h........usi ko dhoond rhi thi

Servant-babi apko koi bahar bula rha h..........

Babi- mujhse milne kaun aaya h..........

Kala is also confused bt she goes widout much interest.

Babi goes out n is shocked 2 find Rupa in front of her.She takes her on side n Rupa yells at her for doing wrong wid naku.....

Rupa:-ab main naku ko le jar hi hoon aap sab se door .............

Babi tries 2 stop her bt she leaves.........

Babi says 2 herself:- meri naku uske sath chali gyi.........ab main ghar mein sabse kya kahongi........??

SCENE 4-IN RUPA'S HOUSE

Naku doesn't know dat Rupa has met babi on dat very night 2 tell her dat Naku is wid her. She thinks dat along wid Dutta her family also don't cares for her. She remembers how Rupa has saved her from d rascals on d marriage d n since Naku was quite upset so she brought her home. Naku told everything 2 Rupa n Rupa coz of her selfish reasons asked her 2 stay wid her tillsumone calls for her. But none came to search for her since baabi made an excuse In d house dat she had gne to liv wid her Grandma for sumtime.

Naku was heart-broken n den after 1 month she met her Sis hubby Vivek who was IO at dat time n now is an ACP. He trained Naku for 1 year 2 make her fit n healthy .He knew abt her past bt is unaware dat Naku luvs Dutta. He is not clever n selfish like Rupa bt he also wants Naku 2 return 2 india n help him catch Dutta.

Suddenluly d bell rings n Rupa opens s door. She is not at all pleased to see d guest . Rupa saya:- Mayuri tum.........(*wid n artificial smile*)

(u can imagine dis gal mayuri as tina dutta or ichcha of uttran)

Mayuri is a bubbly girl. She is wearing a maroon midi .She is a chatterbox bt hav gr8 affection wid naku'..After naku came to UK she has been her best frnd. She is quite clever n knows d motives of rupa'.

Mayuri- hiiiiii tai.........mujhe pata h ki aapko mera aana bilkul nhi pasand par main kya karo'..naku k bina mera mann nhi lagta...Aapko artificial smile dene ki zaroorat nhi h.....main bas thodi der me jar hi hoo.'tai aapko pata h ki hum India jaa rhe h....OMG!!!! main itni excited hoon........Tai maine suna h ki ganagster bohot handsum hote h.....

Rupa is bore of her convo n she makes n excuse n den mayuri goes to Naku

Naku is still very upset n mayuri cums dere

Mayuri:- Naku...naku naku.........hum ja rhe h India......tumhare pyaar ko pakadne...........socho kitna achcha lagega jab tum kahogi........aapko apni hathkadi mein dekhkar bohot achcha lag rha h.....(she jumps into a nearby couch).......Haye kitna Romantic scene ...........

Naku stares at her n mayuri change her word;- I mean .........woh Gadha jisne tumhe dump kiya ..........usko hathkadi mein leke u will feel gud aur waise bhi''.

Naku knows dat she will cont her bakwaas so she interrupts in d middle:- tera wahan kya kam h..Sir ..........tumhe kyu bhej rhe h wahan''

Mayuri:- Are haan mai to tumse pooshna hi bhool gyi......Mr.Rao keh rhe the ki Dutta ka koi dost h.......batao kaisa dikhta h'......cute,sweet,hot'...........jaldi batao?

Naku:- kaun dost'''

Mayuri:- Uska naam kya tha.......main bhool gyi.........jo bhi tha main usko patane ke liye jar hi hoon''.

Guys in dis part no tasha'.bt I was getting sumone for Baje .hope u like it. Ignore d spelling mistakes plzz

Rejerved 😎

Edited:

Awesuuuumm Parttt betziee!! It soundss reallyyyy realistic!!
Updateee tonightt warnaa.. 🤣

lol it was really sweet....dutta ka dost..(cute sweet hot) 😃 hihihi..aisa lagta hai ki hum sab ka dil dutta se uth kar baaji par agaya hai..aaj kal baaji ki kuch zyaada hi tareef horahi hai..afterall he is gonna be our saviour in getting tasha together.. 😊...thanx 4 updating!!!do cont. soon

Originally posted by: 92icycool

lol it was really sweet....dutta ka dost..(cute sweet hot) 😃 hihihi..aisa lagta hai ki hum sab ka dil dutta se uth kar baaji par agaya hai..aaj kal baaji ki kuch zyaada hi tareef horahi hai..afterall he is gonna be our saviour in getting tasha together.. 😊...thanx 4 updating!!!do cont. soon

very good🤗i really really like it..!👏👏

nice part dear..............loved it..........so a girl for baaji........😉😉