Tum bin jiya jaye kaise....NEW FF...Epi 6-Pg 19 - Page 11

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SCENE-1 MUMBAI AIRPORT, INDIA

Mumbai is a city of Dreams. People from all over India come to Mumbai wid many hopes n dreams bt not all of dem bcum successful n rich. D airport is quite busy. Dere r people who r new in Mumbai , high spirited wid lots of hopes n desires , Dere r young gals n boys wich r returning to dere hometown after sufferings n pains knowing d reality of dis city of dreams. Amidst this rush of Mumbai two beautiful gals move out of d airport bt dey aren't here to fulfill dere dreams bt hav different aim.

Mayuri is beautifully dressed in a white skirt top wid goggles .Her hair r open n now luks uncombed after d journey .Her face clearly express how excited she is. Wid her kajrare eyes , she examines d whole area den she luks down on her wrist watch n says "Naku ye car abhi tak kyun nhi aayi" n den she turns to naku.

Naku is luking very pretty in her sky blue long skirt n stoll .In her high pony , her face luked sweeter bt her eyes lacked d spark wich Mayuri has. She was familier wid this city. She had spent her whole life in one of its district. Her eyes bcame wet bt she turns to Mayuri n says "Car aa gyi "

Both of dem settles into d car.

Mayuri:- Its lovely.........yeh cite kitni achchi h na..........ab hum kahan jayege???

Naku nods n says :- pehle shayad hotel jayenge phir Sir ne kaha the ki wo call kr ke batayenge ki kya krna h...........

SCENE 2 TAJ HOTEL , MUMBAI ( INDIA)

Naku n Mayuri enters d magnificent hotel n rushes towards d reception. After taking d key dey went into dere rooms. Naku n Mayuri both get ready n den dNaku moves towards Mayuri's room. Naku is bak in her black makeup......... She knocks d door of Mayuri bt finding it open goes inside ..........Mayuri sees naku n yells as if she had seen a ghost.

Mayuri:- Naku tum aise rehti thi...........no wonder bachche tumhe dekh kar dar jate honge..............

Naku just smiles n den she notices Mayuri.........her luks hav been changed .

Naku:- Mayuri...........tu desi girl kaise ban gyi (she is shocked to see her in shalwar-suit)

Mayuri:- Dekho na maku..........inhone kaise dress diye h...........kitni weird lag rhi hoon main..................aur theek se chal bhi nhi paa rhi hoo...........

Naku laughs n says:- Mujhe ye batana h ki main gaon se aa rhi hoon to tumhe bhi to villager lagna padega na.........miss universe lagogi to bhanda nhi phoot jayega..........

Both of dem laughs. Suddenly sumone cum in n says dat he has been sent by dere boss to explain to dem how dere plan to meet Dutta will b executed. He explains everything to dem n complete his sentence by saying:-Aakhri baat……aapke paas gun hogi par usko use abhi mat kariyega……..apna cell phonebhi yahiin chod dijiyega ...........n meet me here after one week.

SCENE 3 OUTSIDE DUTTA NIWAS , INDIA

Baje is on car just ready to drive it off wen aayi sahib cums n says" Baje mujhe mandir tak chod dega"

Baje :- ho aayi sahib ............aap baithiye

AS n baje occupies d front seat wen sumone says "RUKO"

Both of dem turns to see who is dere...........Dutta Shree Ram Patil is dressed in his black suit n navy blue shirt........dere is no smile on his face neither dere is any trace of happiness in his eyes.............if sumone unknown luks at him he will feel Dutta is angry bt for AS n Baje it meant he is in his normal mood. Gals wud better dscribe him as HOttt n for boys he is handsome n powerful.

Dutta cums near d car n says" Baje main bhi chalta hoon" n widout any more convo he sits on d bak seat...........

As d Kali mandir arrives Baje stops d car n AS moves out. Now both of dem proceeds .

Both of dem arrive a market place nearby where as per d plan Naku n Mayuri has been waiting for dem. As soon as d car came to d view a stranger came to Naku n says "Mam wo log aa rhe h aap log tayyar ho jaiye"n points towards d car..........Naku follows his finger n after 2 years she sees Him. An unknown smile came to her rosy lips n she felt to hug him tight n tell him how much she luved him. Bt d time gap hav changed her completely .She knows dat her purpose to come dere is now different. Wen dese civil strife was going in her mind , she felt someone's hand on her shoulder. It was Mayuri.

She said:- Naku..............tu theek h na.........(in a friendly tone)

Naku:- haan I m fine..........dekho wo black car aa rhi h na .........usme hi peeche sahib baithe h.................i mean ............ah............

Mayuri:- samajh gyi............wo Dutta h ...........rite ( Naku nods in approval)..........haye sachme he is so handsum........no wonder tum usko dekh ke uspe flat ho gyi par ab jao..........tumhe yaad h na kya krna h.........

SCENE 4 IN D MIDDLE OF A STREET, MUMBAI (INDIA)

D black Ferari was running on d road wen sumone cums in between d road. Baje gets disturbed by d sudden presence n applies d brakes. Though d car touch her slightly ,Naku pretends to faint.

Dutta:-kya hua Baje..........???????

Baje:- Ye saali ladki log ko bhi chalna nhi aata h........horn bhi sunayi nhi padta........ab shayad gir gyi h............

Dutta nods n Baje says:- bhao..............mai abhi dekhta h ki mamla kya h.............

Now it was Mayuri's turn to make her entry. But poor Mayuri didn't kno dat d one sitting on d driving seat was Baje...............Naku has forgotten to tell her dat along wid Dutta ,Baje is also dere ..............whom Mayuri was supposed to impress

Wen Baje was abt to open d door Mayuri pulls d door out n says:- bahar aao

Dutta n Baje both r stunned. Baje cums out n Dutta opens his window.

Mayuri:- Ae driver andhe ho kya.............itni badi ladki tumhe dikhayi nhi deti...........

Along wid Baje d crowd around him is also taken aback at her words. Who wud hav dared to talk to Baje like dis. BAJE RAO is himself a big gangster.

Mayuri:- Ab ye ghoor kya rhe ho...........bolti kyun band ho gyi............andhe k saath goonge bhi ho kya .............

After saying dis she moves her hand in front of his face to show him dat she is present infront of him.

It was Baje's turn to speak:-...........ae tu janti nhi main kaun hoon...........

Mayuri:-................achcha driver ji batayi aap kaun h.........aap pradhan............pradhanmantri k bete h.........(correcting her Hindi)

Baje:-............. ae ladki tu bohot bol rhi h...........tu is ki lagti kya h

Mayuri:- ..........kuch bhi lagti hoon...........tumse matlab............( she moves towards Naku n says)............dekho meri dost ko kya ho gya .............main is sheher me nyi hoon kahan jaongi ise leke.................

Dutta n Baje r still unaware dat d gal is Naku. Dutta calls Baje n orders him sumting.

Baje :-.........achcha chal isko hospital le chalte h...........

Mayuri:- haan..........yhi theek rahega..........Main Naku ko akele kahan le jati .........(pretending to b worried )

Baje hears dis n he cums in front n sees Naku n says:- Ye to apni koel h.........e ladki tujhe kahan jana tha...........

Mayuri:- ..............Mujhe .............Patil Niwas jana tha.............

Baje asks Mayuri to sit in d car n den takes Naku and puts her on d back seat wid dutta .

Mayuri:- ...........are ye kya kar rhe ho ............wo behosh h ............gir gyi to............tum usko theek se letao..............

Baje den puts d head of Naku on Dutta's lap. Dutta who was all d time luking out of d window now notices sumone on his lap n turns to see her. He sees Naku......he feels dat silence is spread all around dem...........he can feel d wind blowing............. He felt dat he has got d treasure wich was lost n a smile came to his face . He luks up to Baje n Baje says:- Bhao............lagta h Naku apne gaon se aa rhi thi.............

Baje hav not comleted his words wen Mayuri began speaking....."......haan hum gaon se hi aa rhe the.........Achcha aap Dutta bhao h........Naku apke bare me bohot batati thi……"( she continues speaking n Baje starts d car n proceeds towards Patil Niwas.......

Dutta luks at her again , he can still feel d innocence n sweetness on her face. She was still black but attractive . Dutta wanted to take his eyes away from her but an unknown bond doesn't allowed him to do so . Naku who was all silent n was pretending to b fainted was delighted . She hav never thought to meet him again like dis . Wen Dutta luked away , she found it to b a golden apportunity n opens her eyes to catch his glimpse ..........

(*background tunes*)

kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai
kuchh ajnabee ehsaas hai
kuchh dooriyaan nazdeekiyaan
kuchh hass padi tanhaiyaan
kya ye khumar hai ya aitbaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad
kya ye bahaar hai ya intezaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad

Naku is all wid tears in her eyes ..............she remembers dere first meeting

kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai
kuchh ajnabee ehsaas hai
kuchh dooriyaan nazdeekiyaan
kuchh hass padi tanhaiyaan
kya ye khumar hai ya aitbaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad
kya ye bahaar hai ya intezaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad

Dutta felt dat sumone is luking at him . He luks down n Naku shuts her eyes. His hands automatically went down her hair, making Naku feel shy...........He moved his hands down her cheeks. Naku takes a deep breath...........

kuchh saaz hai jaage se jo the soye
alfaaz hain chup se nashe mein khoye
nazar hi samjhe ye guftgoo saari
koi aarzoo ne hai angdaayi li pyaari

Dutta suddenly cums out of his thought n luks away, moves his hand away...........n if closely seen , his eyes bcame wet. Naku again slowly opens her eyes. A beautiful smile came to her fame. She saw him again . She wanted to hug him tight n never leave him..............lost in her beautiful thught again , she closes her eyes...........

kya ye khumar hai ya aitbaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad
na inkaar hai na iqraar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad

Baje was driving wen from d rear view glass ,he got d sight of Mayuri. Her lips still moving in her bakwaas. Her eyes sparkling wid an unknown joy...........He felt sumthing for her . he smiled ..............

kehna hi kya mera dakhalna koi
dil ko dikha dil ki shakal ka koi
dil se thi meri ek shart ye aisi
lage jeet si mujhko ye haar hai kaisi
yun hi khumar hai kyun beqraar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad
jaadu sawaar hai na ikhtiyaar hai
shayad ye pyaar hai
pyaar hai shayad
pyaar hai shayad

kuchh khaas hai kuchh paas hai
kuchh ajnabee ehsaas hai

pyaar hai shayad
pyaar hai shayad
yahi…

Wen Baje was lost in D eyes of Mayuri suddenly she said "Driver aage dekho"n he applies d brake making everyone on d car unstable. Dutta tried to protect her .His hands went round her waist to protect her. Naku now realized dat he cares.