Tum bin jiya jaye kaise....NEW FF...Epi 6-Pg 19 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg betty u r an amazing writer honestly enjoyed it 2 much👏😃update soon please n ur tasha scene was just mindblowing
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana786a

omg betty u r an amazing writer honestly enjoyed it 2 much👏😃update soon please n ur tasha scene was just mindblowing

thanx sana..........finally u read it........me ijj sho glad u liked it😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
good i didnt read for a long time...cause then i could read all together😆
ITS MAST😉😃keep going !🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: newbe

good i didnt read for a long time...cause then i could read all together😆
ITS MAST😉😃keep going !🤗

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thanx madzie................will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGGG betzzieee!! Whatt a completelyyy beaauutifuull parttt jaaan!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

OMGGG betzzieee!! Whatt a completelyyy beaauutifuull parttt jaaan!!

thanx cindy...........hope u like d next one also
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Posted: 15 years ago
here goes my six th epu hope u like it
EPISODE 6

SCENE 1-IN FRONT OF D PATIL NIWAS

The black Ferari stops in front of d Patil Niwas .Baje Luks at Dutta who is lost in his thoughts n says:- Bhau ghar aa gya......

Dutta who is still unable to understand d sudden appearence of Naku nods n luks at Naku. Mayuri n Baje cums out .He was abt to go n pick Naku wen Mayuri calls him.

Mayuri:- ........mera samaan uthao driver.......

Baje:- aur Naku ko tu uthaegi.......(he smirks)

Bt Mayuri doesn't want Baje to interfere btween Dutta n Naku. She wants Dutta to fall for Naku as soon as possible........She pulls him in

Baje:- ..........bhao main 1 min mein aata hoon........

Saying dis he leaves.

Dutta cums out . His left foot resting on d tyre of d car. Den he turns n luks inside .He waits for sumtime n den he himself takes her to d room........he picks naku in his arms wid gr8 care not to hurt her in any way.....he holds her hand n puts dem round his neck...........n den he steps in.......

SCENE 2- A ROOM IN PATIL NIWAS

Naku is lying on d bed. Dutta is standing near d window wid his hands folded. Wid d arrival of a slight breeze a amile spreads on his face......he had so many griefs dat only d breeze,d rain, d sunset gives him sum happiness.....

Den baje n Mayuri steps in n its easy to understand dat dey r still arguing......

Mayuri:-...........driver tum jao apna kam kro.........(to Baje)

Baje:- ...main tumhe driver kis angle se dikhta hoon........

Mayuri moves round him n luks at him from head to heel.....n replies:-

Har angle se...

Baje is irritated n says:- Bhao ...ise bata ki main kaun hoon.......ye edi mera sir kha rhi h......

Dutta who was showing bellicosity till now says:-.......ye mera dost h Baje.........driver nhi.......

Mayuri is baffled ....she now gets it dat Baje is d one whom she has to impress.....

Mayuri thinks to herself:- OMG!! isko kaise impress kro......

n den says:........mujhe pata nhi th.........maafi saheb..........lekin Baje bhi koi naam hota h....mujhe Salmaan Khan ke gane ki yaad aa gyi.........DHOL BAJE

(she sings a few lines to make it clear)

Baje becomes furious n says:- ........ae tu bohot bol rhi h...mera naam ka mazaak mat bana.........tera kya naam h haan?????

Mayuri:-,...........mera naam h MAYURI.....( she says wid pride)

Now it was Baje's turn to tease her:- ......achcha to koyal ki dost Morni.........(N laughs )

Mayuri:- morni nhi.........Ma-yu-ri.........( she becums red wid anger)

Baje :- are Mayuri ka matlab to morni hi hota h na.........

Naku who is all d time pretending to faint cant control her laughter n giggles .......All eye follow her voice...............

Mayuri sees dis n makes n excuse:- uski tabiyat theek nhi h.....wo sneeze kar rhi h shayad.....

Naku suddenly pretends to sneeze n dem cums bak to her senses. D smile on Dutta's face dissapear .After two long years tasha hav an eye-lock session..........till Dutta feels awkward n luks away...he orders sumthing to Baje n den after sumtimeonly tasha were lest in d room..........Dutta steps toward d bed n den at a metre distance he stops.

Dutta:-.......itne dinon tak kahaan thi.........

Naku luks down:-...........wo saheb ........main.......apni........wo nani ma........

Dutta :-.............itni kya jaldi thi ki meri shaadi ke din hi jaana pada............

Naku:-..........sahab .......wo unki tabiyat .............theek.....n..nhi ........thi

Dutta:-.............do saal tak kisi ki bhi yaad nhi aayi.....koi phone nhi kiya........

Naku doesn't kno wat to say.Dutta also understood she is telling lies......

Dutta:-.......agar tum nhi batana chahti to mat batao par jhoot mat bolo..........

Saying dis he moves out of d room. Naku tries to stop him bt she herself knows dat she dont hav any excuse .......

Later Baabi cums running in . She is in tears. After losing her second daughter too she was hopeless.......now she was so happy. She luked like d happiest mother of d world.......

Baabi:- tu theek h na meri bachchi.......

Naku:- .........tere bina kaise hoongi aayi.....

Dey both hug eachother n den aayi tells how much she was afraid wen Naku was nowhere in d house ...she tells her dat Rupa came to inform her dat Naku was wid her.Naku becumes shocked. Rupa never told her dat she went to baabi...

Naku:-............mujhe laga aap sab mujhe bhool gye h .isliye mujhe dhoondne koi nhi aaya.......

Baabi:-.......nhi meri bachchi.....main tumhe dhoondti ........par yahan ka mahol aisa nhi tha

Naku:- aisa kya hua tha aayi........

Babi tells her how Dutta discovered dat Supriya luvs Ravi while she was trying to escape n how Dutta punished dem by getting dem married....

Naku is all stunned .Her heart fills wid pity...........

Edited by betty123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
love it- update next part soon.. i can wait 2 see what happens nxt btw naku and dutta
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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb Betty ...👏
Luved the nokh jhok between baji & mayuri ..
nw w8ing 4 more TaSha scenes ..
update soon ..!

Edited by Dew-drop - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part betty..loved the scene between baji and mayuri..update soon

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