* Lambi Judai- FF* Chap-21[Page 44]* - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
um, we have been tuned..you tune your fingers and start posting the next chapter!! can't wait!!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yea!! Continue Soon ! 😳 😳 😳
Dii, i told you not to say that again.. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: .::Kittu::.

Yea!! Continue Soon ! 😳 😳 😳
Dii, i told you not to say that again.. 😳



Yeah, I know kittu, tht was not today, tht was day before yest..😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks all you guys, will continue in a day.. 😛
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Chap 12


Mihir and tulsi reach Lonavala the next morning and enter the guest house..they ask for Ganga and saahil…the manager says they are taking rest and show mihir and tulsi, their room..
Rishabh has Tripti tied up in the warehouse…she tries and struggles to free herself…in a corner of the little room, she sees some uncut metal plates and tries to inch towards them..she falls from her chair and drags herself to the metal plates and first successfully gets the rope off her feet, and then she starts to cut the rope off her hands, but she hears some foot step, thinking, that if it's rishabh, and might kill her if he found out she was trying to escape, she runs back to chair, hides her feet in her saree and sits there like nothing happened. A man enters the warehouse and sees her tied up…Tripti looks up and is shocked…

Ganga wakes up in finds Saahil sleeping while sitting by her side, holding her hand, she slowly wakes up without disturbing him, and puts a pillow behind his head..as she starts to get out of the bed,her pallu gets caught in Saahil's watch…she tries to free it, but in vain, in the tug , Saahil wakes up..and sees Ganga trying to free her pallu. He gently picks the stuck side, unhooks it off the watch and takes the pallu and puts it around her shoulder, and on top of her head…Ganga looks on shocked…Saahil breaks her silence..
S: Ganga, hamein Police station chalna hoga..
Ganga suddenly remembers all that happened the previous night and staggers and sits on the bed..Saahil sits besides her and consoles her..Ganga rests her head on Saahil's shoulder and closes her eyes…
S: Kaash yeh saab sapna hota..
G: Meine bhagwan ka kya bigada hai…kyon wohh meri zindagi barbaad karna chate hain..
S: Hamein aaj police station jana padega..
Ganga gets angry and stands up
G: Mein kahin nahi jaungi! Kuch nahi hua hai mere lakshya ko….and she struts out..


KT wakes up and finds Ekalavya sitting by the window..looking at her…
Ekalavya, concerned , walks upto her, and she looks at him scared…memories of her horrible past suddenly blinds her and she screams…ekalavya moves back stunned, and tries to calm her..the doctors come in and tell Ekalavya to leave, he walks out and feels sad and embarrassed…He looks inside to a sedated KT and swears, he would bring her love back…


Rishabh goes to the lot that everyone was bidding for..rishabh waits for the clients and after a small wait they arrive..The client team walk upto Rishabh and shake hands..
R: Hello sir
Client: Hello Mr.Rishabh..
R: Kaisa laga apko mera proposal
C: Well, hum kafi khush hain proposal se, but hum Ganga Industries ke ane ka wait karna chate hain..
R: Arey wohh ab nahi ayenge..apne suna nahi..unka kafi bada ghata ho gaya..unho ne, is proposal se withdraw kar liya hai…apko nahi bataya?
C: Kya? Unho nein, withdraw kar liya aur bataya tak nahi? Kaise business karte hain yeh log!!
R: tabhi to, apko yeh contract mujhe dena chahiye..
C:Well, aap yeh plot dekh lijiye, mere managers tab tak apke contract ko dobara pad lenge…


As Rishabh is about to give his proposal file..someone comes from behind and stops him.The clients turn to look who it is..
He turns towars the Clients…putting his hand forward for a shake and says…
"Hello, Sir, Mein Lakshya Virani huin,I am representing Ganga Industries, Der ke liye maafi chahta huin…"

(To be continued)

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Posted: 17 years ago

MERA LAKSHU IS BACK!!!!🤗

please continue soon!! loved this part, so much suspense!!😳and also even more cuz my babebu jaanu lakshu is back!!☺️

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Posted: 17 years ago
yah lakshya is back [:D/]
nice part but was short
see u have spoilt us with very long parts earlier
love the suspense
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desigrl05

MERA LAKSHU IS BACK!!!!🤗

please continue soon!! loved this part, so much suspense!!😳and also even more cuz my babebu jaanu lakshu is back!!☺️



I know sweetie, couldnt keep you sad any more...😆😆😆, I'm writing another one....I will probably start a L-KT one someitime laters..😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangel786

yah lakshya is back [:D/]
nice part but was short
see u have spoilt us with very long parts earlier
love the suspense
continue soon



Awww..sorry about that...I was busy and tired...so wrote a short one..will write a big one by Sunday...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: coolkitty_23



Awww..sorry about that...I was busy and tired...so wrote a short one..will write a big one by Sunday...😃


no problems take ur time
the parts are always worth the wait

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