**Pyar ke liye** LK ff UPDATED p#7 pg5!!! - Page 2

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-Larz- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thnks alot for lovely comments next part will be up soon!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's gr8 continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RECAP:
~~~~ the doctor tells lakshya that kt cant survive more ~~~~ 😭


PART 2:

Frndz…in our ff, nakul n sanjhi r already married to each other…

The doctor goes back to his cabin n lakshya follows him…
L: doctor…aap ka kya matlab hai ke kt aur survive nahin kar sakti??
D: Mr. lakshya…baat yeh hai keh aap logo ne bohat deir kardi hai!!
L: doctor sahib…seedhe tarhaan baataye ke baat kya hai…
D: Mr. virani…aap ki fiance ke paas sirf 9 mahine hein…
Lakshya is confused!!! ?
D: Ms. KT ko stomach cancer hai…
Mirrors break…lots of dramatic music… lakshya is shocked… n the convo is heard by sanjhi…
D: aur woh bhi akhiri stage hai!!!
Sanjhi n lakshya…both r damn shocked!!! ????? sanjhi cums in…
S: doctor…liken yeh sab kab hoa!!
D: unko kafee arse se cancer hai liken unho ne us ko seriously nahin liya
S: liken doctor is baat ka hum mein se kisi ko nahin pata tha aur nahi kt ko khood pata tha
D: shayad kt ko nahin pata ho liken un ke saath kabhie koi symptoms tuh hoye honge…
L (while crying): liken doctor... stomach cancer ke symptoms kya hein??
D: stomach cancer ke karan bhook kam lagti hai…chhoti chhoti baat par tension hoti hai aur chakkar bhi ane lagte hein…
L (remembers n says to sanjhi): bhabhi…yeh sab tuh kt ko bhi hota hai…
Lakshya cries even more…sanjhi consults him n
S: doctor…kya is ka koi elaaj nahin?
D: elaaj tuh hai…lken woh 1 saal (year) ka course hai jis mein pure ek saal treatment hota hai aur woh bhi America mein…liken kt ke paas tuh sirf 9 mahine hein…
L: aab hum kya kareinge??
S: bhagwaan par bharosa rakho lakshya…humara kt ko kuch bhi nahin hoye ga…


The scene moves to the waiting room outside kt's room…nurse cums n

N: aap mein se lakshya kaun hai??
L (stands up): mein hoon…kyun?? Kya hoa??
N: aap ko patient bola rahi hai


Lakshya goes in…he sees kt who is full of tears… n she is holding lakshya's photograph. Lakshya moves forward n sits on kt's bed…beside her…

KT: kya hoa lakshya? Tum ro kyun rahe ho? (making him realize that nothing's wrong)
L (thnks that kt doesn't noes the truth…so he wipes his tears): kuch nahin…bas aise hi
KT: lakshya…tum mujhse jhoot nahin bol sakte…mujhe pata hai ke mere paas waqt bohat kum hai…mein marrrrr
Just then…lakshya puts his hands on kt's lips n stops her from saying that shes gonna die…

L: tumhe kuch nahin hoga kt…
KT: hum sach ko jhotla tuh nahin sakte liken us ka saamna karke hum moth se bhi jeet sakte hein
L: liken kt…yeh kaise…?
KT: achha…tum mere marne se pehle mera aur apna woh sapna pura karoge na??
L: kt…aisa ho sakta hai ke tum kuch bolo aur mein na karon? Liken mujh mein itni hemmat nahin hai ke mein yeh akaile karon
KT: tum akele nahin ho lakshya…aur mein marne se Pehle tumhe is dunya ka sabse successful businessman dekhna chahti hoon…
They both hug each other…lakshya n kt, both pretended that the death of kt isn't effecting them but when they hugged each other…lakshya, on one side, n kt on the other, cry very badly…

OK all…this was the end of part 2…wait up for part 3 n plz don't bash laraib (Eijaz-anita fan), Aliya nor me, hoor, for causing kt have a stomach ache…there r lots of surprises in store of this story…so do read the next part which will also be written by ME!!!!!!! ?

Love,
hoor 😳


Edited by miss honest - 18 years ago
-Larz- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
no comments..?? 😕

Laraib!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
I commented on ff sections!! it is great!!👏👏

Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!😛😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
RECAP:
~~~~~ lakshya n kt discover that kt is suffering from stomach cancer… ~~~~~


PART 3:

Next morning…birds chirping… sun rising…blah blahh blah…
Lakshya brings kt back from that hospital… he takes kt to her room…makes her lie on the bed n leaves…but kt holds his hands n makes him sit next to her…suddenly, she hugs lakshya as tight as anything…lakshya gets her back to her actual position

L: kya hoa kt (as she is crying)
KT: lakshya…mein itni jaldi marna nahin chahti thi…mujhe aur jeena hai
L: tum fiqar math karo…tumhe kuch nahin hoga
Tulsi enters n says
T: thakur ji par bharosa rakho kt…
KT: liken baa…
T: bas…tum is bare mein sab bhool jao
KT: khushi tuh is baat ki hai ke mujhe apni taqdir se kuch zyaada shekaitein nahin hai… bhagwaan ka shukar hai ke mujhe sab ka pyaar milla…aap jaisi baa…sahil papa jaise sasur (I noe that l-kt aren't married but she is his fiance so…), ganga mom jaisi saas (tripti has left n ganga has returned), nakul bhaiyya jaise jaith…sanjhi bhabhi jaisi jethani aur lakshya jaise jeevan saathi… liken is baat ka ghum hai ke mujhe lakshya ka pyaar abhi milla tha aur abhi hi mein mar rahi hoon…
Lakshya n kt again hug each other… tulsi leaves…

L: aab tum aaram karo…mein change karke aata hoon

He goes to his room…opens his wardrobe to change n guess wat??? There r loadz of kt's giant-sized pictures sticked in his wardrobe…he touched one of them n
L: kyun kt…mujhe chod ke kyun jaa rahi ho??
A voice cums from the door of his room: sambhalo lakshya
That's sanjhi…
L: liken bhabhi…
He hugs sanjhi (as a bhabhi)
L: aisa mere saath hi kyun hoa??? Pehle ganga mom ne saath nahin diya aur aab jab woh is ghar mein wapas agayein hein…tuh kt mujhe chod kar ja rahi hai…
S: lakshya…tumhe in haalaat mein kt ka sahara ban na chahiye na ke tum khod umeed chood do…

It turns dark n its night…every1 is in the living room including lakshya n kt…every1 is upset

KT: aap sab plz itna parishaan math hoye…mujhe marne mein abhi 9 mahine hein tuh plz….
T: Krishna…aab aisa plz math bolna
KT: theek hai baa…
Kt goes to mihir
KT: dadu…mein chahti hoon ke kal humare ghar mein bohat hi bari party ho jis mein mein apne ghum bhool kar, enjoy karo
M: liken kt beta…apki tabeit
KT (trying to cheer up every1): uffo…meri tabeit ko chodre…kya aap mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakte???
She goes to tulsi, ganga, sahil, karan, baa to aks the same question "kya aap mere liye itna nahin kar sakte" n finally…tulsi agrees to her demands…
T: kt ki khushi ke liye…kal humare ghar mein bohat bari party hogi
Kt gets happy to make others happy but lakshya is still very upset…all of them go to their repected bedrooms…kt is crying n she remembers her moments spent wid lakshya which were: when they felt from the mountain…when lakshya puts his hands on kt's mouth in haridwar…when lakshya makes her eat the dhokla… when they danced in the EID special epi…
On the other hand…lakshya is even thinking abt kt…
Soon…they both sleep wid each other's picz in their hands…

So…that was the end of part 3…wait for the next part which I bet u all that it'll be very romantic!!! Hope u all r liking our ff (apart from the disease thingy)

Love,
Hoor
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
so that was part 3...just wait for the next part!!!
hope u all r liking aliya's, laraib's n mine, hoor's, ff!!!

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hoor
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
amazing fanfic Hoor & laraib 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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luv your ff guys 👏 last part was v.sweet 😭 update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

HERES PART 4



RECAP:
~~~~~~ kt forces every1 to host party for her sake n it is the very next day ~~~~~~

PART 4:

Next morning… every1 is busy for the arrangements of the party…lakshya goes to kt who is in the kitchen
L: kt…mein…
KT: lakshya…mujhe bohat kaam hai
L: liken mujhe tumse bohat zaroori baat karni hai
KT: tuh jaldi bolo
L: kt…mujhe heart ki problem hai…
KT: haan haan!!! Tum mujhe ollo banao
L: nahin kt…mein sach bol raha hoon…
Kt gets sudden shocked n starts to cry which makes her a lil dizzy…she falls to the grns but lakshya holds her in his arms…he shakes kt but she is faint… then he takes her to his room…drops some water on her n
L: arre…mein tuh mazaaq kar raha tha!!!
KT: lakshyaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!
L: sorry bhaiy…mein ne socha ke tum mujhe bhool hi gayi ho tuh is tareeqe se tum mujhe attention to do gi…liken tum tuh behosh ho gayi…
KT: lakshya!!!
L: sorry!!!
They both hug each other…

Its party time…guests r coming….n slowly… SN is getting full… in kt's room, she is changing…she is wearing a very beautiful n tremendously outstanding, pink n sky blue garara as the theme of the party is EASTERN… lakshya cums in her room who is wearing an exceptional cream n brown sherwani wid maroon dupatta (the 1 which guys wear)… he goes to kt who is trying to lock her necklace. He ties it for her…turns kt to face him…
L: hmmmmm…ek kammi hai
He takes her kajjal from her eyes n puts it next to her ear…
L: aab theek hai…
They both cum closer…closer…closer n sanjhi enters…
S: ahem ahemmm…yeh kya ho raha tha
L: woh bhabhi..
S: bas bas…tum dono ko neche log bola rahe hein…
They both go down…

Kt is wid pari, archita, sanjhi n bhoomi…while lakshya is wid mathan n abhir… bhoomi is getting bored bcoz there is no music, dance or masty…
B: yaar kt…mujhe bohat boriyat ho rahi hai…
KT: bas…thoda aur bardaasht karlo
B: achha, yahaan kissi ko kuch pena hai…mein drink line jaa rahi hoon
S: haan…mere liye plz orange juice le ana
A: mere liya bhi…
B: kt, tumhe kuch nahin chahiye
KT: ummmm, mere liye apple juice le ana
B: chal pari…

They both go to the counter…bhoomi adds some powder to kt's juice
P: arre bhoomi di, yeh kya kar rahi hein
B: chup rehna bas…kt tuh itni boring aur upset ho gayi hai tuh usko zara cheer up kar rahi hoon…
P: liken yeh hai kya
B: kuch nahin…bas ek powder hai jis se thode chakkar ate hein aur phir, everything is perfect…
During these talks…bhoomi poured a lot of the powder
B: oops…
P: aab kya hoa?
B: woh…baton baton mein…maine thoda zyada powder daal diya
P: watt?? Aab kya karen
B: don't u worry…hum yeh kt ko denge liken kuch bhi kar ke…usse pura nahin pine denge
P: ok
They both go to their group… kt starts to drink the juice…
P (whispers to bhoomi): kaise roke ge kt ko?
B: woh tum mujh par chod do
When kt was abt to finish the glass…joydeep called bhoomi so she forgot abt stopping kt…
P: bhoomi di…kt ne pura pe liya
B: oopss…tum nahin rok sakti thi kt ko?
P: aap hi net uh kaha tha keh aap
B: chal chodh…kuch nahin hoga…

The party was abt to get finished…suddenly, kt felt a lil dizzy…lakshya saw her so he went to her…
KT: lakshya…mujhe bohat chakkar aa rahe hein
L: don't worry kt...
He takes her to her room…he makes her lie on the bed…he sits next to her…
KT: lakshya…tum mujhe chodh kar tuh nahin jao ge
L: nahin kt…
Suddenly…light goes out…lakshya gets u to check that wat was wrong but kt holds his hands…pulls him closer to her… n now…lakshya is lying on kt… the light really goes out…
Next morning…sun is rising…birds r chirping…blah blahh…
Kt wakes up n guess wat????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????? she finds lakshya, sleeping next to him!!!

THIS PART WAS WRIITEN BY MISS HONEST !!


So…that was part 4…to find out wat happens next…read part 5 which would be written by laraib!!! Hope u liked part 4!!!

Do comment
Love
Laraib!! 😳

Edited by eijaz-anita fan - 18 years ago

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