Kismat Ka Khel- M-A's Rishta pg 4

This story is gonna be abt Manthan Virani who is a sppoilt brat and thinks :If u have money you can do anything, if u dont have money everything is impossibe for u"/ He doesnt respect his elders and has no respect towards middle calss/lower class people either even if those people are his Aunt, Uncle, cousins, grandparents, etc... Also he doesnt believe in marriages,ot love but later of destiny brings a girl in his life who changes his life and living style totally. Right now all Manthan cares abt(besides himself) is his Mom and sis Bhoomi but when "The girl" comes in Manthan's life, he will start caring/respecting EVERYONE!

Hi Guyz

I am starting a new fan-fic on Manthan(played by AMit tandon ofcourse) and u can already see that his characteris way too similar to the one kyunki. This fan-fic will have almost the same charaters, people from Kyunkii. But the story will change in this next 5-6 parts. I hope u guys liked my intro and if u r looking forward to my fanfic then plz post ur comments and tell me how u liked my intro. Also if u guyz have any suggestions abt the Fan-fic then feel free to PM me and also tell me who would u want the girl to be who changes manthan's life!!!!!.

I need atleast 10-15 comments in order to start my fan-fic.😛.. and if there are 10-15(or up) comments then 1st part will be up by tomorrow Inshallah.

Go head and write your fsn fic

wow realy plzzz start love to read 😃

Love Leena 😉

yep! cant wait to read it 😃

buddy...once u start writing the story, i am sure u will get more comments...

PS - waitin eagerly for u to start

go ahead but don't make us wait for ages for updates 😃

go ahead..this sounds goo!! can't wait and your intro was awesome!!

First Part

Manthan-KT-Laksh at the breakfast table.

Manthan yawns: oof.. ow many "gawar" people are in this house?(he meant KT ofcourse)
KT just ignores him.
Manthan: Waisey, I am happy that ur not getting married to Eklavya bhai.
KT-Laksh looks at him. KT stares and Laksh smiles.
Manthan continues: Not because I care for ur happiness or anything Miss Gawar. U see he is rich and everything and if u got engaged to him then his property.....
KT cuts him off: MR, Manthan Virani....
Manthan: Attitude!
KT: U no what? I have better things to do then to lissen to urninsense.
Manthan jerks: Yeah. Better things such romancing with our Kisna.
Nakul comes.
Nakul: It is her life. Let her romance if she wants. Why r u interfering.
Manthan: Aik larki aur uske peeche teen larke?
Guys I dont see anything attractive in this gawar girl that all 3 of u-Laksh,Nakul,Eklavya bhai are falling for her and going against me..
Manthan makes a sad face.
Nakul: You..
KT: Just get lost Manthan.
Manthan: Watever. It is my house and ur telling me to get lost?? My foot.
Nakul: yeh ghar jitna tumhara hai utna humara bhi hai.
Manthan: Oh yeah? Prove it.. U guys stay here like bikahari's.
Nakul: 😡 😡 😡

Guys I hope u liked this part.. Plz comment.

Preview: "The girl" enters....

I liked it!!! I think he is going to do the same thing in the serial if by any chance lakshya and kt gets married. anyways Do continue with your fantastic and mindblowing FF!

if only u were the script writer of kyuki