Kismat Ka Khel- M-A's Rishta pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yepp...sure will love to read it... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooh sry i had not seen the part...its nice...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
great fanfic cant wait for the next part 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Second Part

It is night time.
THe phone rings.
KT picks it up.
"Hello"
"Hello"
"Who is this"
"KT.. Who are u?"
"omg... KT... How are u???"
"I am good.. who is this?"
"acha ab shaadi kya honey walli hay key tum mujhe bhul gaye?"
" AlishaaA?????????"
"Haan...yaar tum to bahut chupa rustam nikaley..ur abt to get married and u alreadt got engaged and u dint even tell me or invite me!"
"I am sorry, but u just dissappeared. How could I tell u? i didnt have ur phone number, and idiot ur blaming me? u never visit me"
"Sorry yaar. Tell me when do u want me to visit u?"
"right now"
"ok.. then just turn around."
KT truns around to find her school best friend there.
KT runs to her: Alisshaa...
Alisha hugs her.
Tulsi comes.
Tulsi: arrey alisha.
Alisha takes aashirwaad.
Tulsi: Jaoo. i am not talking to u.
Alisha: kyun baa?
Tulsi grabs her ear: kyun ki bachi. Itney sallon tak kahan gayab thi?
Alisha: Sry baa... I will make sure that doesnt happen again.
Tulsi: It won't. Ur Maa called and she told me ur going to stay and India from now on.. She told me to dour rehney ka intazam and I told her that U will stay with us from now..
Alisha: But baa...
Tulsi:No buts... U have to stay here and thats final.
KT: yaayy...
Alisha: Lekin...
Tulsi: Alisha!
Alisha: Ok baa, as u wish.
Karan comes there and sees Alisha there.
Karan:Ma, who is this?
Tulsi: arrey karan, remember abhay? Abhay Walia?
Karan: abhay.. Yess..
Tulsi: This is his alisha..abhay's daughter.. remember she used to come here when she and bhoomi were kids and they used to play together..... Kuch yaad aaya?
Karan: haan maa..
Tulsi: and alisha, this is ur fav uncle... karan uncle.. remember?
Alisha: yes baa, I remember him very well.
Alisha takes his aashirwaad too...
Karan: I am angry with u?
Alisha: Why ru all angry with me? and she makes a sad face.
Karan: tumhari yeh aadat abhi tak nahi gaye...
Alisha: 😉 sry uncle.. this won't happen again.
Karan: ofcourse it won't since ur going to stay here from now on...
Alisha jokes: ok.. waisey uncle, so many years paassed and ur still the same.. I mean aap budhe kyun nahiin hoey?
Karan jokes back: hmm I donno... Meine aapne aapko bahut fit rakha hai.. wat say 😉?
Alisha: Uncle 😆
Alisha: baa i will get my stuff tomorrow and right now i should go bk to my hotel room.
Tulsi: No.. its very late.. u r staying here from today...
AlishA: but I dont have any cloth....
Karan: Bhoomi sey ley lo ar usse mil bhi lo.
Alisha: ok
Alisha goes to bhoomi's room. Bhoomi is reading a novel..
Alisha secretly goes in there and puts her hands oon bhoomi's eyes.
Bhoomi: what is this? who.... 😡
Alisha: Guess.........
Bhoomi: .... it takes a few mins for bhoomi to guess... Alisha...
Alisha: yes.... and they both hug...
Bhoomi: omg I always missed u..
Alisha: yeah right lagta to nahiin hai... aapni shaadi mein bhi nahhiin bullaya.
Bhoomi: can we not talk abt that?
Alisha: ok...... they talk and alisha goes to her room later.

Morining...
Most of the ppl like Damini,Gautam,Sahil, Tripti,Mohini,Tanya, Savita dadi, mihir dadu(the 1st and second generation basically)already no Alisha...
Tulsi introduces to her to the 3rd generation kids...

Everyone at Breakfast table.
Manthan comes and Tulsi introduces alisha to him and she tells him how alisha is friends with KT...
Manthan: aik aur gawar...
Alisha: What???
Manthan: ab tum bhi iss ghar mein free mein rehne aa gaye ho...
Alisha: excuse me? mr.... wat ever ur name is... AS far as I heard tum bhi iss ghar mein free mein rehte ho.. its not like u pay for any bills or do anything or work...
Manthan: My dad....
ALisha: what ever... I dont care... And it would be better if u mind ur bussiness... ok? and leave me alone...
Everyone iss stunned cuz of the way alisha talked to manthan... No one has ever dared to talk to him in sucha way esp if that person was a guest..
Tanya and Karan to themselves: Sirf Alisha hi manthan ko sahi rastey par laa sakhti hai 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guyz plz tell me if u dont want me to cont then i won't but i need to know 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg this is great, plzz post the next part soon i cant wait 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushibushi

make it more interesting

dont worry dear.. My fanfics always start off boring😭.. but i will try to make it interestinggg!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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those are all the comments I got? 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I LOVED IT....your intro was so good and your first part was fantastic and the second part was again fantastic and plz do contuine part 3 really waiting to see it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next Part.
Manthan is sleeping in his rroom when he hears this really loud music coming from an another room
Manthan sleepily: Ahh,, what is thiss?
He gets up and goes to the room.. He opens the door and sees alisha in that room.
Manthan jerks: Turn off the music, I was sleeping...
Alisha: Dont u have any manners? Knock before going into someone's room.
Manthan: Whatever, THis is my house...
ALisha: DOn't u get tired by saying that every second?
Manthan: Just shutup. I said turn off the music, its distracting my sleep.
ALisha looks at her watch.
ALisha: Its 2 pm and u have been sleeping since....
manthan: just mind ur own bussiness and do as ur told.
and he bangs the door and leaves.
ALisha to herself: Agar kal meine tumhe 7 bajje nahiin uthaya na to mera naam bhi Alisha nahiin.
And she gives an evil smile.

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