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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
awwwwwwwwwwww no comments.. i guess u ppl didnt like it.. itz k...anywayz here iz nxt part
PART 19
baa iz in her room praying.. the only wish she made 2 thakurji waz lakshya n kt togetherness...
while she waz praying... sumone touches her feet....
baa looks down...
It waz MANTHAN...
M: baa aapp itni quiet si kyun rahati hai...
Baa:(looks at manthan n hugs him tightly) kya huwa... mein theek toh huan...
M: nahi baa aap kuch chuparahi hai... kya aap yeh shaadi seh khush nahi hai....
Baa iz lost in thoughts... she didnt knoe wat to say....
M: ek minute baa... i think i hv an idea...(.he runs to his room...leaving baa confused)
he cums bak withan album....
Baa: arre yeh kya hai
M: aapko toh deekha hi nahi nah..... yeh meri aur kt ki engaement kah album hai...
baa: (smiels) oh...dekkha muhje....
M: only on one condition....
baa: kya
M: aap promis karo keh aap phir smile karehgi
Baa starts laughing, " pagla"
M: baa meinai abh thodi kaha... bad mein...
manthan puts on a kute smile....
baa n manthan flip through pictures... baa looks dissapointed by lookin at kt's sad face
there waz this really kute manthan n kt pic...
manthan takes da pic ott of da album... n p[oints it to baa
M: yeh dekho... kitna kute pic hai nah
Baa: (giving a 5000watt smile) haaan
M: lekin ek problem hai...kya aapne kuch notice kiya
Baa( starts toworry): kya
M: isse aalbum mein seh aisa ek bhi pic nahi.. jismein kt hasse rahi hoo... shee seems very sad n frustrated in every pic... paata nahi...
baa interupts...
baa: arre manthan.. ladkiya hoti hi aise hai... engagement thi.. kitne sare log... all the attention on her.. dat y woh zara ghabara gayi hogi.... vaise tum toh janteh hona... kt already ek shyly kinda girl hai... aur isse engagement mein toh kitneh sareeh people thee... oh bohot nerovous hogayi hogi...
she paats manthan's shoulders...
manthan looks up at her...
M: hosakta hai.. lekin baat kuch aur hai...
baaa really gets freaked out
Baa(thinking): abh kya bataon beta tumhe.... arre thakur ji... mere betao ko protect karo... mere toh lips sealed hai vaaddai seh... lekin aap toh koio bandhan mein nahi nah.. plz.. mere manthan, lakshya aur kt kah sahi decison make karo...
manthan then shakes baa...
M: arre baa kaha kho gayi aap...
tears roll down baa's cheeks.. manthan wipes them...
M: aap roh kyun rahi hai....
Baa: kuch nahi sirf tumhareh dadaji (baa's hubby) yaad aagayi thi.. kash woh yaha hote....
manthan hugs baa.... sweetly...
baa: tu kuch kaheraha tha nah..
M: (suddenly remembers) oh ya... patah nahi kuyun muhje aisa lagta hai keh.. kt muhje pyaare nahi karti... aur shaadi nahi karenah chati...( looks into baa's eyes)
baa's face turns pale.. she looks down in silence...
Baa: (gettign up) manthan tu pagal hoga ya hai..bilkul pagal...
she leaves....
manthan still in baa's room.. wonders...
M: kuch nahi jawab diya....
his thoughts r interupted by archita...
A: bhaiyya jaldi neechai aaoh.. sangeet shuruh horaha hai...
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end of part 19
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
PART 20
DOWNSTAIRS....
da hall(living room) iz decorated with beautiful flowers n carpeting... there are beautiful decorations.. made for the weddin.. takin place...in 3days///
everyone iz downstairs.... da entire family... besides baa.. she waz inher room....
D: (to archita ) chalo yeh sangeeta kah program shuru karoh nah...
A: ok chachi...
archita n pari get up on a lil stage thing...with a microphone
A: ladies n gentlemen... now v r about to start da sangeet.. very soon..so can everyone plz settle down....
pari barges in
P: yes.. girls on rite sde... n boys on left....
they wait for eveyone to order their selves....
A: NOW hum program chalu karengai.... rules are very simple....one side starts with a song... n da other side hv to respond with a song ending with da same sound or letter...sooo... lets start....
P: fromda gurls team... our bride-to-be kt will start n from guys... our respondent will b our groom-to-be Lakshya... ( lakshya n kt both look at them angriely.. )sorry our apologies i mean MAnthan will start
M: (lil shock expression) noo noo.. not me... i cant sing...
A: manthan... dunt b a spoil sport
M: noo. i wdunt wanna start... i'll sing later... i want lakshya 2 start from our side...
L: bhaiyya y me...i dunt wanna...
Damini: stop arguing.. onme of u start
M: i m older den u soo u hv 2 listen to mee.. u'll starts...
Lakshya smiles n agrees to start

will continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
Ohh I liked it! but it's sort of sad. 😭 😭 I hope kt tells everyone, and then will she marry laksh after that? I really want to know what happens next. I missed your part on friday but i read it today.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
yeh freat fanfic just make sure its a happy endding! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
the last three updates are very sad
i hope its a happy ending
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
i am guessing tht kt will sing n tell tht indirectly she likes lakshya.iz tht wht u r gonna do?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
hwy guys... glad u liked it...!!! ummmm.. u knoe how my last part waz abt sangeet n alll dat....
soo i waz jus wondering how wud i create n image of them singing n dancing..... shud i jus like write the songs dat they wud sing or wat... or shud i jus...skip da whole antakshari part.....

like wat do i doo?????????????????????????

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
erm jus write the songs that they sing :D 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
That Will be good as we can then picture the scene Thanks Rani712! i luv the fanfic!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
Part 20 (continue)
At Ganga's place
ganga's secretery waz sorting through the mail...
Ganga cums out of sum room
G: wat r u doin....
GS: jus checking if thr were any important mails while we were in singapore
G: ohhh ok...
ganga goes into her office...
the secretery picks up a wedding invitaion card from the virani family...
she goes to ganga's office
GS: ma'm... thr is a wedding invitation for u from the viranni's...
Ganga waz doing sum paper work... she stops the paper work in warm smile...
G: oh ya... open it n read it...
Gs: alrite...
the secretary opens the card.. n reads
Gs: MRS. TULSI VIRANI N MR.MIHIR VIRANI REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE TO GRACE THE AUSPISIOS OCCASION OF THE WEDDING CEREMONY OF THEIR DAUGHTER KRISHNA TULSI TO MANTHAN, SON OF MRS. TANYA VIRANI N MR. KARAN VIRANI TO BE CELEBRATED ON SATURDAY, 20 MARCH 2007 AT 3;00PM
AT THE VIRANI RESIODENCE , SHANTI NIKETAN.

a shock appears on ganga's face....
she asks the secretary to re read da invitation....
but same thing....
G: wat r u reading its suppose to be lakshya son of sahil viran n ganga, i mena tripti virani....
she snatches the invitation from da secretary's hand... n re-reads it soo hopefully da secretary wud b wrong... but no... she waz rite... kt waz getting married to manthan....
ganga quickly gasps... n gets into the car... leaving the secretart confused...

wat will happen nxt...??will ganga stop the wedding.
continue sooon

rani

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